FANFIC : Safar - The Journey-COMPLETED - Page 4

awwww soooo sweat! im really happy that prem and the 🤢 debo didnt get married! and yaaay prem read the diarly! hope he falls fo mukti tooooo! keep up the good work, cant wait for the next part!

I am updatting as i am writing so....keep checking every 15 mins....you might get the next part.

After few days Prem comes to Mukti's House

Prem: mein mukti se mille aaya hoon.

Maya: aap kaun?

Prem: mera naam prem hai

Maya: ohh prem….DIIIIIII TUMHARE LIYE PREM AAYA HA….come in sit.

Mukti gets a shock on her room.

Sam: tum prem ho?

Prem: jee

Sam: baito na….mukti comes fast

Mukti is running around in her room. Trying to fix her hair….

She sneeks to the stairs to look at prem. She feels happy for a minute but then….she gets back to her serious look and comes down.
Prem: hey mukti

Mukti: why did you come?

Prem: ……………our pics….the one which we look on the cruise. I got them for you.

Mukti takes the pics

Just then sam comes and the maid brings some coffee and snacks.

Mukti: mom, this is prem

Sam: I know, can't u sit and talk?

Sam leaves them both alone

Just then anurag comes

Prem gets up

Mukti: dad, this is prem

Anurag: oh k, sit …..have something. I have to run to office.

Mukti looks at the pics and gives it back to prem

Prem: I got them for you.

Mukti: debo ki shaadi ho gayi?

Prem: yea

Mukti: chotima kaisi hai?

Prem: good, tumhare barre mein bath kart hi rehti hai.

Prem: mukti, if you don't mind kyat um mere saath bahar aa sakthi ho? I need to talk to you about something. A bit personal

Mukti: forget it prem, kuch kehna hai tho yehi yeh do

Prem: just 5 mins please

Mukti: I have to get ready. I just got up

Prem: ok tum ready hokke aa jana mein tumhare liye bahar wait kartha hoon.
Prem: bye maya

Maya: bye


Prem and Mukti are walking on the street and Mukti is walking atleast 5 feets away from prem

Prem: tum uthna bav kyu kha rahi ho yaar? Kyu mein tumhare liye aaya hoon esliye? This is too much

Mukti: compared to what you did…yeh kuch nahi hai ok

Prem: I don't know how to tell you……PREM GIVES THE DIARY TO MUKTI

Mukti: surprised….did you read?

Prem: yea

Mukti: ok bye

Prem: mukti,hum shaadi karle? : I am in love with you, I am sorry I am telling you like this on the street. I don't have time for planning. What do you say?

Mukti: what will I say? Juthey se do marungi. Dil mein debo ko rakhke propose karne pe sharam nahi aathi? Main ja rahi hoon. Don't waste my time. If came for this, then I am sorry. The one I wrote in the diary was before debo episode not after ok.

Prem: what if I prove that debo is not in my heart?

Mukti: this is the matter of heart, not math or science that you will prove.

Prem: you are mad at me because I said yes to debo na? what if I have never thought of marrying her. Will to believe me then?

Mukti: haan, ek jump marke tumhe kiss dungi par…nahi…tum eske layak nahi ho

Prem: mukti, listen…chitnu ne jo paper khaya tha usme koyi directions nahi the. It was a blank paper.

Mukti: agar na kartha that ho…yeh sab karne ki kya hai?

Prem: mukti, debo thodi pagal hai, shaadi se ek din pehle agar uske mann mein mein hut ho acha nahi lagta. Who confusion finish karne ke liye maine who kiya. Anywayz she will be happy thinking I am a useless fellow.

Mukti: tho mujhe pehle kyu nahi bathaya?

Prem: well, I thought us problem mein tumhe kyu involve karna…anyway…you guys are friends right.

Mukti smiles..

Mukti: ok ok, tho mere wajah se tumhara shaadi nahi totti?

Prem: no

Mukti: ok lets go

Prem and mukti go to a coffee shop

Mukti: so whatelse?

Prem: everything is cleared right? Am I ok now?

Mukti: ok mein pehle hi keh rahi hoon, you proposed to me first. Which means you said I love u first. Baadh mein argue nahi karoge na?

Prem: no, kabhi nahi karunga

Mukti: mein tumhare peechey padke tumhari shaadi nahi thodi. Ok?

Prem: ok ok

Mukti: agay future mein debo tumhare paas aake prem, mein kuch nahi huetc etc kahe tho tum kya karoge?

Prem: straight tumhe aake bada dunga

Mukti: who baadh mein, pehle usse zoor se do thapad maaro. Ok?

Prem: ok mam

Prem and Mukti are walking on a street

Mukti: now tell mees saree mein debo se beautiful hoon?

Prem: yea

Mukti: aisa nahiek kiss ke saath..confident se.mujhe life long yaad rehna chahiye.

Prem gives Mukti a kiss

Prem: ab hum debo ke barre mein kabhi nahi bath karenge ok?

Mukt gives her favorite scraf back to Prem and they HUG

Now you see Prem and Mukti walking alone on the street, holding hands.

Prem: eey mukti, patha hai, mujhe do naaye projects mille

Mukti: oh really? Good good very good!

Prem: one of 1 million another one is 1.5 million. Tho kya karu? Tumhe pyaar karu yacompany ko?

Mukti: mujse pyaar karthey huecompany mein kaam karo..

AND YOU SEE BOTH OF THEM WALKING HAND IN HAND .AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVERY AFTER

INSPIRED BY : GODAVARI "SOUTH MOVIE"

awww your fanfic is really great hun! different then the other ones! i cant imagine our prem being soo nice! anyways, i will keep checking every 15 min for the next one! keep it up!

haha that was quick! GRAET fanfic, i really liked it! it was really short tho, im sad its over 😭 . so how come you decided to end it?

lol. godavari eh?? it was soo cute with prem and mukti though!!


i ♥ prem!

Awesome Fanfic! 👏
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Sad it ended so quikly.. 😭

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tht last part was so cute ur ff was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud am sad it ended so sn

awwwwwww.. ur fanfic was soo nice and different frm the othr ones... itz was realli nice... but im sad tht u ended it soo soon 😭 .. but heyy thnkz for the grtt fanfic