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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kaise Main Kahu Tujh Se Rehna Hai Tere Dil Mein

You noe jab zindagi mein pyaar Hota hai na,to zindagi her subha naye raang laati hai.Mujhe aabhi pyaar nahi hua,par lekin jab hoga na meri zindagi bilkul badaal ke reh jaye ghi.Hawan mein udnay lagoon gi mein,dil chahe ka jaisay chu lu asmaan ko.Kitni khoobsurat hogi meri life. Issi tara ahista ahista,deere deere Mukti karne lagi Prem se pyaar,aur kyun na karti Prem hai hi itna cute,har larki marti hai Prem ki Ada per(including me).Par Prem ne Mukti ko saaza di pyaar karne ki,as we all now,how much he hurted Mukit and how? So lets just forget that,and listen to my fanfic.😊

It has been 5 years,Since Mukti has gone away.But Prem is still there on the same chapter.He has realized that he does love Mukti,but now it's just too late.And Mukti has move,she's happy with her life.

Women in an blue dress:Hi/Hello/Salaam/Namaste/Adab/Hola New Yorkersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss,Mein hoon aapki Kaajjal form New york desi radio city se.Hamesha ki tarah Mein le Ke aayi ho mazzay mazzay ki baatein.Par sab se phela,baat karte hai Hamare Musaan Ki Jo Kitna Suhana Lag raha hai,Kyun hamarey Yahan New York mein snow h or ahi hai.Zarroon ap log Aapne gharoon mein bet kar,meri baatein aur yeh musam enjoy kar rahe honge.Kyun na ham aaj apne show ki shurwat song se kharey.Yeh ghanna mein ne dedicate kiya hai aapney cute se chotey freind Aman ke liye.

"What's Up? What's Up?
Baby Watch Too Here
What's Up? Bang Bang
Wang Bang Watch Out

Shahazaade Nikale Apani Sawaari Par
Aji Laanat Bhejo Duniyaadaari Par
Hoon Laakhon Sitaare Par Din Men Wo Chhupate Hain
Bang Bang Wang Bang
Ham Wo Sitaare Shab-O-Roz Chamakate Hain
Bang Bang Wang Bang
Shahazaade Nikale Apani Sawaari Par
He E Aji Laanat Bhejo Duniyaadaari Par
Uchhalati Laharo Sun Lo"

Kaajjal-Mein aa gayi,I'm home,kahaan Chley gaye saab.Hello anybody home?

Boo!!he starts to laugh.

Kaajjal-Not funny,shut up Aman.

Aman-But i scared u,u should've seen ur face.

Kaajjal-Yea Yea Watever,Well anyways,where is ur sister Payal,and ur mother?

Aman-They r both in my room packing my clothes.

Kaajjal-Why,r u guys going sumwhere?

Aman-yea we r going to India,But not just us,u r going with us,Cause we luv u!!!

Aman drags Kaajjal to his room.

Kaajjal-Hey Payal wat's up?

Payal-HAAN NOTHING,JUST HELPING MOM!

(By the way Aman And Payal are twins,they r 5 yrs old/They r totally different,Payal is a simple tradional girl and Aman has a attitude,but deep down in his heart,he cares about Payal and his mother,but just doesn't like showing it.Just like his father)

We see a women packing clothes,can't see her face,her hai is covering her face.But she's wearing yellow and orange shalwar kameez with the matching earrings.When she turns around,It's Mukti!!!!

Tell me if i should continue!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue soon<<
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sirjana(^_^) 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww...Nice!! That's really good.. 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow very nice...Plz go on soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THIS IS WHAT MUKTI IS WEARING!


AND THIS IS WHAT KAAJJAL IS WEARING!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MUKTI-KAAJJAL TUM AA GHAYI,WHY DON'T U GO AD FRES UP? DINNER WILL BE READY IN 5 MINS.

KAJJAL-OKAY!!

MUKTI-Aman and Payal,go and wash ur hands or u can't eat.

Aman-we noe,we noe mom just chill,relax mom.

Payal-Hey bro respect her,she's our mother r i'll beat u up.

Aman-dare u.u don't have the guts.

Payal-Wanna bet?

Aman-Yea,i'll give u 10 bucks if u hit me

Payal starts to beat him up,Aman just stands there

Aman-Man Payal u r strong,wat do u eat?

Payal-Shut up and hits him harder.

Mukti-u guys stop,I said STOP,baachon ki tarnha act karte ho tum duno.

