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Posted: 18 years ago
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At McDonalds,we see a decent guy with blue AKADEMIKS BAGGY jeans and black shirt,he is no other than our cute Prem.

Kashish-Papa,mein ne naa frechfries lenay hai

Prem-Jo tum kaho little Princess

Aman-MOM lets go to McDonalds,mujhe bohat zoor se book lagi hai

Mukti-Just a mintue beta,Peley hum apna luggage to lene(They leave fore McDonalds)

When Mukti enters McDonals,she starts to have strange feelings.Prem has the same feeling.

Aman-Mamma,I'll have a Hamburger.

Mukti-Okay King,Payal tum kuch lo gi kyaa

Payal-No thnx mom,I'm already full

Mukti-aur tum kaajjal

Kaajjjal-nahi di,meray liye kuch nahi

Waiter-Sir your frechfries are ready

Prem-Thank you(he takes the bag and hands it t Kashish,when Prem turns to give the money,he sees Mukti,he stands there like a statue,staring at her)

Payal-Mamma der nahi hori Kya

(on the other hand)

Kashish-Papa chalye,Papa chalye,Papa kahan kogeye.(she steps on his foot,to take him out of his dreamland)

Prem-ouch ouch ,Kashish that hurts

Kashish-I'm sorry,but you weren't listing to me,Prerna dadi hamara intezar kar rahi hongi

Prem-haan chalte hai,Par ek Minute (when he turns around to see Mukti,she was gone,nobody was there)

As Mukti leaves the airport,she has a feeling that she is forgetting something.She checks to see if Aman and Payal were with her,But it wasn't her kids.It was Prem,who she still loves ❤️ deep down in her heart.

Prerna-Kahan rehghe tum dono

Prem-Maa woh kuch nahi bas,order mein der ho ghi ti

Kashis-lier,Papa,ek larki ko barahy ghoot ghoot ke dekh rahe they.

Sneha-oooooooooohhhhhhhhh Prem Kya chal raha hai

Prem-Woh aur ko nahI,Mukti thi.

Sneha-Mukti,yahan pe kaisay,you must have been daydreaming

Prem-No,it was Mukti,meri aankhen dokha nahi ka sakti

Sneha-if she was Mukti,she is not going to come back.Tum ne use bohat dikh diya hai.

Prem-I know,par mein apni ghalti ko sudarna chata hun.

Sneha-Mukti ko bhol jao,forget her

Prem-Kya tum Sharad ko bhool payee hoo(she goes silence)

Prem-I'm sorry Sneha,I didn't mean to.

Prerna-Sneha aur Prem,kya tum dono sara din yaha par hi roho ghe

(They leave the airport)

Mukti and her family reachs a huge house with flowers all around it.They go inside the house.It's Anjali's and Kavya's family,they are getting ready for the wedding)

Mukti Yells-Surprise(everybody looks at them,Anjali is surprise to see them)

Anjali-Mukti tum yahan,oh my god,I can't believe it.

Mukti-Kaisa laga mera Surprise,chonk kar reh ghi na

Anjali-mein ne to samajha ta ke tum meri shaadi ke baad aoo ghi

Mukti-tum ne mujhe itne pyaar se bhulaya tha,mein kyun na aati

Kavya-aacha hua Mukti tum aa ghi,varna hum tumay wahan leney aa rahe tey.Anjali ki zid thi ke jab tum tum nahi aao ghi,woh yeh shaadi nahi karey ghi.

Dida-ab tum log kitni baatein karo ghe,ab use araam to karne do.(Dida is Kavya's grandma)

Nitya-aur haan Mukti,raat ko Kavya aur Anjali ka mehndi ka sangeet hai.(*Nitya is Kavya's mom)

Mukti-par aunty,meray pass to shaadi ke koe kapre bhi nahi hai

Anjali-uss ki tum fikr mat karo,hum ne phele hi se sari shopping karke raki hai,tumaray,kaajjal,aman aur payal ke liye.

Nitya-now go and fresh up.

The day wnt by so fast,it was such a busy,and it's almost night)

Everyone is busy with the decorations.

