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hey gr8 update ...plzzz continue s00oon 😛
omg raym u saying dis too me..whose ff is so best...newa..fankx..n lookin forwar 4 ur na tum jano na hum..
omg raym u saying dis too me..whose ff is so best...newa..fankx..n lookin forwar 4 ur na tum jano na hum..
awww thankx sweetie😳....will update asap😃
by the way ur ff is really good....keep it up👍🏼
PART 11
thanks everyone for d comment..😊
Everyone resturn back to the house..prem goes to his house..and diyana and komolika are talking on the lounge whereas kasak n mukti are together at mukti's room
K: main kuch important batein karna chahata hoon....simply to say..mein nihal aur kasak ki baremein batein karna chahti hoon..tumara kya raye hain?
D{finks of kasak property}: kya (cm back on earth)..i mean wow dat's great news..magar kasak?
K: uski chinta mat karo..m sure woh dono ek dusre se pyar karte hain...are nihal agaya(who just walks in the lounge on his black suit with briefcase on his hand)
N(hugs komo): ap kaisi hain aunty?..n welcome bck home
K(ruffling his hair): m gd..aur jao apni dost ko milne..(divyana cuts in)
D: haan aur samalke..bohut naraz hain..btw woh mukti ki kamre mein hain..(k and D laughs..niihal goes to mukti room
Mukti's room
k(bit angry): ane do us nihal k bache ko..uska esa halat karungi...n wrestle with her both hands
M(sees nihal at back but doesn't say anygthing, just then nihal goes: BOOOHHH!! at kasak's ear. kasak get shocked and mad at him and gets cushion and start hitting him..to rescue him..nihal runs outside the room and all over the house.Divayana and komolika smiles..but their dog and cat fight continues and finally they reach outside the garden..
K(holding her breathe):..huuhh hhh..nihal..bas hogaya..aur jyada nahin..
N(holding his breathe aswell smiles: so how r u?(offers hug)
K(hugs him); theek hoon aur tum batao kaisa ho?
N(smiles):..gd..aur ab tak koi mila nai(cocking his eyebrows)..laughs
K: haan woh nihal kuch bat karni thi..just then his mobile rangs..
N: excuse!!..n picks up the call hey prem!!
P: hi..sorry to disturb u..woh mukti ka fone..ko kya hua.? i can't contact her..
N: low battery hoga..so..how's ur day?office join kiya?
P: not yet..woh mom n dad ki anniversary ki baad.hoga..aur tumlog kal time par pahuch jana ok..aur prerna ko tum apne sath lana plzz
N: hey don't worry we'll aur rahaan sawal uski(prerna) toh woh meri zimedari hain..and grins..ok bye..buddy
P:bye n smiles
N(looking at kasak): so kya kherai thi?
K: kuch nahin..andar chale?..m too tired..n they both go back to their house
After some hours
mukti who was passing by sees nihal at the room so she decide to pop in..
M: hey!! how's everything?
N smiles..just then mukti understand: so u two togther..n hugs him..m so happy for u..
N: main vi..aur pata hain..prem ne kya kiya..(mukti confused)..u won't believe usne kitni madat ki(he narrate everyfing abt he done-prerna job)
M(cherish): prem ne yeh sab kiya..wow..dat's unbeilievable..(bck to formal talk: aur batao..how's office?
N(yawn); gd..ab tum jao. m feelin sleepy..mukti gets up n about to leave..suddenly nihal calls bck: aur haan prem tumara fone try kar rahaan hain..so sort out ur fone..gd night n cover himself with blanket.
M: fankx vai..gdnight
Mukti is so happy about what prem had done..she found the perfect man in her life..not only one who loves her but someone who respect others feeling too..which she couldn't believe..prem used to b someone who use to mock people..but now he's her dream hero..she had smile on her face..
kasak waving her hand on air: hello!! kya baat hain..bohut kush lag rahin hain?
M(blushes):..woh..n smiles..acha kuch bat khene thi..mera aur(kasak cuts in)
K grins:samaj gayi..yeh bat mein high school se janti hoon..aur prem ne mujhe batadiya tha..buddhu
M: m so lucky to have..him..acha yeh batao tumara koi hain..i mean..jaisa mera prem hai?
K: ab kya kahoon..m in love..magar woh kambat meri taraf dikta vi nahin..he have ego problem..n laughs..
M🤔: matlab?..i mean did u tell him dat u love him
K: 😒 let's not talk about it..main use ek din bataungi aur tumse milaongi vi..theek hain?(smiles)..ok light off kardo..n gdnight..maine bohut thaki hooon.
M: ok..gdnight..
plzz guys..tell me how's it..n sorry couldn't have any romantic scene of pm and np...coz i've to put kasak track on it...hope u understand..n plzz leave comment on mine crap..imagination..lol
Originally posted by: nihalfan
nice..looking forward to see p n nihal
yh i'll try to ...n fankx..for ur comment