Chand Sa Roshan Chera - Page 2

dat was really really gud 👏 i luv how all da brothers tease mukti n then they try 2 pacify her 😆 da poem was really sweet 😳 awwwwww the brothers are sooooooooo sweet 😳 god i wish i had brothers lik dat 😆 u should totally continue when r there goin 2 be parts of prem n mukti 2gether 😳 update soon 😉

Originally posted by: mandy07

dat was really really gud 👏 i luv how all da brothers tease mukti n then they try 2 pacify her 😆 da poem was really sweet 😳 awwwwww the brothers are sooooooooo sweet 😳 god i wish i had brothers lik dat 😆 u should totally continue when r there goin 2 be parts of prem n mukti 2gether 😳 update soon 😉

Mandy,some of the parts are from my real life.I have 4 brothers and they tease all day long,that's why i thought of writing this all in here.

Okay guys since I'm free.I GOT NOTHING TO DO SO HOW ABOUT I WRITE.

It's morning,and Mukti is trying to awake all of her brothers.
Mukti-Nishant bhaiya bhabi breakfast ke liye bhula rahi hai.
Nishant-Sonay de na Pari,mein tori hi der mein niche aathan hun.
Mukti-okay bhaiya,just remember bhabhi is waiting for you.
She then moves on to Rahul.
Mukti-Wake up Wake up sleepy head.It's morning.
Rahul-Pari meri pyaari se behan mujhe torhi der aur sonay de na.
Mukti-Rabhul bhaiya maskay na maro.Pata hai na Papa ko breakfast table pe sab ka hona zaroori hai.
Rahul-I know I know,but aaj kal toh business ki chutiyan hai.Just give me five minutes.
Mukti-fine,make sure der na ho,time par aa jana.
Rahul-acha meri maa.
Mukti-ab Akhash ki bari.
Akhash-Pari Pari,I m already awoke,so don't worry about me.I am coming right after you.
Mukti-You know Akhash bhaiya,ab sab bhaiyon mein sein na jaldi ithay ho,and i like it.
Akhash-Thanks Pari,ab tu jaa Sharman ke pass jha,varna woh aghar aaj phir late ho gaya na toh phir us ki to shamat aayi.
She knocks on the door,no one answers it,she waits for few minutes,finally she decides to go in.
Mukti-lagta hai aaj phir mujhe Sharman ke upaR pani dalna pare gah.
sHE TRIES TO MOVE AWAY HIS BLANKET.
Sharman-Pari Yaar tu aa ghi,mujhe pata chal gaya.
Mukti-Wake up,varna again you'll get yelled by dad.
Sharman-koi baat nahi.
Mukti-Sharman teray ko khabi kisi ka asar hota hai kya.
Sharman-nahi Siya.
Mukti-Siya?????mein Siya nahi teri behan Mukti hun.
Sharman-woh kya hain na Pari teri awaz Siya se milti hai.
Mukti-Teri problem mein solve karti,and i bet ke tu bistray se bhi ut jaaye gha.
Sharman-I take your bet.
Mukti-Sharman mujhe lagta hai ke tujhe Siya se pyaar ho gaya.She runs away saying this.
Sharman who runs down the stair following her saying-what baqwas?She is just a freind.
Damini-ab kya hua?
Mukti-Maa dekho na Sharman is in love.
Sharman-Maa yeh jhoot bhool rahi hai
Mukti-why would i lie?Hain na Dadi.
Dadi nods-haan par tujhe kaisay pata hai.
Mukti-jab mein Sharman ko uss ke kamrey breakfast ki liye bhulaney ghi ti,to Sharman called me Siya.
Damini-Sahi toh keh rahi hai.
Sharman-Maa tu bhi na.
Damini-Par tune Siya ka naam kyun liya.
Sharman-Maa tu yeh sab chor na,to meray garam garam parathey de.
Neha-tum log bachon ki tarah larte ho.
Mukti and Sharman-Bhabhi we are kids.Right Kiran.
Kiran-Yes Bua.
Mukti-Kaisa hai meri Kiran.
Kiran-fine Bua.Meri chocolates layi ho bua.
She hands her a bag full of with candies.
Neha-Mukti tu isse baghar rahi hai.
Mukti-UFF HO bhabhi,bachi hai abhi.

