My Fanfic:Kangana,pg 58: Death!!! - Page 2

Here's the next part, hope u guys enjoy it. and most of this is in hindi, if u need translating then let me know. This has probably got to be one of the netter scenes that i've written:

Recap:

Prem who looks extremely angry and ready to explode says nothing. He walks in to the house and looks straight at Prerna who is currently at the bottom of the stairs, he continues to walk straight towards her


Everyone is stunned and shocked to see Prem in this states, yet Prem continues his steps towards Prerna. He stands right in front of her, looks her in the eyes and shouts " MOTHER …INDIA. MEHNEY KAHA TANA AP SEH? Mehney kahan ta, ke meray aur Mukti ke pyaar ke beech na aanah! Mehnay kahan ta ke jo humaray pyaar ke beech aay ga, meh usay nahin choru ga." Prerna is shaking at the moment.

Yet Prem continues "Kyun? KYUN? Meh Mukti seh pyaar karta hoin, Legin nahin, Aap ko to mujpe vishwas nahin hain na?! AAPNAY… apnay mujha aur Mukti ko juda kiya na! Jantay huwa bi ki meh usay kitna pyaar karta houn, aapnay…aapnay Mukti ki shaadi kisi aur ke saat fix kar di, Legin meinay phir bhi kuch nahi kaha! Kuch kya?Nahin na?" Prem is looking at Prerna with penetrating eyes, and Prerna manages to shake her head. Prem continues "Aur phir aapnay Mukti ki sagai bhi kar di! Mehnay kuch kaha?! Nahin kaha na?" Prerna once again managed to shake her head "Legin aaj! AAJ! Aapnay bohat bari galti ki hain!"

Everyone watches and is surprised at what Prem is saying, what wrong could Prerna have done? Anurag steps forward " Prem, beta tum saaf saaf bataoh ke baat kya hain?". Prem looks at Anurag " Aaj, aap nahin mujay rok saktay! Dad Basu. Meh hostel gaya ta, Mukti seh milnay. Aur mujai pata laga ke Mukti toh wahan par hain hi nahin! Aur mehnay bahar bench par yeh… yeh Mukti ka engagement ring dondha" Everyone in the household takes in a deep breath as they look at the engagement ring in Prem's hand. Anurag starts to ask "Toh phir Mukti kahan hain?!"

Prem answers "Wohi toh! Zaroor yeh Mother…India ki koy nahiy chaal hogi. HAIN NA MOTHER…INDIA! Zaroor aap janti hogi na? Legin aap.. aap ko kya fark parigaa? Aap mujay kyun bataoh ki? Pehlay seh meri zindagi karab ki hain aap neh!! ( all the flash back scenes: of prem getting beat up in jail, Prem getting hit by prerna, Prerna slapping Prem, Prerna pushing Prem out of the house, Prem standing by the gates)ab meh aur karab nahi honay donga. Aap ko batana paray ka, ke Mukti kahan par hain?! Where is Mukti?"

Then this is followed by Anurag asking the same question " Prerna, Kahan hain Mukti?" the dadi with the same question, they all join in Sam, Indro, Tushar, Doris, Kuki and Sneha, Kaki and her husband, the same question is going around and around in Prerna's mind.

Finally she screams "Nahin pata mujain! NAHIN PATA!!!"Everyone goes quiet. Prerna continues "Nahin pata mujay, ke Mukti kahan hain! HAIN PREM HAIN! main tumharay Pyaar ke raastay meh ayi. Legin tumseh badlaa lenay ke liya nahi, mainay yeh sub Mukti ke liya kiya. Mukti ki marzi seh kiya. Tum meray betay ho na, legin who bhi meri beti hain, uski marzi se yeh sub kiya hain, uski Kushi ke liyai, ussay poch kar kiya!" Prem and Prem are looking straight at each other.

Prem breaks the silence, he seems to have calmed himself down a little "I don't care. Mujay apni Mukti chahiyai". Then Prerna says "Aur mujay apni beti chahiyai".

And the Mukti search team is out!!!

Whilst in another house we see that someone is laughing with joy, they turn around and its… Debonita, "Kya baat hain aunty! humain Mukti ko iss kahani seh nikal na ta, but she left by herself,"
Komolika turns around "Don't laugh too much debo, ya mukti bapas agai toh?"
Subrato turns around "we have to find Mukti before Anu Da does!"
Debo gets upset "and then what?"
Subrato smiles, "Toh phir hum…" The camera fades out whilst Subrato tells them his plan

We see shots of Anu, prem and prerna out looking for Mukti, asking people in the way, showing photo's of Mukti, people shaking their heads.
Then we see Debo, subrato and komolika on the look out for Mukti as well
Who will find Mukti 1st? Only time will tell!!!

That's all for today and here's the precap:

Forgetting everything else, Prem starts to run up the stairs. We see Prem running up the stair and shots of the mandir, the wind blowing wildly, the bells chanting and the back of someone's head.

