For all prem and mukti's fan..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys....I was so bg these days.But i am back now with a short fanfic of prem and mukti.Its actually the ending of the true love story of Prem and Mukti.It starts after 1 year from the real eposide going....on KZK

(Devki is making prem's bed and prem is as usual lost somewhere in his world.Devki looks at prem and goes and sit infront of him....)

Devki:Prem...aap hamesha yese he rehete ho..??Kuch baat bhi nahin karte...??Ajh 1 saal hoge he hamare yis ghar pe ayehuye...par ajh tak hamhe ye bhi malum nahin ki aap mere bare me kya soch te hai..??Perna ji ko mujh par bahoat biswas tha ki sayed main aap ko tik karduinge par.....................,????Ham ab aap ke saath nahin rehe sakte...

(Prem is just looking at her but he donot speak a word...)

Devki:Please..aap mujha yese mat dekeye....??Ham aap se bahoat pyaar karte hai laykin hame pata he ki aap bas Mukti ji se pyaar karte hai...???Hame kabhi aap ka pyaar nahin milega.Laykin ham jaha bhi rahege yehi duwa karenge ki aap jaldi tik hojaye..ab ham chalte hai...

(Devki was about to leave when prem holds her hand and their track is played backstage...)

Devki:kyon aap hamara jana yitna muskil kar rahehe...????Laykin mujha jana hoga kyon ki ab mujh se aap ke ye halat aur nahin deke jati....??

(Devki was just about to leave the room when prem speak...)

Prem:Mujhe chode ke mat jayeo....,,,

(Devki is so surprised to hear his voice.)

Devki:Prem...aap aap...please ek bar phir se boleye please..???

Prem:Mujha chode ke mat jayeo ....

(Devki feels so happy and she hugs him...but prem is still lost somewhere...)

Prem:Mujhe kabhi chode ke mat jana....kabhi bhi nahin...,,

Devki:Ham apko kabhi chode ke nahin jayenge...kabhi bhi nahin...

Prem:Mujhe kabhi akela mat chodena...kabhi bhi nahin Mukti...

(Devki is sad to hear Prem calling her Mukti..)

Devki:Prem...ham aap ke Mukti nahin he ....Ham Devki hai...Devki

Prem:Kya tyo mere Mukti kaha hai...???

Devki:Kyon karte ho aap Mukti ji se yetna pyaar..??bhol jaeye sab kuch.ab yo bapas kabhi nahin ayengi....???Prem...ek riste ki katam ho jane se jindagi katam nahin hote ha..??Insan ko agay badna chahi ye...

Prem:Lekin Mukti ki bagar main jina to kya..jine ke bare main soch bhi nahin sakta.Main uske pas jana chata hu....please mujha mere Mukti ki pas le cholo..please..?

Devki:ap samajh ne ki koshish kyon nahin karte..???Mukti ji ab yis duneya mai nahin hai...

(while Devki is explaining him the truth...prem remembers all the things of his past ..and suddenly he falls from the chair in the floor..)

Devki:Prem kya baat hai ...???kya huyea aap ko..??

Prem:Mera ek kam karoge Devki..???ghar ke sab log se kehena ki main sab se bahoat pyaar karta hu...par main Mukti ki bagar ji nahin sakta aur mayoat bhi hame juda nahin karsakti...kabhi nahin...)

(Then he simply takes his last breath and their story still continues in heaven...PREM AND MUKTI FOREVER....)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww. dats so sad!!!!!!!! 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww thats so sweet but then again so sad..! 😳 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 it's rlly gud and sad
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww. so sweet and sad as well..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet but sad 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww...how sweet!!!!! its so sad as well! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww that was sooo good...and sooo saddd 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOWWWW REALLI NICE AWWWW<< 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks alot for the response..guys

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