Mukti-arre bhaiya idr lagoo,kya kar rahe ho

Anjali-Mukti,tum kabhi takti nahi kyaa.Aaj hi aayi ho aur upar se kaam karna shuru kar diye.Yeh sab karne ke liye kaaffi log hai.

Mukti-Anjali,tu mujhe pir se lecture na dene lag jai,just let me do this.It's fun.Aur tum yahan pe kya kar rahi ho,jaa ke tayar ho jao.

Anjali-haan jaati hun,par to bhi meray saath chal.(Anjali takes her to her room,they start to get ready).

Mukti-Anjali,mein aaj bahut khush hoon ke tum dobara zindagi shuru karne ja rahi ho.

Anjali-aur tum waan hi khari ho,mukti yeh zindagi hai.Humayiss ke saat chalna hai.Dekho Kavya aur mein alaag huay,aur aaj phir hum saath ho rahe hai.Paanch saal guzhar ghai,aur tum abhi tak Prem ko nahi bhooli.

Mukti-shayad kabhi bhula bhi na pahu,Aman aur Payal ne kabhi mujhe bhulnay hi nahi diya.Payal har cheez woh pasand karti hai jo Prem,aur Aman same to same apnay baap pe aya hai,woh hi masoom sa face,woh hi aankhen,woh hi cute sa nose,aur Anjali ab yeh dono hi meri zindagi ban ghi hai.Ab to mein inn ke beghaar ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti.

Mukti-aacha choro un baaton ka,tum batoon how do you feel?

Anjali-excited and nervous.

(Someone knocks on the door)

Girl-Anjali aur mukti didi,ap ko niche bulaya hai,guests aana shuru ho gaye hai.

Anjali-tum chalo hum aatein hai

Niya-Come Anjali,Mehndi ki rasam shuru karey(They place Anjali and Kavya together and starts to put Mehndi on)

Suddenly a strong wind hits Mukti hair,she starts to have a feelings.Then we see Prerna's family entering the Mehndi Ceremony.

Payal-Mamma idr idr aao na,dekh Aman mujhe taang kar raha hai.(She goes to fix their problem,while Prem comes to Kavya.)

Prem-Congradulation brother.😊

Kavya-Thnx yaar,ab tumhari bhari hai(Kavya and Prem are freinds from Colloge)

Kavya-Prerna aunty nahi aayin.

Prem-Aayi hai na,she is here sumwhere.(Prem loooks for Prerna,but instead of seeing Prerna,he sees Mukti.She is with Anjali.)

Dida-baachon yeh mehndi hai,na koi naach ghana.Mukti jaa kar dance karo.

Mukti-dida mujhe nahi aata.(Everyone insists her to say yes) Teek hai par ek shart par,Anjali ko bhi meray saath dance karna hoga.

Anjali-inn kapro mein,in pe to sari mehndi lagi hoi hai.

Nitya-to jao kar badal aao.(Anjali goes to change her room,she takes Mukti with her.)

Anjali-yeh churiyan kaisi lag rahi hai

Mukti-bohat aachi tumhari jaisi sundar.

(They both dress into Red saree,they were looking like twins,the same kind of jewelry.People thought both of them was getting married)

Sneha-Mukti yahan par,how is that possible.

Prem-See Sneha,i told you that she was here.You didn't believe me.

Sneha-okay okay,I'm sorry,I said that because tumay har larki mein Mukti nazar aati hai.

Prem-Why is she with Anjali? and why are they dressed like the same?

Sneha-Mujhe lagta hai,Mukti ki bhi shaadi ho rahi hai.

Prem-Please don't say that,I hope it's not true.😭

The song Dola re Dola,on which Mukti and Anjali dance.(Guys i have the video,but it has Anjali and Pammi in it,You know what think Pammi as Mukti.Replace Mukti with Pammi,here is the Video link.)

http://video.tinypic.com/player.php?v=2weyjo8

Have to go now,sat on the computer all day long writing this,i didn't had the time to do my hw.


