NA TUM JANO NA HUM pg83 NEW TWIST - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
awsome fanfic love the way Prem and Mukti fight continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
5th prt:-
na tum jano na hum.......pm ff 😳
PARTY TIME:-
MUKTI WAS SITTING ALONE ,SHE WAS BUSY WITH HER CELLPHONE SUDDENLY SHE WAS DISTURBED BY A VOICE!!
prem:-chu.....chu...bechari basanti, koi nahi mila irritate karney ke liye!!
mukti:-(looked up)app mujh se baat kar rahey hai.
prem:-nahi.....mai app se thori mai toh iss chair se baat kar raha tha.
mukti ignores him as he sat down in the chair nxt to her.
prem:-(prem looked at her) agar app ko problem na ho toh mai app ke sath beth jaoo??
mukti:-(mukti looked at him)why are u asking? jahan dil kaar raha hai betho,mujhe kya problem ho sakta hai,after all ghar tumhara hai,yeh party tumhari hai ,aur yeh chair bhi tumha.................
prem:-bass .......basss ....i am soory ,ghalti meri hai jo mai ne tum se yeh pocha,waisey koi partner nahi mila dance ke liye???
mukti(smiles):- yeh toh tum se pochna chaheye koi girl friend nahi hai?
prem:-(naughty way)ahh! basanti baat change maat karo,tumhe koi partner mila nahi ya koi tum mai interested hi nahi!!!!
mukti:-eeeey mr loozer u no i am beautiful aur tum jantey ho ke tum jaisey kitnoo ko mai reject kar chuki hoon 😉
prem:-(prem looked at her she was really looking beautiful to night)hmmmmmmmmmm theek hai i agree ke ajj tum theek thaak lag rahi ho,kafi efforts kiye hai presentable lagney ke liye 😎
mukti:- 😡 ohh!! stop it....aur tum mera time waste nahi karo jakaar party enjoy karo....jao koi stupied si larki dhondh lo dance ke liye...
prem:-(prem grabbed her hand) chalo phir lets danceeeee!
mukti:-ahhh!!! r u mad??? mei aur tumharey sath dance no way.
prem:-(smiles)darti ho basanti mujh jaisey hot lardke ke sath dance kartey huwey.
mukti:-darti...mai aur woh bhi tum se, hahahaha....mai iss baat se darti hoon ke mujhe hath lagana aasan nahi ,hath lagao ke toh SHOCK lagey gaaa 😉
prem:-accha phir toh try karna hi parey ga!!
prem took mukti 2 the dance floor
SONG:-CHORI CHORI CHUPKE SE AKAEY MERI
ANKHON MAI SAMAJA,CHORI CHORI
SAPANO KI SUNI SUNI DUNIYA SAJA JA!!!!
MUKTI NOTICED PREM WAS LOOKING AT HER N SIMILING!!
prem:-wow mukti i am really enjoying, tumhe hath lagana itna difficult nahi.....
mukti:-(mukti looked up)she was quite?
prem:-eey madam kya hua??
mukti:-(soft voice)premmmmmmm
prem:-hmmmmmmm
mukti:-passs aao 😉
prem:- 😲 haannnnnn
mukti:-aur pass
MUKTI CAME FORWARD AND WHISPERED IN HIS EAR:-
MUTI:-(soft voice)kuch hua kya??
prem:-naah......!!(prem was confeused)
mukti:-kuch bhi nahi??
prem:-na.....naah (in his mind oh! god yeh larki itna kareeb kyun aarahi hai plzzzzzz help meee!!)
mukti:-(mukti looked directly into his eyes)
PREM KUCH BHI NAHI HUA !!!!
PREM:-AAWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH(MUKTI STEPS ON HIS FOOT) 😡
MUKTI:-oh i am really sorry zoor se lagi
prem:-uffff !itna kareeb aanay ko kiss ne kaha tha.
mukti:-zoor se lagi nah (mukti loked at him n burst out laughing)good acha hua, maine kha tha mujhe hath lagao ge toh SHOCK lagey ga 😆 😆
prem:- 😡 u.....u..tum ne jaan kar mujhe maara i will kill u.....ab tum mujh se bacho....mad girl!!
mukti:-tum mujhe maarney aao ge toh mai chup raho gi.
prem:-huh 😡
mukti:-huh 😡
neev n prachi:-(they were already dancing)
neev:-bro kya hua
mukti:-kuch nahi hua tumharey bhai koh dance sikha rahi thi;
prem:-oh u shut up!
prachi:-ufff tum dono ne phir fight shuro kaar di.
mukti:-mai nahi sis yeh....yeh shuro karta hai
prem:-tumheY toh mai........
nev:-arrey tum sab chaloo yaar dinner serve ho gaya hai,common hurry up!!
mukti:-chalo....chalo!! 😆
prachi n prem followed them!!
2 BE CONTINUED,..........PLZZZZ COMMENT!!


