Vadaa Raha..... Prt5on Pg10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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FF of Prem and Mukti (Vadaa Raha)

Hey guys, I am going to start a fan fiction of prem and mukti. This is the first time I am writing FF so, tell me how it is. Sorry for misspelled words and creepy Hindi. I am not good at Hindi so most of it will be in English. Sorry for that. I am going to start my FF after mukti's rape case.

Introduction:

Both mukti and Sneha has moved on to their life, and prem is prem now not Yudi. He started having feelings for mukti and he realize that how much he loves her and he cant stay without her. Every night is agonizing night to prem; every night only one thing comes to his mind,"WHY DID HE DO THIS TO MUKTI??? WHY???." He had no guts to face her, nor could he say sorry to her. He didn't know what to do…

Now that he realizes that he has lost mukti forever, there was no life for him now. Every time he met mukti she ignored him that bothered him so much that it feels like it's the end of the life for him. Everything bothered him, he couldn't stay like these. Nobody cares for him because of what he did to mukti and Sneha. Nobody understand his feelings, nobody cared how he felt, everybody ignored him. The only person who understood his feelings was him mom, Prena. She is the only one who saw him suffering like this, she is the only person who knew that prem has changed. Everyday prem came home from work he went straight to his room; everybody noticed that but didn't care except prerna. Prerna couldn't see prem suffering like this anymore. She knew that she had to do something for her son.

Hope you liked it. Tell me if I should continue or not. If u didn't like my FF feel free to tell me. I won't mind it.

Love,

Janki

Hey guyz i am soooooooo sorry i cant start my FF till this weekend cuz i have loads of homework and test, but i will still try to post it if i can. once again i am sooooooooooooooo sorry!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this is awsome! sooo many pm ff, this should keep me entertained (since the show clearly doesnt!)
janki hun the intro to your first fanfic was great! im already excited to know what will happen next! you should definately continue! good luck with you first ff, im sure we will love it 😃 continue soon plz!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey yaar do post the link to this in the prem stiky as well ill be able to post it on the first page then

thats if u want to that is
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Posted: 18 years ago
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grt story plz continue will be waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i think you should continue it seems interestin so far 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was really gud 👏 continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx so much for wonderfull coments. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow yaar great fanfic! 😛 awesome job 👏 👏 ...yu defo shud continue 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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verrryyyy loveellyy janki ( i never knew that was your name! lol learned somthing new! ) do continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so yesha... finally u read it? well i appreciate it. thanx for reading it and i will continue soon. plz continue reading otherwise i will have to force u to read my FF. hehehe just kidding.😆well thanx for reading.

PS: thanx everybody for reading my FF.

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