NihalP2+MuktiPrem ff last part pg14 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: raym

hey nice update cotinue s00n 😊

fankx..ur ff is really nice..n u're commentin on mine crap..omg..can't believe..really nice of u..fankxx

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: haajra

nyce update continue soon 😛

fanxk for ur lovely comment..n plzz..keep up ur courage on me..lol..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
poor nihaal i feel so bad 4 him his mums probably gonna try 2 get em with kasak n dat 2 jus 4 kasakz share of property 🤢 update soon with sum PM n NP2 romantic scenes 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
hey great part!
plz cont. soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandy07

poor nihaal i feel so bad 4 him his mums probably gonna try 2 get em with kasak n dat 2 jus 4 kasakz share of property 🤢 update soon with sum PM n NP2 romantic scenes 😳

don't worry i'll try my best..and fankx for liking it..n for ur comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitborn2win

hey great part!
plz cont. soon!

Thank you very much and will try to contnue soon..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey congrats...ur ff is in on popular topic n hoope it goes on d same way..n fankx for ur comment..n plzz update soon..can't wait..till wat happne next?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzz put some romantic scenes of nihal and p2 in next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fankx..there will be..m busy dese..days..i'll continue..soon..so plzz bear with me
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 12

BASU HOUSE PARTY

Everyone is enjoying the party. But prem is pissed off because Mukti haven't arrived yet. Prerna comes near to prem who is wearing Red georgette sari with light makeup who looks sexy and beautiful.

P{to make him angry}: kya baat hain?..ap enjoy nahin kar rahain ya phir kisise gussa hain?

Prem(annoyed): mom plzz..stop taunting me..aur ap dad ke paas jayiye..i guess he needs ur company(looking at anurag who was quite busy with guests and tryin to get out of it)

P(smiles): haan tu theek kehera haan hain..acha mein chalti hoon aur mukti ayi toh mujhse milana..

Kasak, Prerna, Nihal and mukti enters with their parents excluding Prerna's. Prerna Basu feels strange as they step to the Basu house

A: kya baat hain prerna..tum tense lag rahin ho

P B: batanai anurag kuch ajeeb sa meheshoosh horahaan hain.jaisiki koi kareeb ne awaz dee hon.

A(smiles): kyun nahin komolika jo agayi hain..

Prerna smiles and goes to meet komo and divayana and rest of the members. Anurag and prerna busy talking with divayana and komo abt something who keeps looking at where mukti and prem were.

Prem: yeh waqt hain aneki?

M(holding her ears who looks so adorable): sorry..tumari liye sajne mein type laga.

P: So, do I care?(turns around)

M(turning toward him): baap re..tumara gussa toh jaisi nakh mein hon(laughs)

P: shutup Mukti aur mujhe ek pal k liye mukti dedo..ok..

N(cuts in): kya baat hain? Tum dono kyun ladrahain ho?

P: ask ur sister..uske stupid baatein..

M: c'mon prem tum ab naraz hona band karo..aur nihal humari bhahiji kahaan hain? Tum akele dikharahein ho?

P: haan vai..prernaji kahaan hain?

N(blushes and smiles): oh stop it..guys..who mohini dadi k paas hain..

Kasak comes there so everyone keeps silent. Kasak find it weird and asks: kya baat hain..sab mujhe ghoor kyun rahain ho?

P: wo ap kaphi khoobsurart deekh rahin hain..so may I have pleasure to dance with u?(to make mukti jealous)

K: sure..if mukti doesn't mind..kyun mukti(Mukti just smiles and they both leaves for dance floor)

M mimic: "may I have pleasure to dance with you" stupid

N: mukti it's just dance..don't b jealous

M: kya? Ab tum jealous hoge..prerna ko kisi aur k sath dance karte hue dekh kar

and turns his face toward prerna n guy dacing..Nihal goes straight between them and ask the guy to let prerna to dance with him.

N: kiske sath dance kar rahin thi?(bit crossed n jealous)

Pr: kyun jal gaye? Wo dadi ni force ki thi..n m so happy ki tum mere liye itna possessive ho..aww my sweet heart n press his nose

N: ahh..kya kar rahin ho..n why would I b jealous..i don't mind..prerna u can carry on wid him

Pr: mr. Bholu..ap ki chehre par puri dekh rahaan hain..aur ismein chupani ki baat kya hain..mein toh tumari liye bohut possessive hoon..

N(happy): really? So kiss plz?

Pr(blushes and lowers her eyes): nihal..sab k samne..nahin

N holds her hand: acha toh chalo mere sath and takes her somewhere,

It's quite dark and could see the moon rays on Prerna face which make her look more beautiful and sexy. Nihal kiss her forhead and cheeks, Prerna eyes closed, holds him very tight and was about to kiss his lips with passionate someone caughs which drags their attention toward it and part apart.

Prem: sorry closing his eyes with his palm..i swear I didn't see anything.

Prerna gets shy and blushes a lot that she leaves the room heading towards hall.

P: kyun buddy(pat on nihal shoulder)..kuch jyada romantic horayethe but sorry mein bich mein agaya..n laughs

N: c'mon..yaar stop it..acha chale? And leaves the room

Prerna comes running towards hall and gets bump into mukti, without seeing mukti as her attention was towards the room she came frm: Sorry!!

M: kya baat hain idhar dekho.main hoon

Pr blushes more: oh sorry..wo mein..

M smiles: kya wo mein? Acha chalo tumein kisise milati hoon

Pr relaxes and goes with mukti

M: ise milo kasak humari sabsi kareeb dost..jo abhi US se aya hain..kyun kasak

K: hi nice to meet u

Pr: same here btw m prerna, nihal tumari bareme bohut batein karta hain

K(cocking her eyebrows): really? Usne tumari bareme toh nahin bataya…jaroor kuch bat hain..kyun..(3 of them laughs n bck to mukit) mukti mein mom ko dekh kar ati hoon..and leaves

Pr: ach mukti mein vi chalti hoon, aunty uncle ko see off kane jati hoon bye..and hugs her

Prena goes toward prerna basu and anurag who was laughing at some conversation.

Pr: aunty mein ap chalti hoon…n thank for d lovely prty..aur ek bar phirse happy anniversary to u n uncle

A: fankx beta..

Pr B: are aise kaisi jaogi? Raat kaphi hochuki hain..mein prem se kheti hoon

Pr: are aunty nahin mein auto lekar chali jaungi(but prerna already called prem)

Prem: chale prerna? Ok mom I'll b bck soon. Prerna and Prem leaves so does everyone.

I know guys it was a bit boring..but I tried my best for PM and NP scene..but couldn't expand it more..so sorry

Edited by mujhi - 17 years ago

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