Edited by raym - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
i want atleast 5 comment 2 continue
plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
oh man, this part was really funny
i was laughing when mukti said
"prem:-wow mukti i am really enjoying, tumhe hath lagana itna difficult nahi.....
mukti:-(mukti looked up)she was quite?
prem:-eey madam kya hua??
mukti:-(soft voice)premmmmmmm
prem:-hmmmmmmm
mukti:-passs aao
prem:- haannnnnn
mukti:-aur pass
MUKTI CAME FORWARD AND WHISPERED IN HIS EAR:-
MUTI:-(soft voice)kuch hua kya??
prem:-naah......!!(prem was confeused)
mukti:-kuch bhi nahi??
prem:-na.....naah (in his mind oh! god yeh larki itna kareeb kyun aarahi hai plzzzzzz help meee!!)
mukti:-(mukti looked directly into his eyes)
PREM KUCH BHI NAHI HUA !!!!
PREM:-AAWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH(MUKTI STEPS ON HIS FOOT)
MUKTI:-oh i am really sorry zoor se lagi"

it was really good. u should continue soon
by the way what is ur name?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
awwwwww thanks !
u always appriciate my ff,and
my name is RAHAYMA!

Edited by raym - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
hehe very nice update rahayma! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
thanks 4 the comment!!robin m 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
heyyyyy plzzz continue soon love pm dance!!!!!!!!!plzz plzzz plzzzzz continue soon can't wait for the nxt part!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
thanks umam!!!
i am glad u liked pm dance,dont worry i will
update soooooon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
6th prt:-
NA TUM JANO NA HUM.........PM FF 😳
AFTER THE PARTY:-
paro:-acha prerna ab hum chaltey hein,party bohat aachi thi
prerna:-thanks babhi!! yeh toh sab mukti aur prachi ki planning thi.
mukti n prachi:-thanks
om:-arrey prem kaha hai???
bajaj:-apney room mai ho ga i think thak gaya hai
paro:-ussey aaram karney dein ,chaloo bachoon.
mukti:-chaley mom mai bhi bohat tired feel kar rahi hoon,bye neev
neev:-bye,tum dono ko kal college ke liye pick karney aao ga late maat karna
prachi:-okay see u
AGARWAL HOUSE(LATE NIGHT)
mukti and prachi were lying on the bed!!!
mukti:-oh god!! i am tired........
parachi:-mukti
mukti:-hmmmmmmm
parachi:-dance floor par prem ke sath tum ne woh sab jaan kar kiya na......
mukti turned her face and looked at prachi!!
mukti:-sis mai tumhara matlab nahi samjhi???
prachi:-tum sab samajh rahi ho mukti, i know u r really smart,usseey tangh kyun kar rahi ho 😉
mukti:-(got up on the bed) tum ek baath decide kar lo sis tum uss prem 😡 ke side ho ke mere......!!!
prachi:-sideeeeee.......yeh side wali bath kaha se aagai, jo sahi hai mai woh keh rahi hoon.
mukti:-(teased her)hmmmmm par mujhey kuch garbar lag rahi hai,kahi tum prem ko pasand ......u know what i mean
parachi:-(angrily)oh shut up mukti!! tum kuch bhi bolti ho??
mukti:-ab mai ne kya kiya jo sahi laga woh bool diya.
prachi:-uffffffff!!mukti good night.
mukti hugged prachi:-owwwwww i luv u sis
prachi:-i luv u 2 stupid girl.
mukti:-(smiled)good night!! 😊
NEXT MORNING:-
prachi:-get up mukti!!!! jaldi uthoo,late ho rahey hai.
mukti:- 🥱 ummmmmm sis soney do na , itni subah kyun disturb kar rahi ho
prachi:-dekho mukti neev anney wala ho ga roze ussey tumhara wait karna parhta hai.