Hope u guys like it,

hey great fanfic, continue soon

Here's the next promo and tommorrow i'll update 2 chapters:

Then the naukar saying to Prem "Sir, someone is here to meet you"
Prem asks "Who?"
"They are sitting in the lounge waiting for you"

Prem walks towards the room, as he enters the room he sees that there's one male and one female, their sitted so that Prem can't see their faces.
He turns and walks towards them and is surprised as he see's these peoples faces the 2 people are…

Who could have come to see Prem? Who are these 2 ppl???

wow nice fan fic!! plz continue soon!!! 😉

WOWW! thats amazing! u write with soooo much detail and understanding...(then again i cant read half the hindi 😳 ) but still it felt as though i were there...please continue to post 😉

u are really a fantastic writer!plz cont soon!

ya ur a nice writer i like ur fanfic ithink ur fan fic is da best so please carry on best of luck 👏

Originally posted by: reeha...k

WOWW! thats amazing! u write with soooo much detail and understanding...(then again i cant read half the hindi 😳 ) but still it felt as though i were there...please continue to post 😉

Hey reeha, like i said if any of u need help with the hindi then cut those bit's and i can translate them to english for u. The reason that there is so much hindi in it is cos it sounds sooo much betta in hindi😆, and so much more emotional to.
Anyways i'll update 2 chapters tonight and thanks for the great comments guys, and dont for get to check up my other fanfic titled: Kya hoga Kunal Ka...?(link provided below)

JJ😃

Here's the 2 chapters that i promised, hope u guys like them:


We see shots of Anu, prem and prerna out looking for Mukti, asking people in the way, showing photo's of Mukti, people shaking their heads.
Then we see Debo, subrato and komolika on the look out for Mukti as well
Who will find Mukti 1st? Only time will tell!!!

Prem looks around the street, it's still raining heavily and theres a strong wind, he's getting more and more frustrated and thinks to himself 'Mukti, tum kahan ho?😕' Then turns to get in the car, but out of the corner of his eyes notices something. He turns around to look properly and notices the temple. It's the same mandir that him and Mukti had gone to, he remembers the moments
Flash back:
Mukti telling Prem that prerna had said that he needed to go to the mandir, mukti dragging Prem up the steps of the mandir, Prem and Mukti sharing a thali, mukti and Prem together praying 😃

He snaps out of the thoughts, realises that for some reason he feels like he need to go to the mandir, as if somone is pulling him there, then thinks to himself 'What is happening to me? Kya Mukti…?' He realises that Mukti could be in that mandir, yet something inside of him is convinced that she is, he says "Mukti yahan hi hain!" 😳

Forgetting everything else, Prem starts to run up the stairs. We see Prem running up the stair and shots of the mandir, the wind blowing wildly, the bells chanting and the back of someone's head. Prem gets to the top of the stairs, breathing very heavily. He steps forward and realises that there is a girl standing in the middle, her clothes are swaying with the wind. Instantly he realises that it's Mukti. Not wanting to disturb her he walks quietly to where Mukti is standing. He stands right next to her and looks at Mukti's face. There are tears running down her face and she seems to be upset about something. 😭

Prem can't stand it anymore and goes to wipe Mukti tears, but before he can touch her face Mukti grabs his wrist.
"Mukti?" Prem looks at her confused
"Behenay do inn ansooho ko Prem" she tells him 😭
"Legin.."
"Nahin, yehi to meri sazaa hain. I always thought that u were the one that was wrong, but…"
"But what?"
"Yeh sab to meri galti hain, aur meh buktoon ki is ka anjaam"
Prem holds Mukti's face and looks at the straight in the yes "Mukti, Kaisi galti?"😕
"Meineh tum hain galt maanah ta, tumhare pyaar ko galt maanah. Meinah socha ke…"
"Kya socha?!"
"Meinah socha ta ke…" she realises that first she need to talk to Choti Maa, so decides to change the subject, she wipes her tears and looks at Prem and says "Hum ghar ja sakte hain kya?"
"Legin"
"Prem meh ghar janah chati hoin"
"Hain, hum chalte hain"

Prem and Mukti walk to the car and drive off, whilst we see someone behind one of the pillars of the mandir saying "we were to late, Prem found Mukti 1st" 😈
On the other side of the phone Komolika shouts down the phone "Debo, tum ek kaam teek se nahin kar sakti ho." Komolika slams the phone down. Subrato puts a hand on Komolika's shoulder and says "don't worry we can still get Mukti" 😈

Prem and Mukti are riding home. Prem continuously looks at Mukti who seems to be thinking hard, he realises that this is not the time to ask questions and thinks ' when she's ready she'll tell me herself. Their car stop at Basu house, Prem turns to Mukti and says "Mukti, can I ask u something?"
"Sure" Says Mukti
"Did Mother India know where you were?"
"Nahin, meinay toh kissi ko kuch bhi nahin kaha ta"
Prem realises that he's made a huge mistake for blaming Prerna for everything, and realises that Prerna had nothing to do with Mukti's disappearance.

Mukti and Prem both get out of the car and walk to the Basu house.

Everyone in the house is busy looking up friends of Mukti, looking through the phone book and Prerna looks extremely worried. All of a sudden the door opens and in walks Prem, everyone looks at him, he steps aside and standing behind him is… Mukti 😃
What will happen now? Will Mukti tell choti maa everything? Who will Mukti marry???