Edited by bhattyhuda - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
omg just read it now loved the way you started... it contiune soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
thanks for the update!cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
wow! its really good.. plz.. continue soon. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
You are soooo GOOD writer!!!! I love ur fanfic...!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
aman and payal are shoooo cuutiiezz.....LOL......I love 'em!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat was really gud 😊 finally prem n mukti meet well actually prem sees mukti but itz da sam 😆 wonder how long it'll take 4 him 2 figure out dat aman/payal r his kids 😕 n is Kashish really his kid cuz she calls him papa continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
hey that was reallllly good! hope you can update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
Few minutes have passed away and Prem is just staring at Mukti's beauty.

Prem goes and stands next to Mukti,he taps her on her shoulder.She turns around to see who is it,she turns red.They just stare at eachother while the Khabi na Sukoon aya song plays.Then Sneha comes to disturb them.

Sneha-Mukti(They both hug eachother)

Mukti-How are you Sneha?

Sneha-I am fine,par tum yahan par kaisay.

Mukti-actually woh mein

Sneha-Kya tumhari shaadi ho rahi hai

Mukti-nahi to 😃

Prem-Thank god

Mukti-mein Kavya aur Anjali ki shaadi mein aayi hun

Muktti-choti ma ni aayi kya

Sneha-aayin thi,par mamma ko kuch kaam aa gaya tha,to unay jana tha.

Sneha-Mukti tum in paanch salo mein badli nahi

Prem-aachi baat nahi kya

Sneha-Mukti tum kahan par rehti ho

Mukti-Mein USA mein rehti hun(As they are talking Aman interrupts them)

Aman-Mamma,I heard there is a party.

Prem-Mamma

Mukti-What kind of party is it?

Aman-I don't know,but i want to go.

Kaajjal-Didi,it's a bachelor party.It's organized for Kavya bhaiya.

Mukti-you can't go,it's not for kids

Sneha-Mukti tumhari shaadi ho ghi hai,aur tum ney hamay bataya bhi nahi

Mukti-Actually Sneha (she didn't had the time to tell her,cause aman was bothering her)

Aman-but Mom,I want to go.Please Please Please

Mukti-Aman mein na kahan na nahi.So no

Aman-but mom,you never said no to me 😭

Mukti-Beta please unterstand,it's only for grown ups,and i don't think they'll allow you.

Aman-Agar mein Kavya chachau ke saath jao to phir

Mukti-Then it's okay,but only if Kavya says yes

Aman-to phir chachu ko abhi ja kar poochte hai.

Mukti-not now honey,look mein aunty se baat kar rahi thi.I'm sorry Sneha.

Sneha-it's okay.

Payal comes running to her crying,she hugs Mukti.

Payal-Mamma mein ap ko kab se doond rahi thi.Mujhe laga ke mein phir lost ho ghi.

Mukti-Payal,aisay nahi kaitay.Chalo ab achay bacho ki taran rona band karo

Aman-Ha ha,look at your face.You look like a witch

Payal-and what about you,you look like a monkey.(They starts to fight)

Mukti-Aman aur Payal,Please guys stop it,we are at the wedding,not a fightclub.

Aman and Payal-sorry Mamma

Mukti-now go and play

Sneha-bharey cute se bachey hai tumhary.

Mukti-woh to hai

Nitya-Mukti beta zara idr ana.

Mukti-aayi aunty.Excuse me guys

Sneha-cute kids

Prem-yah,I can't believe she has kids.She has changed.

Sneha-not really,she is still the same.

Prem is all mad and jealous from inside,but he has a fake smile on his face.

Kashish-Papa,ap yahan par kya kar rahe ro

Prem-Kuch nahi

Kashish-lets go Papa.

Prem-okay my Princess

Kavya-kahan reh gaya tha yaar,well you just missed the fun

Prem-Kuch yaadien wapis aa gahi thi. (Mukti is listening to him,she is standing right beside Anjali)

Kavya-Kya matlab

Prem-Kuch nahi.

Guys,i'll probably update tomorrow,because right now i m so sleepy.I have to go to school in the morning.Sorry if there is any speling mistakes,my hindi is not that gud..Bye guys for now.See you later.


Edited by bhattyhuda - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
kashish is prem's and whose daughter?
btw it's really good just went through the whole fanfic

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