1ST FANFIC OF PREM-MUKTI-KUL-UPDATED PG 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur fanfic is really nice..u know wht??? this might happen in kzk or maybe not..who knows..anyway awesome fanfic..continue.i m waiting
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Prem goes home and has not idea whats happening to him

Prem to himself: agar mukti zindagi mein aage bad rahi hai tho mujhe kyu jalan ho rahi hai? Meine hi tho kaha usse shaadu karne ke liye. Mujhe yeh kya ho raha hai?

Debo sees Prem in a very depressed state.

Debo: Masi, Shaadi thak rukhneki koyi zarrurat nahi hai. App papers ready karwallo prem sign karega.

Komo: kaise?

Debo: wooh aap mujpe chod do.

Prerna: Mukti, dinner kaisa tha?

Mukti: chotimaa kya yeh aap janthey the kul kya karne walla hai?

Prerna: hum sab janthey they…main tumhare liye bahut kush hu. Ab mujhe sagai ki thayyariya karni hogi. Main kul ki mom ko abhi call karthi hoon.


Next morning Mukti walking

Prem: hello basanti? Kya hua aaj tumhara fianc chodne nahi aaya?

Mukti gives him an angry look and keeps walking.

Prem gets off his car.

Prem: teek hai tho mein company de detha hoon

Mukti: prem tumhari problem kya hai?

Prem: kuch nahi basanti

Mukti: tho tum mujhe pareshaan kyu kar rahe ho?

Prem: mein aur tumhe, hey listen yeh public road hai air mein jab chahey yaha chal saktha hoon.

Prem is walking in front of Mukti

Mukti just then slips into a auto and tells the driver to go.

When Prem turns around Mukti is long gone.

Prem: kaha challi gayi? Dam


Prerna: mukti, tumhe aaj Kul ke saath engagement clothes ke liye shopping jana hai

Mukti: chotima mujhe bahut kaam hai

Prerna: well yeh important hai aur tum ja rahi ho. Maine kul ko call kiya aur who tumhe lene aa raha hai

Just then kul comes on

Kul: challe

Mukti: yah tum challo mein close karke aathi hoon

Kul and mukti to go the mall

Kul: mukti. Yeh kaisa hai??

Mukti remembers the time when prem helped her select the dress

Mukti: yaa teek hai?

Kul: come on mukti, what do u mean teek hai. Tell me what you like.

Mukti: kul, tumhe jobi pasand ayega mein woo peheungi

Kul and Mukti do their shopping

Kul: challo dinner pe jathey hai

Mukti: teek hai

They land up at the place where debo and prem are having dinner

Mukti and Kul don't notice them but they notice kul and mukti

Kul: kya logi?

Mukti orders

Kul: waise humne puri shopping ki hai par tumhe aur kuch chahiye tho yeh mera credit card apne paas rakhna

Mukti: kul, that's ok

Kul: mukti, tum meri fianc ho…tumhara haak bantha hai.

Just then Prem comes

Prem: oh hey mukti, what a surprise?

Kul: aap

Prem: kya mukti, tum mujhe introduce nahi karvaogi

Mukti: kul yeh prem hai aur yeh kul mere fianc

Prem: oh yea tum finally shaadi kar rahi ho….good good…very good.

Kul: thanks, and nice to meet you

Debo calls Prem and he goes up to her

Kul: Mukti wanna dance?

Mukti:ok

Kul and Mukti are on the dance floor dancing but Mukti's prem

Prem is burning with jealousy, he has tears in his eyes.

Debo: prem challo dance karthey hai

Prem: nahi tum jaoo mein akela rehna chahtha hoon

Debo: kyu? Kya hua?

Prem: kuch nahi , maine kaha na jaaoo.

Debo: mein……

Prem: shut up and get out

Debo gets mad and she leaves

Prem goes home….he is restless and has no idea whats happening to him.

Anurag comes in with Sampatha to the same restaurant

Prem is sad and sitting at the bar drinking

Anurag goes up to prem

Anurag: kya hua prem? Tum asise kyu ho? Tumhe tho kush hona chahiye Mukti ab shaadi kar rahi hai. Tumhi ne usse kaha tha na? ab kya hua? Patha hai prem jab thak tum usse nahi kho do gey tumhe mukti ki value nazar nahi ayegi.Apne aap se jhoot bolna bandh karo and accept the fact that tumhe mukti se pyaar ho gaya hai. The more you run from the truth the more it will haunt you.

Prem is sliently listening to this

Anurag: dekho prem maine zindagi mein apna pyaar khoyaa hai aur tumhe aisa karne nahi dunga.

Prem gets up and leaves and he is staring at Mukti and Kul.

Prem in his room

He imagines mukti looking at him and talking to him.

MUKTI: MAINE KAHA NA KI TUMHE EK DIN PYAAR HO JAYEGA. PAR TUM YEH BAATH NAHI ACCEOT KAROGE.