Mukti-agar tum dono ne pir aisa kiya na to no video games,tv,shopping,and u guys will be grounded.

Payal and Aman with their sad faces

😕 But Mom !!!!

Mukti-no agar magar,Aman now u go and Kaajjal aunty and Payal will u help me set the dinner.

Aman and Payal-anything for u mom!

Everyone's at the dinner table

Kaajjal-Mukti didi why r we going to India?

Mukti-Kyun ke Aanjali aur Soham ki shaadi ho rahi hai(Anjali and Soham form the serial KavyaAnjali(it has ended now) ).

Payal-Cool!!! I LUV ANJALI AUNTY,SHE IS SO NICE JUST LIKE U MAMMA AND KAAJJAL AUNTY!!

Aman-Maa,she is getting married again?

Mukti-Yup

Kaajjal-tu phir hum kab ja rahey hai

Mukti-Kal ko

Aman-Itni Jaaldi

Mukti-Woh iss liye ke Anjali ne humay Khaass thor par bulaya hai.

Aman-Mom kyaa India aacha hai

Payal-Arre badu,Mama hamesha kheti hain apni country to phir apni hoti hai na

Kaajjal-Kitni baari baari baatein karne lagay hai yeh dono.

Aman-Kyaa mein apna IPOD OR PSP le jha sakta hoon.

Mukti-haan,par Aman tum iss bar vaideh ko taang maat karna,remember the last time when he came here,u made him cry. (Vaideh is Anjali's and Kavya's son from the same serial KAVYANJALI).

Aman-Okay mom,I promise i'll be a good boy.Luv Ya 😉
By the way Kaajjal aunty thanks for that song.

Kaajjal-Your Welcome😊

PAYAL-MAMMA I'M GOING TO MISS MY FREIND MAHA'S BIRTHDAY PARTY,AND I HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN A PRESENT FOR HER YET.

Mukti-Payal hum sirf do hafto ke liye ja rahay hai,not forever,we'll be back before her birthday.

Aman-Hey sis,don't worry we'll get her sumthing from India

Payal-thnx Aman,but by the time we get 2 India.

Aman-oh this time I won't.

will continue Later!!!!1
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww i love it! the kids sound cute! cant wait till prem sees his family!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww...how cute!! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Payal-Thanks Aman,but by the time we get to India you'll forget.

Aman-Oh this time I won't.

Payal-we'll see

Mukti-okay guys stop talking and get ready for bed.

Payal and Aman-Goddnight Mamma(they give her a goodnight kiss and heads to their rooms 😛 )

Kaajjal-I'll help you didi with the dishes and packing.

Mukti-you don't have to.

Kaajjal-It's KK didi,I like helping anyways......Mukti didi i wanted to ask u sumthing.

Mukti-Yah ask me,wat is it that u want to ask?

Kaajjal-are you sure you want to go,you want to face your past.

Mukti-I've forgotten my past,now Aman,Payal and you are part of my life,and by the way we are going to Shimla not Mumbai.

Okay ab baatein both ho gayi Ja ke so ab,Subha ko phir Jaaldi Bi utna hai!!

(By the way guys,Kaajjal is like Mukti's sister that's why she calls her didi,they met 5 years ago.And Mukti knew Anjali from her childhood,they are best buddies.)

In the morning the birds are chirping and the sun is already out.
In Mukti's house,Alarm is beeping "Wake UP WAKE UP"
Slowly slowly Mukti starts to open her beautiful eyes and Yells.

Mukti-Oh God Maray Gaye.Aaj to Late Ho Ke Rahey Gaye.She Starts yelling
"Payal,Aman,and Kaajjal WAKE UP".We are late for our flight.She goes to Amans room,because Aman is the one who takes a lot of time to get dress.

Mukti-Aman wake up,we overslept.

Aman-Maa,it;s only Six o clock.

Mukti-and our flight is taking off at 8:00am.Aman beta tum uthay ho kay nahi.

Aman-5 more minutes

Mukti-Aman I'm gonna drop water on you,I'll count to 5.Your time starts now: 1…………….2……………3…………4…………

He gets up on the count of 4

After an hour later (At the airport,waiting for the departure.)

Aman-See mom,I told you we weren't going to be late.

Payal-Jab tuk aap hamare saath haain hum kabhi nahi late ho gayen aur humay kuch nahi hoga.

Aman-That's a fact Mom.

Aman and Payal-We love you mom.

Kaajjal-What a cute family!!!



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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww the kids are soo cute! they are nothing like prem! cant wait for the next part!

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