|*LSFF*| |updatd pg21| ' valentine dance' - Page 9

Great part!!!!!!!!! 👏
Plz go on soon!!!!!!!!!!!1

just read all of ur fanfic.. its nicee

continue sn

tht was sooo sweeett..plzz cont. soon

aww that was a very sweet update! please update soon!

Yaar when ya gonna go on?!??
Plz go on soon!
cant wait to read the next part!!!!!!!!

@everyone 😳 sorry guys for updating lately...... 😳
here goes the nxt part....

(well b4 i start....here's some new characters....tanya and dev r ppl frm different companies came to canada to represent their companies...prem and mukti had made gd frendship with them...)

there is a knock on mutki's door...
mutki: who is it??
person:mukti it's me tanya...jaldi tayar ho hum drink ke liye ja rahe hain...
mukti: oh tanya..(opening the door)....drink???? 😕 i don't think it's a gd idea..
tanya: comon mukti...it's gonna be fun and anywayzzz we will go for heavy shopping as welll(giving her a wink)
mukti:ok...ok....5 minutes...
tanya:....ok jaan...we will be waiting downstairs...

after 5 minutes...
mukti comes down in a top and a jeans...simple but yet amazingly beautiful...they go to this bar.....dev and prem gets drink for all.....mutki and tanya sticks wid juice.....mutki and tanya r talking while they think of trying some DRINKS as well...one glass of vodka leads to 4 glasses....tanya tried to control mukti but she was uncontrollable.....she started dancing on the dance floor.....prem who was having a quite drink with dev saw this.....he came to tamya and asked what happened??
prem: ye mukti ko kya hogaya...
tanya: usne bohot drink pele...maine rokne ke koshish ke par yo...
prem goes to get mukti but she pushes him and tells him to go away as she was having fun....prem had enough...he left her....mutki who was dancing.....didn't notice that there was some men....staring at her...she was busy dancing and she was total drunk...
one man: oh baby....ur a gd dancer...
other man: comon dance wid us...
mukti who was total drunk didn't knoe what was happening....she started dancing wid them...after some time those men carried her and got out of the bar...prem saw this...he went after those men....
prem: leave the gal alone or 😡 ...
one man:or what??? what u gonna do???
prem punched that man....and then there was a huge fight...dev tried to stop him but he was uncontollable........tanya took hold of mukti.....and prem was busy fighting...(guys do u remember the way sallu was fighting in jaan-e-maan...that how he was fighting....).....the men ran away....prem who was bleeding in his forehead......looked at mutki and just walked away.......while dev and tanya took mukti to the hotel....

nxt day...
the rays of bright sun came to her eyes which mad her awake.....she had a bad headache...and touched her head slowly....
tanya:gd morning ....mukti...how r u???
mukti: very bad... i sudn't have drunk....
tanya: yep u sudn't have....
she told evrything that heppened in the bar...hearing all this mukti felt bad....she was full of tears....
tanya: anywayz.....u stay here i will get u some coffee...
tanya went out of the room....mutki just sat in her bed......she felt guilty for what she done....suddenly she heard someone coming.....it was prem and he had a cup of coffee in his hand...
prem: gd morning....how r u??? feeling betta...
mukti just nodded....
prem put the coffee on her table and walked away when mukti grabed his hand....
mukti: i m so sorry prem.....mere waza se tume....i m so sorry...i won't do it again....
prem sat on her bed ...
prem: it's not abt me getting injured.....it's abt u...what wus i do if anything happened to u???
mukti:confuesd 😕 .....
prem: i..i mean...what wud i say to ur choti maa if anything happened to u....
mukti:(sobbing) i m so sorry....
prem: it's ok....but don't do anything lyk this again...so...stop crying and smile cos tears don't look gd on ur eyes...
mutki started smiling wiping her tears away....

hey guys...hope u enjoyed this part......if not plzz tell me.....plzz leave ur comments and feel free to critisize....

love
kajal

aww really sweet part!continue sn!

wow it realli gd yar<<do cont soon 👏

Awsomee updateee plzz cont soon

that was wiked..

i thought it w ould be like the hospital scene when prem got injured and she's like AGAR TUME KUCH HO JATA TO.. and prem is like AGR MUJHE KUCH HOJATA TO KYA, BASANTII.

to baad it wasnt like that..

o well u came up with an original scene rather than copying her..

continue soooooooooooooooooonnn