pyaarisi dushmani...ff..prt 5 pg 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok soo i know i hadn't continued my fanfics... but....... thats cuz my sis had used my ID to write the ff and it was not meee....... this is my first ff on kzk....... true......trust meee......

CHARACTERS-

PRERNA SHARMA: 24, really sweet..... looks old fashioned but her mind is far fecthed...... her mind is mordern than others....... she simply adores her life adn thinks there is nothing she want in life anymore...... she has a loving fiancee........ two sisters who love her very much....she is the eldest of them alll.....

SNEHA SHARMA: 22, just finished college....... has got an offer in a modeling company...very fashionable....... really good with guys..... is in love but its a secret.... only her best friend omi knows..... he tried to warn her that sharad, her love is not good but she just doesn't listen to him and does wrong things...... loves both her sisters very much.......... she is the middle one.......

MUKTI SHARMA: 20, second year of college..... really bubly adn fun person...... she talks too much but has point in everything she says...... gets along with everyone very welll...... known as 'basanti'.......

ANURAG BASU: 26, loves his life adn lives to the fullest..... runs away when it comes to even talk about marriage... he still wants to gain soo much....he doesn't want to loose his freedom adn his strength by a girl in his life..... thats what he thiks...... very big business tycooon.....

SHARAD KAPOOR: 23, a BIG FAT LIAR..... that's all i have to say right now..... is in love with sneha only for her money........... can do anything for money........ anurag's employee....... adn worships him like a GOD...... wants to be like anurag....

OMI SAXEN: 24, sneha and prerna's best friend..... loves sneha but hasn't told her yet...... prerna is like his sister..... he respect her more than anyone in her life...... tries his best to help prerna with her sisters....... and is the only one who can handle sneha....

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PREM BASU: 21, anurag's youngest brother......is in USA right now...will be coming to india very soon to finish the last year of college..... he is a 'lafunga' but hasn't et anyone know it.... everyone in his family thinks he is 'adarsh beta' but i reality he is not......

RESHAB BAJAJ: 26, anurag's best friend.... since childhood..... prerna's fiancee...loves her and his best friend the most in his life...... he always gets everything he wants..... either easily or his own way... which is really bad...... noone messes up with him........

KASAK OBROI: 20, mukti's best friend........ just come to mumbai from massouri..... very lively..... she and mukti can make any mad person ok and any good person mad.....lol.... likes omi.....

AKSHAT BAJAJ: 21, prem's best friend and reshab bajaj's cousin....... this is all i can say right now... you will know him better later.....

I PROMISE I WILL CONTINUE AS MUCH AS I CAN........ AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.... I MIGHT CONTINUE ONCE TWICE OR THRICE A WEEK DNT EXPECT MORE THAN THAT........ THANXXXXXXXXX PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSS COMMMENT...........

Edited by MUNNIBABA2007 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmm sounds cool! 😆 prerna sneha and mukti sisters! and anuraj and prem brothers! wow that different! seems like your fanfic is gonna be different! looking forward to it! so you did not write the fanfic friends, it was your sister? anyways it is also really good and you should tell her to update too 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

hmm sounds cool! 😆 prerna sneha and mukti sisters! and anuraj and prem brothers! wow that different! seems like your fanfic is gonna be different! looking forward to it! so you did not write the fanfic friends, it was your sister? anyways it is also really good and you should tell her to update too 😆

hehe i know i dont know where i got the crazy idea...... lol..... nooo friends is mine..... there are other two ff that my sis wrote....adn i get ppms telling me to continue it....arrrggggggghhhhhh adn when i tell her to update the parts she tells mee to continue it as its written in my ID...... grrrr....... and soo i was really mad at her/.......and then i stopped coming to this side of the forum i mean kzk forum........ soo my other sis/coz/bestfriend continued friends for meee..... and she will continue t from now on..... i will only write this one and other ff in the fanfic section.........