Everyone is at the breakfast table.
Nishant-Pari,I have to tell you something.
Mukti-Bolo Nishant Bhaiya.
Nishant-Kal ko koi log aa rahe hai.
Mukti-woh kyun bhaiya?
Rahul-arre badu woh log tujhe dekhne aa rahe hai.
Mukti-Par bhaiya? with a sad face.Mein abhi shaadi nahi karna chaati.
Gautum-Mukti beta shaadi to sab ko karni hoti hai.
Mukti-But Papa,how can i marry a person,when i don't even know him.
Nishant-We know them,they are really nice people.
Gautum-Woh meray bachpan ke dost ka beta hai.I'm sure he is nice.
Akhash and Sharman-Hamari behan bane ghi Dhulaniya,aaye ga usse leney uss ka raja.
Mukti-Shut up.
She has tears.
Mukti-Maa mein abhi shaadi nahi karna chaati.
Damini-Par kyun Pari.
Mukti-Why can't i stay here with you guys?
Nishant-Kyun ke har larki ko uss ke apnay ghar jhana hota hai.
Mukti-Oh now I know,mein aap sab ke liye booj ban gayi hun.She runs away from there leaving her breakfast.

On the other hand,we see a guy with a white shirt facing his back to the camera.
Guy-MotherIndia I don't want to marry.
Women-Par kyun beta?
Guy-MotherIndia I don't know.The guy turns his face to the camera and it is our Prem
The women in the green is Prerna,you can barely see her face.
Prem-MotherIndia that's my final answer.No No No.She leaves his room.
Sneha with this look on her face
Kya hua Mamma.
Prerna-Uss ne naa kar di.
Sneha-Mamma mein Prem se baat karti hun.




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wow its wonderfull pls continue

Sneha goes up to Prem.
Prem-Sneha mujhe pata hai ke tum kya kaho gi.
Sneha-Prem kya tum kisi aur ko pasand karte ho kya.
Prem-aisa kuch nahi hai.
Sneha-then what's the problem?
Prem-I don't know.I mean I am just not ready for the wedding.
Sneha-teek hai,Par tum ek dafa to uss se mil lo.
Prem-No.
Sneha-meri khaatir,just meet her once.If you like her then we'll think about it.And if you don't we'll just say no.
Prem-Okay,but only for you.
Sneha hugs Prem-I love you!!!!

At Mukti's house.
In Mukti's room.Mukti is crying.
Neha-Mukti
Mukti-Bhabi please I don't want to talk about it.
Damini-Mukti we have to.
Mukti-Maa I don't want to marry now,mein yeh toh nahi keh rahi ke khabi shaadi nahi karoon ghi.
Damini-Mukti tum ek baar us ladke se mil lo.Ladke ke family achi hai aur ladka bhi.He'll make you happy.
Mukti-Maa mein sirf uss se shaadi karoon ghi joh meray bhaiyon jaisa ho ga, caring,loving.I don't even know how he looks like,to pyaar kaisey karung ghi.
Damini-Mukti pyaar toh dhree dhree hota hai.Woh kal aa rahe hai to tum mil lena.Aghar tume pasand aya to Yes if not then No.
Mukti-Mein aap sab ko chorr ke nahi jaoon ghi.
Neha-Mukti mein bhi to aayi thi.
Damini-aur har ladki ko ek din apne ghar jhana hota hai,us ke pati ke ghar.Ab to haan keh do.
Mukti-teek hai,par aghar who mujhe pasand aaya tho.
Damini-acha.
Neha-ab neeche chalen.
Mukti-haan,they leave.
Neha-Mukti ne un ko mil ne ke liye haan keh diya hai.
Damini-Aghar ladkha Mukti ko pasand aya tho phir yes.
Gataum-jaisay Mukti kahe.
Mukti-Sorry Nishant bhaiya,I was rude to you.
Nishant-Pari you know mein tum se khabi naraz nahi hoon gha.
Neha-waisey Mukti,ladke ko tumharay bhaiyon ne pasand kiya hai.
Mukti-bhabhi aghar meray bhaiyon ne chuna hai toh phor woh zaroor acha ho gha.

