luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx for updating.. it was gr888 plzz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
good update. make mukti and prem better.
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Posted: 18 years ago
realllly good! plz update sooooon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx guyz i m gad u like it

here is the next part

prem got beaten by the goons sent by omi and mukti came out of coma.
prem is opretion theatre . prerna is sitting on a beach beside the opretion thetre and crying and remeber sme old memeries wid little prem. then she thinks about mukti. and remebers how prem and mukti used to fight alot. baja is walking bck and forth and sneha is with mukti. they didnt told her nayhting about prem. sneha was trying to hide her expression and worries about prem and trying to avoid that situatiuon by taking care of mukti.
mukti: umm sneha woh prem umm prem kahan hai?????
sneha is shcked and she is really confused wat to say..
sneha: umm woh actually. woh kahin gaya hai and then she told her everthing like how he used to take care of her nad how prem to et frustrated hwn docotr used to giv u injections and even bout his confession of his lov toward mukti and every single thing...
mukti was too shcked and happy to say anyhitng on the same time .the tears wee rolling down her face.
mukti: sneha u r my frend and maine tumhe aj tak har baat khai hai, sach to yeh hai ki i still luv prem a lot and i m not able to forget him. today is my happiest day of my life. i hope he comes back soon.
after listing to wat mukti said sneha coudnt take it anymore.
sneha: main abhi ayee
sneha went outside nd start crying she remebered all those momnets she spend with prem and mukti. suddnly she hears some1 calling her nme she got up and looked around and see prerna coming running toward her.


perne awas callin her name. sneha runs toward her mom.
sneha: mamaa kya hua mamma?
prensa: woh huhuhuhuh woh . she was trying to catch he breath.
sneha: mom sit down tell me wat is it.
prerna: woh woh prem woh mukti ko milna chaht hai. and then she collapsed on floor and start crying.
prerna: dcor keh rahein hain ki uski sanaen kam ho rahi hain plz mukti ko bulaonahin to mar jayega.
sneha: mamma mukti ko kaise bulon woh abhi abhi coma se bahar ayee hai plz mumma there must be ither way.

then suddly she realises prerna is lookin at something shocked. she got up slowoly and kept lookin at the smae direction. sneha turned around and she was shocked tooo. it was mukti who came out after listing to prerna's shout for sneha . she heard evrything. she was still ansd tear were rolling down her face. she stood like that for another 3 mins. she had some falshes back of him and prem and then suddly she start to rnning toward the opretion thetre. she push the door hard and went indside. there we saw prem laying down on bed wiht oxygen mark on his face and his eyez were closed his head was full of badges.mukti was walkin slowly wiht watery eyez and she sits beside him. she looked at him.a tear rolled down he eyez which dropped on prems wounded hand. prem opened his eyez slowly nad looked at her. she was crying . prem looked at her and he got this expressionlike he got evryhting. prem sloly tried to talk but he coudnt suddly his breth start to sink he hold mukti hand tihgly mukti got tensed
mukti: prem ... pem kya hua prem... plz prem aisa mazak mat karo prem get up prem....
prem was trying to say somthing he removes his mask..
prem: mukti mu ......kti huh i am sorry mujkti...ahhh mukti I Lu ....V you.
mukti was crying she kissed his hand .
mukti:prem i luv u too. plz prem dotor dotr ..
prem: i have to go ...
mukti nahin tum mujhe chod ke nahin jaa sakte .. prem prem ...
prem colsed his eyez his girfen of mukti hand satrted to get loose.
mukti: nahin pprem nahin tum aisa nahin kar saktea... prem tumhe merimkasam prem .......
prem took a deep breth after this.. his griffen got tighter.
mukti: haan prem tumhe meri kasam... prem opened his eyez and give her a little smile..
prem: dekha rok liya naa.
mukti smiled and higged him so tighly and docotrs came in .. they did the ckckup on prem. they were really tensed for something .. they didi same test agin and agin . mukti was getting woorry. after a while docotr came cout.
docotr: yeh kya hua??????/ well mr bajajhe is out of danger now and he is fine. but tis is a miracle. bcz after this kind of accident ppl hardly survive.


muktihugges him and cried prem. relises this and move mukti back. prem wipes his tear ands a tear rolled down his cheek.
mukti looked at him
mukti:prem kya hua? yeh jya?
she wiped it
prem: pata hai mukti main tumhari wajeh se ayay hoon wapas. mujhse wada karo ki tum mujhe chod ke nahin jaogi...
mukti kissed on his hand: nahin karoongi. ouch!!
prem:kya hua kuch nahin woh jahan goli agi thi wahan dard ho raha hai.
prem: i m sorry yeh sab meri wajeh se hua hai...
mukti: pagal yeh to kismat mein tha chlo so jao ...
docotr came in: mukti u shud be resting ur sticjhed are still raw. mrs bajaj..
prerna comes in and kiss on mukti and prems forehead.
prerna: jee
docotr: pl mrs bajaj mukti abhi theek nahinhui hai plz isse kahyie ki yeh aram kare..
prerna gave her a got to room look.
sneha comes in and take her with her to her room
prerna sits beside prem and put her hand on his
prenm: mom can i ask u somrthin?
prerna: sure beta wat is it?
prem: woh mom u know everythin dat how much i luv mukti but right now i m not in thestae wwhere i can go to see her everyday. can u plz do something about so i can see her everyday.
prerna smile dand kissed on his forehead: main abhi ayee.

after a while some ppl came intoprems room adn took him somewhere pem was to scik to asy something he was half asleep bcz of injection ppl took him into a large room and made himlay down htere prem wentsleep.when he got up he saw himself in differtn room he looked on other side of this bed ther ws an old guy . he made a face and then he looked on the second side . he saw mukti. there was a smile on her face.. prem was surprised . prerna comes in smilimg.
prernem: ab to theek hai na?
prem try to get up: ur gr88888888 ouch!!!
mukti came running toward him..
muktui: r u alrite?
prem: yeh and they stare into eachother eyez.. prerna waslooking at him and smiling..
porerna: ahem ahem.. to main ab choon.
pernma md mukti realized and they turn red mukti went back to her bed... and she turned around..
p[erna was smiling and prem winkied at her she turned around and sayas slowly: i love u prem
prem: {slowly} i love u too. they both looked at eachother and smiled.





well dats it for today ssorry fo dely
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwww da last part was so cute 😳 hope they'll alwayz be lik this plus want omi 2 suffer 😆 update soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww that was really sweet!continue sn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWWW..gr8 stuff!!! plz cont soon........ cnt wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 greatt update jaan! 👏
plz cont. soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was AWSOME... plzz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww that was sooo cute! great hun! please update soon!

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