bajajprerna fan fic-last part on page18 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwww 👏

It ws fabulous. Sammie is right. I felt as if I were reading MB only. Great work namzy. Kaash yeh sab hota kzk mein 😳 ab to anubaba ki khair nahi 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
What the HELL is this MB?? I keep thinking Manoj Bohra 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
MB=Mills and Boons. Romantic novels.
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Posted: 18 years ago
mills and boons? 😆 😆 no re i mean mind blowing ish 😆
i copied sukhie 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳

Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

laterz both Prerna and Bajaj were having breakfast and mainting a polite scilence......Bajaj wasa bout to say something when Prerna phone rang. BAJAJ took the phone from her trembling hands and switched on the loudspeaker phone........

Anurag: . HE is having an affair with Gauri......... i knwo u will believe me.... Miene tumahri shaadi karayi thi. Miene tumhe Mr. Bajaj se joda that, aaj mien hi apni galti manta hun...... Yeh sub meri galti hein..... Prerna mien tumahara DOST hun aur tumahri khushi hi meri khushi hai. I wont let u live with him. I will help you....

Prerna at this time was looking from phone to Bajja and vice versa. Bajaj was soooooooooooooooooo angry.....................

Prerna looke from bajaj to the phone, never in her life she had trembled so much as she was doing today.. Bajaj looked at her with a loathing in hie eyes, but unlike prervious times he dint go away. He just looked at Prerna and waited for her reaction

Prerna with trembeling hands began to hold teh phone in her hand butBajaj made mouthed that she should talk on loudspeaker.

Prerna: Anurag I will talk2 u later. and she cuts of the phone and switches it off.

she gets up and starts moving, very well knowing that Bajaj will stop her.

Bajaj: Prerna meri baat suno

and before he can say anything else, their kids come and sorround them...

kids:dad mom today we will go to lonavla and pls dont say NO, it has been long long time since whole family went each other

Both Bajaj Prerna looked at each other instinctevely and both were thinking of the short escapades they use to make to enjoy each other's company. Both mummled yes, yearning for those days... and both secretly wanted to escape this claustrophic scenario for few days.

Prerna entered the room to pack the bags,1st as a habbit she went to Bajaj cupboard to pack his bag, but anger and ego seeped in through her and gauri was in her mind.... so she went and began to pack her bag.

Bajaj came and seeing her packing in such small bag understood that she was not packing his clothes. He was hurt and remembered-----

FLASHBACK-PRERNA was packing her bag and as she turned, bajaj took out her clothes.. Prerna stared at him in mocking anger with hands on her waist. Bajaj gave her innocent look and coming towards her, he pulled her closer and said that he does not like seprate bags for them, if they go somewhere, their belongings go together😳. Prerna looked at her hubby with so much love and before both realised they were over each other over the clothes and the bag.........

Bajaj came out of the trance and of the period, where both loved each other so much...................

He packed his bags before her her and went out in huff. Prerna who was fiddeling with her clothes, looked at his departing back and then his bag.....

Lonavla-

Both of them were happy to see that their kids were enjoying so much.... while Sneha,prem,kasak and kookieand others looked at each otehr and gave a thumpsup sign. they were succeding in their plan of uniting bajaj and prerna. al the kids looked at each other and then began their plan. All of them go to the BAJAJ COTTAGE, which was on a secluded hill top of lonavala.... Bajaj and Prerna sat in the drawing room, last in their thoughts. kids came 1 by one and told them that they will come in the evening........ theyr going out. Prerna was in no mood to be alone with Bajaj but kids make her understand that she wont enjoy trekking and most of the kids were going with their spouses, so it was not good for her 2 intrude........

Prerna and bajaj were left alone......... Bajaj looked at her and without speaking went to the room to change,he opened his bag and for a moment was stunned..... His nag was so nieatly packed and the clothes packed were not the one he packed...... That time Prerna enetered and and bajaj looked at her questioningly...........

Prerna: What? I dint pack these, ur daughters did. they know that their dad can not to save himself also pack his bags, it was such a mess, she said all this WHILE WRINKELING HER NOSE

Bajaj started laughing

Prerna cauntiously asked: What happened, Aap kyun hus rahe hai........

Bajaj: coming closer to her, wo ur noe

prerna: touched her nose: what happened to my nose

Bjaaj while cleaning his tears which came while laughing: kuch nahin hua, wo bus jub tum apni nose ko wrinkle karti ho toooooooooooooo.........

Prerna: haan toooooo???while uncounciously smiling and her twinkling eyes were making Bajaj warm all over

Bajaj: suddenly realised that how close they were standing and for a moment both had forgotten the present situation......

even Prerna could feel the eletricity between them and Bajaj knew that she never liked if any1 else otherthen him, made fun of her nose......

They both looked at each other and before Bajaj could realise Prerna was in his arms and was crying madly on his shoulders.............

cont soon

I knwo it was crap this time, Iw as really bored so Iw rote, though this part does not make any sense😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
aww preru baby was crying on his shoulders...bajaj makes her cry when he is with other girls...awww
soooo cute...very good aunty 👏 👏
keep it up...it wasn't boring at all 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
HEY THANKS SAMMIE. i M TOUCHED THAT U LIKED this okok part.... BUT IN WHOLE FF U ONlY LIKED THE SHOULDER PART 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kisne kaha aap se ki boring tha...i loved it like always 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW namzy its was gr88...i liked it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was great..

loved the crinkly nose wala bit when they just start laughing.. awwwwwwwwwww 😳

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