Everyone in the house is busy looking up friends of Mukti, looking through the phone book and Prerna looks extremely worried. All of a sudden the door opens and in walks Prem, everyone looks at him, he steps aside and standing behind him is… Mukti 😃

"MUKTI" Prerna with tears in her eyes runs up to Mukti, she hugs her and generally worries about her and bombards her with questions (😆)"Tum Kahan thi? Kaiseh? Tand to nahin lag rahi hain? Kaanah laooh?"
Everyone is paying attention to Mukti and Prem looks around and starts to feel awkward thinking 'she's safe, I should go'

As Prem turns to leave, Prerna surprisingly says "Thanks…Prem"
"No problem," he says and starts feeling guilty about how he had accused Prerna of knowing where Mukti was, he says "aur joh meineh earlier… kahan ta… Who meh parishan…"
"We understand" replies Anurag looking at the interaction between mother and son, he thinks 'This was the first time Prem had ever try to set something right and now Prerna has realised how much Prem cares for Mukti,' 😃

Later into the night when Prem had left and everyone had gone to sleep, although in one room the lights are still on, and that room was Mukti's.

Inside Prerna and Mukti are having a heated dicussion
"why did u just leave like that, Mukti?"
"Choti maa, mujse bohat bari galti hogay hai"
"Kyun pahaliah buja rahi hoi, Tell me what u mean?" 😕
Mukti goes on to tell Prerna about how she had hear the conversation between her and Komolika in the hospital and how she wanted choti maa to have her love back 😳
Prerna turns around after all that she has heard
"Hain pagli, meray liya itnah sab karne liyai tayar thi? Aur tumharah pyaar, uss ka kya?" 👏
"Choti maa, app merah sabkoch hain. Apna mujain kabhie maa ki kameey mehsoos hi nahin karan dhi. Aap hi to meri maa hain, aur apko to apna pyaar mil raha ta…"
Prerna interrupts Mukti "but what about your love Mukti?"
"Aap ke samneh merah pyaar to kuch bhi nahin hain"
Prerna shakes her head and tells Mukti "today for the 1st time I realised that Prem is serious, Woh tumse bohat pyaar karta hain, bohat parishan ta woh. Beta sach sach batana, do u love him?"
"Pyaar to menah Prem se hi kiya hain, Legin…" Mukti thinks about Kul. She has a flashback:
Mukti telling Kul that she doesn't love Prem, Kul telling her he will always try and keep her happy. Mukti and Kul's sagai

"phir Kul ka kya? Uss ka dil toot jay ga"
"Toh phir tu kya karaay ki Mukti?"
"Kul se shaadi!" 😲
"Legin Prem, Mukti aisay to 3 zindagiya barbad ho ki"
"Nahin choti maa, iss sab meh to 1 hi zindagi barbad ho ki"
"What do u mean, mukti"
"I mean ke shaadi karne ke baad Kul kush hoga, Prem ko mujse nafrat ho gi, toh who toh kisi aur.."Mukti stops, tears fall down her eyes as she can't imagine Prem with anyone else. 😭
"Legin Mukti… Tum to"
"Nahin Choti maa, please aap kuch nahin kahengi. Please, vaada karo" Mukti looks at Prerna with tears staining her cheeks, waiting for prerna to answer,
After a long pause
"Mukti Mujse yeh nahin hoga!" And with those parting words, prerna runs out of the room

Prerna is laying on the bed, thinking of her life, the flashbacks
how she had gotten married to Mr Bajaj, about how much she loved Anurag, about Prem (no.1) and their family. About all the kasauti's that she has been through. Then she gets flash backs of UD/Prem about her telling him off, hitting him, slapping him and never trusting him.
Finally she sits up and says "Anurag teek ke raha ta, Prem sudar sakta hain". Early morning we see a shot of prerna leaving the house.
What is Prerna up to? What will she do? Where will she go?

I'll update again tomorrow and here's a precap:

"Mukti ka shaadi ka card!" Replies Prerna
Prem steps back with disbelief in his eyes. Mukti couldn't do this! She couldn't!!! in shock Prem whispers "Nahin…nahin"
"Hain, and this is the 1st card. Fresh off the printing press" Kul answers, Prem continues to step back, not believing what he has just heard
"Tumharay liyai" adds Prerna and she puts the card down on the table.

Guys all i can say is that it's really gonna get exciting now, so keep reading😃, chapter 6 is very emotional, for Prem lovers theres loads of Prems scenes and dont miss 7th chapter another twist in the story, i cant say anything else as i would give the story away. I'll post another promo from 6th/ 7th chapter later on

Hey guys, i said i'd b bak didn't i, here's the promo from the 7th chapter where there is another twist

Promo:

Prem picks up the envelope, slowly takes the card out,(complete silence) turns it over and opens the card up. He looks down at it and goes completely still….
What's going to happen the next time???? Will Kul and Mukti's wedding go through??? Will they get to the wedding?? Why is Prem frozen???

Okay that's all, hope u guys liked and yep i now how evil i am😈 leaving u guys in so much suspense but all i can say is keep reading and all the secrets will be revealed.😎