luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was absolutely fab!!!!!
👏 continue son
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Posted: 18 years ago
tht was awsum hun plz cntinu sn
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Posted: 18 years ago
its gr8t continue soon plz!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg soor guyz was busy wid my axams thanx for wonderful comments.
herez the next part hpe u will like it.

prem and mukti got discharged form the hospital after a month or so. prem was eagr to go out bcz he hated the smell of medicins of hospital and mukti want to go bcz she hated the injections she used to get. finally prena cam inside with two wheelchirs one for prem and one for mukti bcz docotr refused for walking bcz of prems broken leg and mukti's unhealed wounds.the ward ouyz ans nurses helped both to sit on the wheel chairs and take them to the car. while they were pushing the chairs together prem tried to hold mukti's hand but gave him a lookbc prerna was walklin holdinh her chair. prerna did noticed it and smiled. finally prem gave up and made a sad face but they sat in the same car but the dirver was driving the car not any1 fromt he family. so prem didnt want this opprtunity to slip oiut form his ahnds. mukti was still shy but prem was too stubbron he keeps saying some romantic things to mukti whch maes her big eyes to look down in shying way. suddnly prem kissed her on her cheek while she was looking other wway. driver almost looses the control after watching it. prem turned red when he got to know dat drver saw everything . drivar and mukti brust out laughing. perm satyed quite for rest of the time . mukti was trying to contrl he laugh. they reached home. mr baja and sneha helped prem and mukti to take inside . prerna did aarti while prem was making faces and getting bored and gave a bored lok to mukti. she gave him a look whihc made him to standstill and then they went to thier room. thier room was besid eeachother. everybody was taking a really good care of them. prem most his time spended with mukti and sneha ore mom for time pass. he tried to take care of mukti to like reminding sneha about mukti's madicine and her food time same wid mukti she used to remind prerna dn kaka to give prems food and medicins. day passed by . prerna helped prem to try to walk again and sneha helped mukti for the dressing of her stiches.

its been a month{i know to many leaps but hope this one is las one 😆 } prem has started to going to office from last week but mr baja didnt let him work too much but still prem always tried to sneak in bcz at home he was gettin bored. today mr baja said that prem shud rest and sty him but u guyz know our prem..

prem decided to sneak in the office...

prem comes n the office with lots of files in his hand.
prem: dad woh actually aap yeh files ghar pe bhul aye the.. isiliye main lekar aa gaya.. andhe plzced hem on the table..
mr baja: par beta main to koi file ghar bhool kar nahin aya.
prem: dad u r working to mucj. just look at u . took out his hankerchif and wiped mr bajaj forhead but there was to sweat.
mr baja was really confused with prem's behaviour.pem sat ifront opf him and gave hima puuy dog dace wid a cute smile... 😳

mr. bajaj: so i forgot these files at hime right....
prem: ofcourese. dekha aapka beta kitna responible hai. he knmmows abut the importacnce fof work..
mr. bajaj brust out laughing..
prem was confused but he dnt wanna go home so stated to lauge too and joined him..
mr baja stopped now there was only prem who was laughgn so hard that staff started to gather around the room... prem suddnly noticed and stopped laughin immedialty.
prem: yeh sab aise kyun dekh rahen hain???????
mr baja: so beta yeh itne zaroori files timhe milli kahan?
prem; woh dad mere room mein padi thi...
mr bajaj picked up a red covered magzine with a really beautiful chick in bikney on the frint page. prem who was miling suddly got shicked and his jaw dropped.
mr baja: prem beta humara bussiness to cars ka hai bikni's kaa nahin... and brust out laughign agina.
prem was so embarseed and he got up.
prem: dad ek hi to hia galti se aagay hoga yeh dekiye kitne zaroori file hai. and he picked up some thing without looking at it and waved with the same hand to the staff memebers who were ooking at him and they brust out laughing too. prem was dedly confussed suddly he noticed that there is another thiose white chics magzine in sexy pose on the front. he drooped it on the florr.
prem: awww!!!!!!
prem looked at mr baja who needs air bcz he was sweating bcz he was laughin so hard and the the staff was roolin n the floor holding thier stomachs. prem looked at both side and ran outside. he was chewing his nails in the car and making wiered face while driving to house. when he got home he amde himslef to look relax like ntn happened. and walked in house he opened the door and closed it behind him whe he turned around every1 was their holding the gigling. prem got suspicous
prem: oh no!!!!!!!!!! dad didnt!! or did he????????? oh crap!!
he ran toward his rom and slammed the door.
downsatirs prerna , mukti, and sneha wer aughing their heart out .


ok guyz that it or today i habve lots of hw 😭 😭 but promise wil updat tommrrow with pm scenec . plz leave a comment wether u lik or not


Edited by adorablegurl - 18 years ago
Robin_M thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww poor prem! that was really good, please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow that was really funny!continue sn!
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Posted: 18 years ago
really good plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hahaha... it was realli cute and hilarious!!! haha.. im still laughingg... cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guyz i am gonna cont tonite sorry for dely was busy wid the new house 😭 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok finnaly i get some time eto update actaully i am so sorry guyz i was busy wid the exam and new house finally one more exam to go then stupid next smester will start. ok back to my ff hope u will like thias part...