Prem throw a vase at the door but there is no one there. He remembers what anurag said.

Prem: kya yehi pyaar hai? Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki agar mukti mujse door ho gayi tho mein nahi ji sakunga.

Just then debo comes in.

Debo: mujhe tumse kuch bath karni hai

Prem: bolo

Dbo: mujhe tumse shaadi karni hai

Prem: kya?

Debo: haan, mein aur intezaar nahi kar sakthi

Prem: mein tumse shaadi nahi kar saktha and karunga bhi nahi tho yeh bath tum bhool jao

Debo: tum mere saath aisa nahi kar sakthey prem.

Prem: kyu nahi kar saktha?

Debo: kyu karna nahi chahthey prem? Mujhe batao….

She keeps screaming at him

Debo: mujhe patha hai kyu…kyuki tum mukti se pyaar karthey ho. Bathao prem mein tumhare mooh se sunna chahthi hoon

Prem shouts………….HAAAAAAAAAAA….KARTHA HOON MEIN USSE PYAAR

Debo: yehi mein sunna chahthi thi. Ab dekho mein us mukti ko jeene nahi dungi. Wooh hamesha hamare beech mein aathi hai

Prem: agar tumne mukti ke saath kuch bhi kiya na….i will have to kill you

Debo: tum dekhna….mein usse nahi chodungi. Mein dekthi hoon ki wooh kush kaise rehegi

Prem: mein tumhe warn kar raha hoon.tum mukti see door rehna

Prem leaves

Next day prem drives by to see if mukti is at the bus-stop

Mukti is sitting at the bus stop reading some file

Prem goes up to her

Prem: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Mukti: mein tumhari koyi bath sunna nahi chahthi ok

Prem: tumhe sunna padega

Mukti: kya chahthey ho tum mujse ?? huh??

Prem: mukti mein tumse pyaar kartha hoon. I love you

Mukti: tum? Pyaar? Kya tumhe pyaar ka matlab bhi patha hai? Kya hua tumhari so called fianc ne tumhe chod diya

Prem: mukti please meri bath suno

Mukti: prem, mein ek nayi zindagi shurru karne ja rahi hoon. Tum ne tho mujhe kahi ka nahi choda. Please mujhe sab kushi se rehne do

Prem: mukti, mein jantha hoon ki maine tumhare saath bahut galat kiya. I know you have every right to reject me. But please mein tumhare bina jee nahipaunga

Mukti: prem mera bus aaya hai mein ja rahi hoon

Mukti leaves


Prem is frustrated sad and has no idea how to tell Mukti that he is madly in love with her.

Prem goes to Mukti's hostel.

Security: tum andar nahi ja sakthey. Visiting hours katham ho gaye.
Prem: dekho urgent hai. Jaake Mukti deshmukh ko bulao.

Security calls Mukti

Mukti comes down

Mukti: kaun hai??

Security: waha par hai.

Mukti goes and sees Prem

Mukti: tum? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??

Prem: Mukti, please meri bath suno

Mukti: meine kaha na prem mera peecha math karo. Bahar barish ho raha hai.Ghar jao

Prem: mein nahi jaunga. Jab tak tum aake mujse I love you nahi kahogey mein nahi jaunga.

Mukti: prem tum pagal ho gaye ho. Tum kuch bhi karo. Bye

Prem is standing outside in the rain. Staring at Mukti's window

Its raining heavily and prem is getting wet in the rain.

Mukti is looking out from the window.

Mukti can't take it anymore.

Mukti runs out with an umbrella.

Mukti: prem, please jao yaha se.

Prem: mein nahi jaunga jab tab tum mujse I love you nahi kehti.

Mukti: Tum samajthey kya ho apne aapko? Jab chaha tukra diya and Jab chaha apna liya? Yeh garuntee kya hai ki kal tum mujhe nahi chodogey?

Prem: Mukti, mujhe ab samaj mein aay hai kit um mera zindagi mein kya ma
Hine rakthi ho. Tumhe khone ke badh patha chal raha hai.

Mukti: Prem bahut deer ho raha hai. Tum ghar jao

Prem is disappointed and goes home
Mukti is in her room and has no idea what to do? He is in love with Prem. She is happy at one end finally he has realized and sad from another end about her engagement.

She is struggling between her past and her present.

Next day Kul and Mukti go for dinner and Kul comes to drop Mukti off at her hostel.

Mukti is getting ready for bed when her phone rings

Mukti: kul?? Kya hua?

Kul: Mukti, mein hospital mein hoon. Prem ka…

Mukti: prem ka kya? Kya hua prem ko? Mein aa rahi hoon

Mukti runs out gets a taxi and runs into the hospital.

She goes up to the reception Prem??

Reception: room # 203

Mukti runs up the stairs and runs into the room.

