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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART9

Prerna and Ba

Ba: kya baat hain beta? tu kal se paresan lagrahin hain

P: kuch nahin ba(puts tea on cup)...yeh lijiye

Ba: mujhse kya chupana..tujhe mein jab tu 1 saal ki thi tab se jaanti hoon...bata kya baat hain?

P(tears on her eyes): baa..(cries)..and narrate her everything

Ba: bas..beta yeah jindagi mein maine bohut seen kasauti dekhi hain..mujhe thakur ji se poora biswas hain ki teri chehera par phir khusiya layenge..

P: ba..apvi na..acha mein chali result leni..bye

their landlord..comes in..and give evil looks to prerna..

L:kya baat hain bhagi jarehin ho..mere paisa kab donge?

P: woh..ba.

Ba: are beta bas 1 hapte ka waqt do..hum par reham karo beta

L: ey budia tera rona dhona khatam kar..samjhi agar 1 hapte par nahin mila toh chokri se kam chalalenge..kyun

Ba: kya kahaan?(yells)

L: jada goosa nahin..shaadi karunga..koi jabarjasti nahin..theek hain mein chala

Ba: thakur ji madat karoon..and cries..

P: ba ap phikar mat lijiye..jaisi heen result milega..mein nokri dhoondlungi..

College

Somewhere by the canteen

P(prem): hey buddy!! how's d result..

N: thik hain..aur tumhara..

P: uexpected..honestly..it's all beause of mukti and prerna..

N: yah..(worry)

P: hey don't worry..woh rahin prerna go n talk to her..(she was just passin by d canteen as it is d route to d result room..😆)

N(grabs prerna hand): prerna meri baat suno plz..

Pr(anger): haat chodo..ab khene k liye kuch baki nahin hain..just leave.me..

P: Guys chill! aur prerna just listen to him..yeh tumein bohut pyar karta hain

Pr: oh really? ab kausa game khelne wale hon? and leaves

N: prerna(she does listen to him..while she's leaving)..mujhe patahin nahin chala kab mein pyaar k natak karte tumse sach mein pyar kar betha..aur tumari beena jina kya(he gets a bottle n break it on d table n try to cut his nerves..sorry guys couldn't fink of any)

Pr(runs towards him and throws d broken bottle away): yeh kya kar rahain ho?

P: tumein kyun phikar hua?..tumto..(prerna cuts in)

Pr: manti hoon tumne mere dil ko dukhaya magar..yeh sab..m sorry nihal and hugs him

N(hugs her very tightly..Prem leaves smilin): i love u prerna..n kiss her..

Walks to the garden

prerna still looks worry..so nihaal: kya baat hain ap vi naraz hon?

Pr: nahin..aisa baat nahin hain..aur batao mukti kab arai hain?

N: woh kal..batao prerna baat kya hain(she tell him everyfin abt d landlord)..nihal gets really angry: kya saleh ki itni himmat..

Pr: nihal plzz ab kuch mat karna jise tumein koi dukh ho..

N: prerna magar..(prem just pop in)

P: hey guys sorry maine sab kuch sunliye..n i've an idea..if u r ready prerna

Pr: kya baat hain?

P: woh meri dadi ki ek charity house hain..uske liye woh ek employee dhoond rahin thi..if u r ok then i'll talk to her..

Pr: magar mein?

P: hey don't worry..philal k liye join karlo..phir baad mein badi si company join karlena..kyun?

N: not bad idea..agar mom hoti toh main baat kartha.meri company par.

Pr: fankx guys..aur prem baat job choti ya badi ki nahin hain..do u fink tumari dadi ko..

P: hey don't worry..tumein woh pasand agai thi..jabse tumari dance dekha.hain..and laughs

Pr: fankx..prem..agar mera koi vai hota..sahed tumara jaisa hota..(prem makes sad face..and he leaves telling her meet here tomorrow..at 7:00 am)

Pr(after he leaves): nihal maine kuch galat khediya ka?..woh prem

N: tumein sad honi ki jaroorat nahin hain..rahan..sawal..prem ka toh uska..koi behen..honi wali thi..patanai..kuch hogaya..nobody knows..hey u don't b sad..ab toh kam k liye ready hon..