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interstin 😛 still can't digest da fact dat prena/sneha/mukti r sisterz 😆 prem bein a "lafunga" i can totally imagine jus wonder wat hez got up his sleeve when he meets mukti aka his basanti 😳 awwwww i can jus imagine their interactions 😳 😆wonder wat Akshat's role will be u left me hangin on his character can't imagine how his characterz gonna play out hope he ain't bad 😕 lukin 4ward 2 ur update hope u update really soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya it sound ibtresting and pls update soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow very interesting continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool!cant wait for the first part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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greatt job!! 👏 👏
cont. soon! 😃
can't wait to read the next partt! 😳

xx
Rachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kool ff 😉 cnt belive prerna is mr bajaj's fiancee, aare ff mein to ap ko milana tha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehe....i myself cant digest the fact that sneha/prerna/mukti are sisers and anurag/prem are brothers......... anywayssss....... here goes the first part......

PART ONE

" sneha give it to mee......" prerna ran after her sister sneha..... she chased her everywhere and now they were finallly in sneha's room....." agar tune mujhe woh chithi nahi diya to mein...... mein....(pause) mein teri puri room ko tehash nehash kar dungi......." prerna threatened... but it dint seem to bother sneha......

" di ujhe sirf ek baar padne do naa....." snhea said opening the letter.....

" nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo" prerna yelled and tried to get the letter..... but sneha was too quick..... she ran to the door and bumped into mukti who was rubbing her eyes..........

" why are you guys yelling???" mukti said hardly opening her eyes.......

" not meee... her...." snhea pointed at prerna.....

" kya hua di??? kyu chilla rahithi?????(eyes wide open...) jijs ka letter....." mukti snatched the letter from sneha's hand........

" guys plsss mat pado naa......" prerna made a puppy face...both sneha and mukti's heart melted..... but mukti wasn't such emotional girl..

" ek shart par....."

" anything....." prerna said quickly without thinking.....

" we will read it together or we will read it without you.... the choice is yours....."

prerna frowned...... sneha and mukti gave hi-5......" fine......" prerna finally admitted.... they all three sat on bed and read it...... after reading the letter.... mukti and sneha fell backward on the bed....

in unison..." awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..... i wish someone loved mee soo much....."

prerna blushed 😳....... sneha quickly rising..." aye haye..... inhi adao par to jijs marte honge..... dekho kaise sharma rahi hai....."

mukti also raised......" yep...."

prerna blushed more.... when there was a knock on the door...... all three look up and found omi looking at them suspiciously.....

" kya baat hai..... aaj teeno bade khush najar aarahe ho???" omi asked.....

" ha hai toh...... anywayss aaj college ka pehla din hai...i dont want to be late...... bye everyone...."

mukti got up and went to the door and kissed omi on the cheeks...." bye omi darling..." she gigled adn left.....

omi touched where she had kissed....he walks upto prerna and sneha...." this girl freaks me out...... did you see she just kissed mee....."

" ya sooo????" prerna and sneha asked together....... omi made a face and both of them laughed....... prerna saw the date in the calendar on the wall..... she hit her forehead...." oh god i am late....."

" kya hua???" omi asked worriedly....

" aaj mr.bajajke koi dost aane waale the...i was supposed to pick him....... god i am late.... flight abhi 35 min baad hai....." prerna almost got to her room saying this.....

omi and sneha were only in the room......

" soo ab tum kahi jaaneke liye late nahi hui???" omi asked...

" naah...i am the main model.... late jaana to meri aadat hai..... and the shooting is not untill 2 in the afternoon soo...i am kind of free till then...." sneha said dreamily.....

" kyu sharad ka kya hua??? usse nahi milna???" omi said sarcastically......

" nope.... usse to shooting mein hi milungi......" she said...." umm if you're free tooo.... chalo na kahi ghoomne chalte hai...i am boreeeeed...." sneha suggested.... omi said ok.... without thinking at all....ofcourse he would go with her adn that tooo without any interference of sharad.....

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prerna reached the airport just in time...... mr.gupta was already there...... tehy waited and waited and waited.... the flight had been delayed.... finally it landed adn the passengers were coming...... prerna was catching a board with the name of 'MR ANURAG BASU'...


preview: prem and mukti meet and guess the third world war started 😆 .... anurag and prerna meet adding more violence to the war 😆....... omi and sneha's lil date.....

Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 18 years ago

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