mukti:-ufffffff kaun keh raha hai wait karney ko tum dono jao mai college nahi ja rahi....!!!
parachi:-yeh bhi tum roze kahti ho ,last time keh rahi honn uthoooooooooooo.
mukti:- 🥱
parachi:-okay than.....mmmmmmmooooooommmmmmm
mukti opened her eyes and got up on the bed!!!
mukti:-mom ko kyun bola rahi ho uthi hui toh hoon.
parachi:-(laughed) tumharey sath aisa hi hona chaheye,ab change kar ke table paar aajao.
mukti:-okay sis tum break fast karo mai aati hoon!!
after 10 min mukti came down stairs,she walked towards dinning hall ,but she was shocked when she saw prem !!!!
mukti:-TUMMMMMM
paro:-MUKTIIIIIII
muktti:-(fake smile) naah!! mera matlab tha prem tum kaisey????
prem looked at her she was wearing red top with black long skirt(wow she is so beautiful.......naah prem kya soch raha hai yeh lardki pagal hai iss se door reh)
mukti:-excuse me!! mai app se baat kar rahi hoon
prem came out of his thoughts!!!!!!!!
prem:-haan...haan woh neev ki tabeyat thek nahi,toh uss ne kaha ke mai tum dono ko college drop kar doon.
mukti sat on the chair nxt to him!!!
mukti:-(fake smile) how nice!! tum ne itni taqleef ki.
paro:-chalo issi bahaney tum hamarey saath break fast kar lo.
prem:-(smiled)no thanks aunty mai kar ke aaya hoon!!
parachi:-acha par juice toh tumhey lena parey ga...
prem:-okay Tum keh rahi ho toh juice ley leta hoon 😊
muki:-(thinking)kuch garbar hai parachi kuch zayada hi prem ki care kar rahi hai.....hmmmm .....dekhney mai toh yeh sahi hai , i think parachi ke liye theek rahey ga..!!!
parachi:-chaley prem.
prem:-chalo,bye aunty
paro:-bye beta
mukti followed them!!!!
they drove 2 college (in the car)
prem was driving the car ,parachi was sitting nxt 2 him
and mukti was on the back seat(she was reading some book)
parachi:-wow!! prem tumhari car toh bohat zabardast hai
prem:-(smiled)thanks parachi dad ne last birthday par gift ki thi
prem noticed mukti!!!!!
prem:-miss basanti ajj bohat chup ho
mukti:-(loked up)hmmmm (smiles) actually prem mere pass itna time nahi hai ke tumhey aur tumhari car ko compliments dey sakho i think parachi kafi hai???
parachi:-MUKTIIIII
mukti:-(mukti looked at her)ab kya hua??
prem:-(laughed)tum kisi se sahi tareqey se bath nahi kar sakti.......hmmmmm!!!
mukti:-(looked at him) woh kya hai na jo jaisa hota hai mai uss se waisey hi bath karti hoon and by the way tum pyar ki zubaan samajhtey ho????
prem:-tum kabhi try kar ke dekho 😉
mukti(ignored him)HHUHH 😡
PREM:-tum dono ka college agaya
parachi:-thanks prem aur neev ko kehna hum shaam ko uss se milney aaey gey.
prem:-okay bye
mukti was about to leave just than prem grabbed her hand.!!!!
prem:-(smiled)atleast thanks toh bool doh
mukti:-(looked at him)thanks kis bath ka yeh toh tumhari duty thi
prem:-(confused)DUTYYYY?????
mukti:-haan!! ab hath choro mera
prem:-naah choru toh
mukti(evil smile)kaal ka dance bhool gey
prem:-oh mai toh daar gaya(he laughed)miss basanti mai tumhari kisi bhi dhamki se nahi darta.......
mukti:-okay baba thank you!! ab plzzz mera hath choro ,mai late ho rahi hoon
prem :-thats like a good girl !!! request kartey huwey kitni achi lagti ho, lo chor diya tumhara hath ab joa
mukti 😡 prem iss ka badla mai tum se ley kar raho gi ,just wait!
prem:-(winks at her)mujhey intazar rahey ga.
she turned and walked towards the college gate!!!
2 be continued....................... ❤️


Edited by raym - 17 years ago

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