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@xoxsubhaxox

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#41

no update for like a month...plz cont soon 😃 😃

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

sorry for the dealy for like 5-6 months...actually i couldnt get on IF..so i didnt continue i will try my best to continue i was thinking to end this FF cuz i cant write it...busy with skool things...i am not sure..i cant tell anything right now....

sorry,
Janki

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#43

sorry for the big delay...
here is the next part...

Recap: Alisha has entered as Mukti's best friend from 8^th grade, and now they went to Bajaj's house because Alisha wants to meet Prerna.

Alisha finished her studies in London. She was a Fashion Model, and now she wants to come to India. Mukti and Alisha are best friends. Mukti want Alisha to stay with her. Alisha wants to come to India because she had a past and she want to forget the past.

What can the past be?

They enter in Bajaj house!

Everybody is sitting in living room and talking (everybody is downstairs but Prem) just then Mukti enters with Alisha.

Mukti: Choti ma, yaa Alisha haa meri sabsaa achhie dost.

Alisha: Namasta, maine app ke bara mein bohot suna hain mukti sa.

Prerna: Namasta beta. Kaysi hoo tum

Alisha: Just fine. London kuch akella pan lagata ta isellely main India ie hun

Prerna: yaa to bhot acha kiya tumna. toh abb tum kya karo gi.

Alisha: mujha bhata nahi.

Prerna: tum meri bata ki company main join karsatki hoo.

Alisha: main sohcuing gi.

And them Mukti introduces the whole family to Alisha.

Mr.Bajaj: kya hum yaha beth kar baat karenge. Let's have breakfast and talk.

Prem is coming downstairs screaming saying, "Birju kaka mom kaha hain? Aur mera nashta kaha hain?"

Just then he reaches in the kitchen and sees Mukti and Alisha.

Prem: (is shocked) Alisha!!!

Alisha: (is shocked) Prem!!!

Will Alisha forget the past or will get meet somebody from the past that she wants to forget?

What is Alisha's past?

Why is prem so shocked to see Alisha?

Why is Alisha so shocked to see prem?

Does prem and Alisha have a connection?

will be updatting soon...i decided to continue this ff..

Edited by pm rocks - 17 years ago

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#44

you update after sooooo long and you gice us such a short update? well at least you updates! haha im curious to find out prem and alishas connection. hope you can continue sooner!

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sumayyah patel

@Patel 1993

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

wow such a short update though.

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Umam

@Umam_Paracha_13

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

great update!!! plzz continue soon!!!!!

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Robin_M
you update after sooooo long and you gice us such a short update? well at least you updates! haha im curious to find out prem and alishas connection. hope you can continue sooner!

i know right...? sorry acutally i couldnt get on IF for 3 months, and then i was too busy with my school that i totally forgot about the FF....but dont worry this is a really short part...but the next one will be really good i promise!😛

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Patel 1993
wow such a short update though.

dont worry next part will be really good..😉

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Here is the next part...i cant tell u when i am update next time...sorry...busy with things 😛

Recap: Prem enters in the kitchen and see Alisha!

Prem: Alisha!

Alisha: Prem!

They just kept on looking at each other and in a state of shock….seeing each other was the SHOCK of their life!!!

What could it be?????

In office, home, car all prem thought about was Alisha…he could see everything dark in his life after he saw Alisha…he saw everything going away from him when he saw Alisha…just then he decides to talk to somebody about this…he knows that this is going to be a shock to everybody, but he has to tell somebody about Alisha.

He goes to prerna's room and decides to tell her since she is the only one who can help her.

Prerna: arre prem tum…? Kya baat hain

Prem: m-o-m...i want to tell you something that I should've told you before.

Prerna: kya hai…

Prem: m-o-m….

Prerna: kya bat hain prem (in a serious tone, and also looking serious)…

Prem: main app ko Alisha aur mere baree mein kuch batana chahta hoon.

Prerna: kya hain…(she knew there was something fishey…)

Prem started to tell everything to Prerna….

Prem: I met Alisha in U.S.A. 5 years ago.The first time we both saw eachother we both fell in love with eachother...hum pyaar main itna pagal ho gaya tha ki 2 mahinaa ka baad alisha.....

Prerna: (IS VERY SHOCKED TO HERE THAT) kya prem??? Alisha kya????

Prem:Alisha mara baccha ka saath pregnant hui

Prerna: Kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She slaps prem 2 to 3 times

Prerna: tum itna gira hua nicla!!! kash mujha yah phela bata hota.. ma tum ha mukti saa kabhi nahi milati!!!!!!

Prem: mari baat to sunyaa...

Prerna: maa tumhari baat sunna nahi chah ti hu!!!!! She leaves the room with lots of anger.....

Prem: ab main kya karoo!!! mother india mujha galat samaj rahi hoogi kyuki main mother india koo poori bat nahi bata saka??????

What is the end of the shocking story?

What is prem going to do?

What is prerna goin to do? Is she going to tell mukti? How is mukti going to react?

Edited by pm rocks - 17 years ago