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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: karen singh

yes ur updatin tonite cant wait
😳 😳 can u plz make it long 😳 😳

ur wait is over...i updated..hopeu lyk it
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really good
i loved it
cant wait when you update next wohooooo
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg dat was really really gudddddddd 👏 👏 itz true da word impossible isn't in muktiz dictionary 😆 it was hilarious how she got into da club only a girl with brains n determination would have cum up with sumthin lik dat 😆 n da luk on da guys faces when they say sneha/kasak/mukti was priceless i could totally imagine prem droolin jus lukin at her 😳 😆 update soon hopefully in da next update pm will get 2 spend sum time alone n get real close 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hahaha...that update was hilaarious...princess mukti, his highness king jeevan!!! omg too good!! 😆 😆
plz cont soon!! looking forward to sum gr8 pm scenes!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 princess of jhansi? haha that was halarious! wow i cant believe she did that, i would love to see an actual scene like that! and the begining where prems like, i never knew you dream about me! god that was sooo cute 😳 awsome update hafsa! cant wait for more, try to update soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
LOL..mukti is a joker...cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Mukti was hilarious. 😆 😆 😆 Superb. Cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guyz skoolz a bit hectic dese dayz so i wont b able 2 continue soon..plz 4giv me...ill update ASAP
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Posted: 18 years ago
ohkiee guyz sorrie 4 da delay...hope u like this part


During the 2 months, Prem and mukti came so close together that pretty soon the 2 were inseperable. When the 2 evil minds worked together, it created total chaos and havos so there was no peace and quiet for the rest of the summer holidays. They were responsible for the numerous pranks pulled on everyone in the household as well as the neighbourhood. All along, Prem told Mukti all about his past mistakes and his various liaisons with the girls. Mukti on the other confided all her dreams and ambitions, hopes and fears to Prem and felt closer to him than anyone else she had ever met. However there were fights on petty things between them aswell.

Sneha: the way you two fight, you look like a married couple. Someone actually came upto meand told me that you guys were the cutest couple they had ever seen.

Prem: huh…they should have their eyes checked.

Mukti: Yea..the only thing that would look good with him would be a dog and she burst out laughing. Prem frowned and looked away hurt and Mukti on realizing her mistake pulled her ears and mouthed the words 'SORRY'
Prem grinned at her. With Mukti around, life could never be dull. He found himself falling in love with her, which only strengthened with every passing day. &n bsp;
Mukti had never really loved someone with such intensity was was wary of her feelings for Prem but she couldn't help it. Everytime she talked to him, she smiled, blushed when their eyes met and lost track of time in his company. The other did not notice the rapid development of the relationship except for Prerna who was very happy by all this. She had always considered Mukti her own daughter and was glad to see her son falling for a beautiful and sanskaari girl.
During their last week in America, Mukti arranged for a trip to the country side where Jeevan owned a farmhouse and everyone including Mukti's friends stayed there for a week. During the time, Mukti enjoyed some time alone with Prem as the rest of them paired off, leaving the two alone. The two took leisure walks on the beach, swam in the pool and had a great time, unknowingly coming closer to each oither all this time.
Their last night at the farmhouse approached and all of them were saddened to say goodbye to the heavenly place. Everyone planned to spend the whole night up, singing and talking. Pretty soon they ran out of softdrinks and icecream and prem and Mukti volunteered to go get some. As they walked along, they reminisced over the past as to how their friendship had come along in such a short time.

Mukti: pata hai Prem, when I first saw you, I thought you were a gunda or something. Tumhein larkiyon se baat karnay ki tameez nahi thi per tum itnay buray nahi ho jitna bannay ki koshish kartay ho

Prem: I'll take that as a compliment.

Mukti; I really maen it. You may be hard on the outside, but inside you are as soft as a marshmallow.

Prem: now I feel insulted. I mean who wants to be compared to a marshmallow. They laughed and Mukti jumped in fright when she heard the clap of thunder.

Prem: lagta hai barish ho ge. No sooner had he uttered the words that raindrops fell on his head.

Mukti; ab kya?

Prem: what do you mean. We go back. Unless you plan on standing here in the rain and catching a cold.

Mukti: ab jab eek baar bheeg he gaye hain tou lets have fun. She dragged Prem towards a puddle and started jumping about like a 5 year old whiel Prem watched her with a smile on his face. All of a sudden, she slipped and would have fallen had it not been for pre. They stared at each passionately, thye fire burning in his eyes reflected in her with the same intensity. He closed the gap between them and bent down and placed the gentlest kiss on her lips that Mukti melted against him.
The insistent ringing of the bell snapped them out of the trance and Mukti moved away from Prem to answer her phone.

Mukti: hello!
Yea we will be there soon. She closed the phone and moved away from a hurt prem, thousands of thoughts piling around in her mind at the same time. A reluctant Prem followed in her wake. Both of them reached home cold and shivering. They were sneezing because of the cold and after making their excuses retired to their respective rooms. Rge next day they all left for Mukti's home and were soon busy packing for the trip back to India. Mukti was ad at the prospect of saying goodbye to her father again but kept her tears in check and only Prerna and Prem were awre of the pain she was going through.
Prem was desperate to talk to mukti, to clear out any misunderstanding but did not get a chance all day. However Prem managed to sneak into Mukti's room at night and was devastated to see her so unhappy.
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!!! tats a gr 8 ff!!! 👏 just read it from d begining!!
tis such a cute story... 😳 simply luv it!!!
i'm now a fan of ur writings. btw, cud u plz gimme d links of ur prev ff???
once again, gr8 job!! 👏 👏 👏

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