Pr: haan aur tumari vi kal office mein first day hain..so gd luck..n hugs him

N: thanks..so chale?

Guys sorry no mukti and prem scene..but promise dere will b quickly..n hope u liked it..n plzz comment..

Edited by mujhi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
wow great update..of pr8..lovin it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hope dat kasak will not b btween them..and prem and mukti..can't wait..how mukti goin to react after knowing how he helped prerna.. 😳 hope dey have some cute scene..and plzz..make d kask gd..and dat komolika..omg..wat is she goin 2 do..n i fin prerna is prerna and anurag dauther..lol..hope so..n lovin ur prt 9 aswell..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that was a great update!!! plzzz continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
wonderful yar..i loved it!
plz plz update soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its a fantastic fanfic
i m enjoying it
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great news nihal p2 together. 👏 really happy for them. 😊 update soon.
Edited by namrita_434 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fankx everyone..i'll do it tomorrow..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwww Nihaal n P2 got 2gether 😳 i new it P2 is gonna end up bein Premz lil sis wonder how there goin 2 react when they find out their siblins 😛 lukin 4ward 2 sum PM scenes update soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 10

BASU HOUSE

Mohini: are mera boyfriend ko kya hua? oh haan..mukti ko miss kar rahaan hoga kyun?

P: dadi plz..(doesn't look alrigt)

M😕: kya baat hain beta?..n touch her hair..

P: dadi apko esa nai lagta ki meri behen aptak jinda ho.??

M: yeh kya bat kar rahaan hain?..agar prerna ne sunliya toh sab gadbad hojaya..puri..22 sal k ghau..jag jayega..

P: sorry..dadi..acha toh mujhe kuch jarori ri kam tha apse

M: kya kam hain?

P: woh apki charity office k liye meri nazar mein ek employee hain..if u don't mind..then?

M: kaun? aur mujhe aisi waisi ladki nahin chahiye.n laughs

P: nahin dadi..she's mom type..wohi ladki hain jiska dance apko pasand aya tha..remember?

M: woh haan prerna..theek hain kal lana..acha tu soja..kal milege..office par..(kiss on his forhead)

Morning at Charity office

Prem takes Prerna to charity house.

P: namaste!

M: namaste beta..betho..aur tu kahaan jara haan hain?

Prem: dadi woh mukti aur kasak delhi k flight se athehi hoge..mein airport chalta hoon..bye

M: theek hain..bye...bck to prerna.(look at her files) are bohut acha..record hain..so u r welcome..

P😃: sach..fankx.. a lot..kya mein apko dadi bula sakti hoon?

M: ek sart par

P: kesa sart?

M: tumein roj meri haton ki..parathe khane parenge..kyun?

P😆: theek hain..acha mein kab se kam suru karo?

M: if u can..aj se hi karlo..

Delhi Airport

Kasak sees mukti n screams: muktii..hiii..

M: hi n hugs her..aunty kahaan hain??

K: woh..(lookin for her)..are woh rahin..

Bckground music-dheen tana ki teeen dhin dhinakatin..nika..komolika.. nika..

Ko: kasi ho beta?

M: hugs her..achi hoon aur ap?

ko: main vi theek hoon..magar tumari mom kahaan hain?..fligt miss hojayega.

Divayan: mein yahaan hu.(hugs komo n kasak)..sorry woh ticket leni chalethi..toh chale..

Mumbai airport

k: are prem tum?

P: hey..kaisi hon?(hugs her)

K: not bad..aur tum?

P: mera kya khena..kisiko bohut miss kiya..

M: sach...ab toh theek hogaye hoge..kasak jo agayi..kyun?

P: hey..aunty..phechana?(komolika)

Ko: kyun nahin?..prerna ka beta jo hon..

D: acha chale..batein baad mein karenge..

P: are nahin aunty mein chalta hoon bye..

Everyone: bye..Mukti giving him..ishara..: mein phone karti hoon..bye n gives him flyin kiss.

Sorry guys it's too short..n couldn't have mukti n prem scene nor..nihal n prerna..but i'll try to do it on part 11..plzz..comment..

Edited by mujhi - 17 years ago

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