prem was hiding in his room from past 2 days. he was so embarresed about the incident at the office. he took out all the magazine {adult one} and through in the garbage. evry1 new about this so they kept lauginh. prem can sense it that they find it pretty funny.
prem: {thinknn}i hpe mukti doesnt ind anythign about it else she will kkill me for sure!!!!
prem was really tensed whe he heard evry1 is going for a vacation to hawai sisnce it was good for bothe luvers. prema was excited to hears this but he was still to embarssed to go infront of any1.

prem came downstaris with preteding ntn happened.
every1 was siting on the couch try to control them selves when they saw prem coming down. sneha was tturning red bcz she coudnt control her laughter.
prem: heloooooooooo beautiful peeps....
sneha brust out laughing and so does evry else. prem was standing emotionless when he saw them laughign like this
prem: okokokkookokokokokokokokokokok i am sorry actully woh mere nahin mere frenz ke the . stupid reahul mere ghar pe chod gaya tha.
prerna stood up: theek hai theek hai zayad abane banae ki koi zaroort nahin hai. hum sab jannte hain. god aaaj kal ke ladke bhi na ufff
prerna leaves saying: apna saman pack karo hum sab hawai jaa rahin hai.
sneha: mom phir se hawai abhi last year o gaye the naa aur plz mom whan pe bhai ladkiyon dekhte hi lottoo ho janten hai aur main to bor hotin hoon.enko dekh karplz mom lets o some where else . ok agar beach pe hi jaan ahai to ummm how about malasiya?????????
prem: pehli baaris stupid ne sahi baat ki hai ... mom i m bored from hawai plz lets go tomalasiya. its beautiful... plzpzlpzlpzlpzl can we?
prerna: hey bhagwan... mrea sar mat khao theek hai hum malasiya hi jauenge.
prem: wohooooooooooooo yo sneha give me five...
sneha: thanx mom and she ives him five.
prerna; arre haan main to mukti ko bolna bhool hi gauye jaa use bol ke aa prema.
prem: okie dokie
sneha: waa mom bhai ko to jackpot laga
prem: sneha ki bachi tujhe to main baad mein dekh loon ga.

prem went to mukti's room she wasnt ther and then she went into the gardan. mukti is sitting there with white suit on and looking at the flowers happily. wind is blowing fine today.
prem was satnding still looking at mukti the tru beauti.prem thnkin: how can i didnt see that the true beauti i was looing for was infront of me andit wsright here go prem tum to bilkul pagal ho.

suddnly a fast blow of wind came and mukti was still siting looking at the flower but with the wind a really small stuff went into mukti's eye.
mukti: ouch!!!!!!!!!
prem came out forom his fantasy he runs toward mukti
prema:{worrie} mukti r u ok? kya hua ? r u in pain shud i call docotr?
mukti{smiled}: dyffer meri ankh main kuch haio issi liya. plz help me ouch it irriteted.
prem: move you hands away and let me open ur eye and blowin it.
prem was blowing relly careully. the way helowed it makes mukti felt some butterflies in her stomach.
prem: ab theek hai
mukti{blushes} haan thanx so much
prem: thanx se kaam nahin chle ga aaj.
mukti? to phir???????/
prem: woh kya hai ki aaj mausam bada hi acha hai aur mereto meethe ko man kar raha hai. so kuchmeetha ho jaye.
mukti: lets go to icecrem parlor.
prem makes face and smacked on his forhead:yeg ladki bhi na itne badi boddhooo hai. go iska kuch karo.
mukti sensed that prem was upset botu her naive answer so when prme was thinkin she gave him a kiss on his cheek and ran away.
prem was schocked for a moment he didnt realise tht mukti ws gone . he looked around and got up andrn tomukti's room.
mukti was siting on her bed blushing thinkinabout the kiss. prem looked ather fomr ouside while he made way to his room. he went o his cup board and take out a blue daisry.
prem : at time is now? god mera phine kahan hai....? oh thanx ok it 2:08 pm . ab se theek 2 min and 45 seconds pehale mujhe mukti ne pheli baar kiss diya. so 2:06:15 seonds pehele wow my first kiss with mukti. actually mera cheek kis ka wieght seh nahi paiga it feelin heavy and lovly he wrote it doen in dairy{ps actually guys the timing and last two lines are formmy boyfriedn and now officialy finace he sid it when i gve him kiss for the first time} 😆
ok back two story
prem ws blushing for another 15 min then suddly: ooop sssssssss i forgot to tell her.
prem to ran mukti's room who was fxin and bagpack. wen she saw prem she turned around.
prem; woh mukti mom ne kha tha ki hum jarhae n hai. to tum packing karo.
mukti: well mom ne bata diya already mujhe
prem: muktiwoh thanx
mukti: prem meain abhi kusch nahin bol sakti plz u can understand it right.
prem: ofcourse i can u r my luv and i need to understand u bcz u willbe m,y life partner soon enohg . by the way gulabjamun tasty thi and the went away
mnutki was still blushing and she was thingin thant soon =enogh prem will be officialy her and prem as thinking them same thing too.

well thats all for now gotta go update tonite for sure
thanx
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