It's night already.
Mukti-Bhabhi us ka naam kya hai.
Neha-Prem.
Mukti-You mean love.
Neha-haan.
Mukti-naam toh acha hai.Bhabi how is he like?
Neha-Hum khabi Prem se miley nahi.
Mukti-toh phir.
Neha-we met his family.Remember we went to dinner last night.
Mukti-Yeah.
Neha-we went to meet Prem's family Bajaj.We wanted you to meet Prem last night,but you didn't come.
Mukti-I should have been there,varna mein iss waqt nervous nahi hoti.
Neha-It's good you didn't went with us,because Prem wasn't there either.
Mukti-Great,then he must have be having the same feeling as me.
Neha-His sister Sneha told me everything about him.
Mukti-Bhabhi please tell me.
Neha-who bhi Canda se aaya ek saal phele for studies.
Mukti-Just like me,no wonder mein Bajaj family ko nahi mili.
Neha-Waisey use studies ka bhilkul pasand nahi hai.But he is a businessman.
Mukti-Tell me more.
Neha-Well he shares everything with his sister Sneha,jaisay tum share karti ho meray aur apnay bhaiyon ke saat.
Mukti-How cute.
Neha-Sneha said he likes going to parties.He do flirt with so many girls.Par dil ka bohat acha hai.And he loves kids.Sneha ka bacha Prateek,Prem use bohaut pyaar karta hai.
Mukti-Sab kuch acha hai Prem ke barey mein.But Bhabhi I'm still nervous.
Neha-koi baat nahi,I was nervous too when your brother came for our rishta.
Mukti gives a laugh-Bhabhi Nishant bhaiya bhi nervous they,woh toh saari raat nahi soy they.

On the otherside.
Sneha-Prem don't worry,everything will be fine.Relax!!!
Prem-Sneha,I've never been nervous about a girl,but I don't why this time.
Sneha-Hota hai Prem,Jab Omi bhi meray liye rishta le ke aaya tha,I was all tense.
Prem-Sneha have you met her?
Sneha-No,heard about her from her Bhabhi.
Prem-Okay tell me.
Sneha-Her brothers love her so much,her whole family does.Ghar ki ladli hai.
Prem-What's her name?
Sneha-Mukti.
Prem-anything else?
Sneha-She went to London for education,bilkul tumhari tarha.
Prem-aur?
Sneha-Baaqi tumay kal pata chal jaaye gha.When you meet her.She runs out of his room.
Prem-Sneha Sneha.
Sneha-Goodnight Prem.
Prem-Goodnight mera foot.

So both Prem and Mukti can't sleep because they are enthusiastic and nervous.In the morning .Prem and Mukti come out of their room tired.

Mukti-Good morning everybody.
Damini-Mukti tu aaj der se kaise uthi.
Rahul-Saari raat soyi nahi kyaa Pari?
Mukti-Bhaiya neend hi nahi aayi.
Everyone bursts out laughing.
Mukti-ISS Mein funny kya hai?
Everyobdy-Kuch nahi.

Same thing is going at Baja's house.

Leave me comments.Should i continue?

its so kool! i luved da way 2 added da pix! 👏

It's the afternoon time for Prem's family to come.
Damini-Mukti beta,tayyar ho ghi kya?
Mukti-Maa mein bas ready hi ho rahi ho.

At Prem's house.
Prerna-Ab neeche bhi aa jao Prem.
Prem-Maa I'm coming,just give me 2 more minutes.
Sneha-Prem tum bhi ladkhiyon ki tarrah time se tayar hote ho.
Prem-Sneha shutup.
Sneha-Itna time to Mukti bhi nahi lagaya hoga.
Prem just winks at her.
Sneha-Ab jaldi.I'm sure Mukti's family is waiting for you.

Half an hour later.
Kiran yells-Bua they are here.
Mukti just nervously smiles.
Damini and Gautum-Nameste Prerna aur Bajaj.
Prerna-Namaste.
Prem and Sneha-Nameste aunty and uncle.
Sneha-Aunty Mukti kahan hai.
Neha-Mein abhi laati hun.
Prem is patiently waiting for Mukti.

Damini-Prerna aaj meri behan Calcutta se aayi hain.
Prerna-yeh to bohat khushi ki baat hai.
Gautum-Prem beta kuch lo ge nahi.
Prem-uncle I'll have tea.

Mukti-Bhabi voh kaisa hai.
Neha-He looks like a monkey.
Mukti-Bhabhiiiiiiiiiiii.Such baton a.
Neha-khudi chalk e dekh lo.

She starts to walk down the stairs.
Neha-Prerna aunty yeh hai hamari Mukti!!!!!

Prem who is drinking tea chokes in his tea-Wow
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Wow, its really really good! Anxiously waiting for the next part!!!!

OMG i just read the last couple of parts, they are awsome! 😳 im still blushing! this reminds me of the movie viva! soooo cute and sweet! your fanfic is reallllly good hun! please keep going! so you said that you have 4 brothers too who tease you? thats really sweet, you are really lucky! do they also call you pari for short? anyways cant wait for the next part! dieing to see how prem and mukti will talk to eack other! 😃

yaa pls continue we cant wait plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss 👏