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tina

@kvashishat

Voyager

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Posted: 17 years ago

#121

omg tat was awsome plz contnue soon

luv
tina

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sumayyah patel

@Patel 1993

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#122

don't worry, might be able to continue soon.
maybe 2day. just look out 4 the ff

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sumayyah patel

@Patel 1993

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#123

RECAP: Mukti's b-day celebration

Prem was shaking so much that he had to go out of the room 4 some air. Taking a bottle, he left the room. Mukti and the others saw this and smiled (but they didn't see the bottle). Mukti followed Prem outside and saw………… him, there standing, with a bottle in his hand. He was (well 4rm what she could see), was walking along the path but not able control himself as he was DRUNK! It looked like he had finished the bottle and didn't know it himself that he had finished it. Mukti followed him to wherever he was going. She tried to stop him, by shouting out his name, but she knew that it was no good, since he wasn't in his senses AT ALL! He was talking rubbish, that she could tell, but what he was saying, she couldn't make out. Still, she followed him letting him lead her to wherever.

P: who……………. does she……… think she……. is? (talk in a drunk state)
Mukti was thinking who was he talking about. She continued on listening to him while he carried on talking.
P; Mukti……….. who d'u…………… think u………..r? y………….. are u………doing……………this 2………… me? I…….LOVE…YOU, but u……….. do not under- …………. understand my feelings. Always………either ur with…… that Sharman………..or, or that Soham………. or anyone else………… apart 4rm me……. U neva any spend time wiv me……….. NEVA! I LOVE U MUKTI, LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mukti was shocked to hear all that 4rm Prem. She had come to a conclusion that he hadn't loved her anymore, but had never thought that he had loved her THIS much. He was walking off and she hadn't noticed. Lost in her thoughts and then realizing that he wasn't there, she quickly ran off towards the way he might have went.

M: PREM! PREM! KAHA HO TUM? PREM! PREM, WHERE R U?
She shouted his name hoping that he would come in front of her, but he didn't. She ran on the path and then something stopped her. She looked back and saw him. There he was standing in front of her, holding her hand. Prem pulled her in2 his arms and held her tight.

P: Mukti…………. y were u………….. calling me? I heard u………..calling me………..all the way 4rm………. there. Since when……….. d'u care…… 4 me?
M: Prem, u r drunk. Stop talking like this, common now, we have to go back or every1 else will be worried.
P: u haven't answered my question. Since when ……….. d'u care…… 4 me?
M: look prem (trying to avoid his question), we have to get u back right now!
Prem who was getting really fustrated at her 4 not answering his question asked once again
P: when did u start caring for me mukti?
M: look prem, just 4gt bout and lets go home.
P: no, we not going anywhere until u answer me question. Now tell me, when did u start caring 4 me?

Mukti was silent and looked into his eyes. He looked in2 hers. They came closer and closer towards each other finally breaking into a kiss. Prem held her with all his might not wanting to let go nor this moment to go. He held her waist and pulled her towards him. Mukti held his jacket and scrunched it in2 her fingers, even she didn't want this moment to go so quickly. For about 2-5 mins, the two were in each others arms, not wanting to leave the other. Until, Mukti broke the kiss. Prem tried to bring her to him wanting to finish what they had just done. He held her hands and started to make his way down to her neck. She didn't try to stop him and let herself being taken away by Prem.

He hoisted her in his arms and carried her forwards. She realized that they weren't heading back to the camp site or the party but he was leading more like carrying her to someplace else.
Mukti then saw a cottage, and recognized it as the one that they had stopped in the night it had rained. Prem took them inside and put mukti down. He closed the door while Mukti had her back towards him. He hugged her from behind and started to make his way down the side of her neck. She gasped and he smiled. Mukti turned around to face him and began to speak, but Prem put his finger on her lips and didn't let her say anything, not a single word.

Mukti began moving backwards while Prem came forwards advancing upon her like a predator wanting its prey. She backed up against the wall while he put his arms on the wall and started coming near to her. Mukti closed her eyes and breathed. Prem smiled at the sight. She looked so innocent when her eyes were closed and so beautiful he thought. Prem leaned in and whispered in2 her ear saying:
P: u know that u r ONLY MINE Mukti, so then y don't u just accept it.

Mukti froze at his words and looked at him stunned. Prem leaned in to kiss her cheek to which she didn't refuse. She wanted to be near him, close to him and be in his arms like she was right now. Ever since she had realized her feelings 4 him, all she could think about was the fact that maybe one day, she would be wiv him, in this kind of a spot. Prem hoisted her up once again and took her over to a nearby bed that had been laid out by some one - whom, they did NOT know.

Laying her on the bed and him being on top of her, he put her hand in his. The two stared at each other and be4 they knew it, they were in bed wrapped in each others arms making love

Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#124

wow...lovely update..thinking what is going to happen next....???? 😉 it was thrilling...

update soon! 😃

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rahayma

@raym

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#125

wow !!!finally pm make love 😳
amazing update continue soooooooon!!!

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#126

wonderfully written and im glad it aint vulgur at all.. I jus hope Mukti does not get pregnant.. cont. soon

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#127

that was an awsome update! quite exciting! haha hope you can update soon!

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Unknown

@Manoj&Tina#1fan

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#128

HEy great Update , it was awsome! i hope now Prem and Mukti get married that would be awsome too! lol writing awsome toomany times, but aneways continue soon, i LOVEDDDDDD it!