She sees Prem sitting on the bed and Kul next to him.

Mukti sees prem she stands agains the wall across him and just drops down on her feet. She starts crying.

Kul: Mukti? Kya hua? Are you alright.

Prem goes up to Mukti

Prem: mujhe kuch nahi hua. I am fine

Mukti looks at Prem and hugs him.

Kul sees this and understands how much she loves prem and how much prem loves her.

Mukti: I am sorry.

Mukti gets up and runs out.

Kul goes after Mukti

Kul" Mukti tum apne aap se khoot nahi bol sakthi

Mukti: what do u mean?

Kul: mukti tum prem se pyaar karthey ho and aur tum usse tho tum yeh sab kyu kar rahi
ho. Tumjao prem ke paas

Prem comes outside.

Mukti: tum dono samajthey kya ho apne aap ko? Jab chaha apna liya aur jab chaha tukra diya.

Mukti leaves. Prem and Kul just stare at eachother.


Komo: debo, tum thoda intezaar karo. Maine sab plan kiya hai. Maine prerna ko kaha hai ki agar wooh prem ki shaadi tum se karde tho mein usse bajaj ka patha bathungi

Debo: kya par aap nahi janthey ki bajaj kaha hai?

Komo: haan muje patha hai. Par yeh plan se tho hum jeeth jayengey. Prerna no bajaj nahi milega. Prem aur Mukti ko unka pyaar nahi milega and hume property mil jayegi.

Debo: wow mausi yeh plan tho bahut acha hai. Par prem?

Komo: prem tho ek bewakoof hai. Usse tho kuch samaj mein nahi ayega. Usse tho yeh bhi nahi patha ki meine usse bachpan mein kidnap kiya tha.

Just then they hear something and turn around they see PREM

Debo: Prem???? Meri bath suno

Prem slaps debo.

Debo tumhari himmat kaisi hui.

Prem: tum dono mere ghar se nikil jao abhi essi waqt warna mujhe patha nahi ki mein kya kar baitunga.

Debo: tum aisa nahi kar sakthey

Prem: oh ya wait and watch

Prem holds debo and komo's hands and drags them out of the house.

Prem realizes all the mistakes he has done. Just then anurag comes in.

Prem looks at him and bows is head.
Anurag: ab tumhe patha chala ki apne kaun hai? Mein tumhe lecture dene nahi aaya hoon. Tum mere betey ho and mein tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon. Mujhe patha hai ki aaj tumhare saath koyi nahi hai, par mein hoon. Mein tumhe apna pyaar khone nahi dunga. Jo sajja mujhe milli hai mere bete ko nahi milegi.

Prem looks at anurag and has tears flowing in his eyes.

Anurag: aaj ees prem ki ladai mein pyaar ko jeethna hoga.


MUKTI'S WEDDING

Prem comes to the wedding and standing at the back very sad.

Anurag: agar tumhara pyaar sacha hai tho mukti kudh tumhare paas ayegi. Yeh emra waadha hai

Pandit: dulhan ko bulayiye

Prerna and everyone are bringing Mukti down. They are walking down the stairs and Mukt sees Prem and starts crying.

As they are walking down Mukti stops on the stairs

BACKGROUND MUSIC

Jaane wafa hokey bekarar, Barsoo kiya maine intezaar , Par kabhi tumne nahi yeh sab kaha jo ab kaha, Dil bebasi mein cupke se rotha hai, Kya karo hayee kuch kuch hota hai.

Mukti is staning on the stairs crying.

Prerna: Mukti, chalo, kul intezaar kar raha hai

Mukti doesn't move

Just the Kul gets up and brings Mukti down

Kul: Maine tumhare ankhon mein mere liye pyaar dekhna chaha. Mujhe ab dhikayi de raha hai. Par wooh mere liye nahi hai. Wooh prem ke liye hai. Tum yeh kyu kar rahi ho mukti? Jao prem ke paas. Tum dono ek doosre ke liye banne ho.

Mukti starts to cry

Mukti looks at prem and walks towards him

Mukti goes up to prem and starts crying.
Mukti: tum hamesha mere saath aise karthey tho. Pehle mera dil thodthey ho and phir yeh sab karthey ho.

Prem: I LOVE YOU

Mukti: nahi, ab mein nahi manne walli

Prem: I love u

Mukti: tumhara yeh masom chehre se mera dil nahi pigalnne walla

Prem: I love you

Mukti: you know what, you don't derserve me. Tum mere layak hi nahi ho

Prem: but I love you

Mukti: I hate you I hate you so much

Mukti goes to prem and hugs him tight

Mukti: I love u too……………………………

Prem and Mukti hugs and cry

Prerna tears are flowing. Anurag is happy that finally prem and mukti are together.




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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!think i'm the 1st one ........wonderful part and way tooo ooooo long ....just as i wanted it to be!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks!!!!!COUNT ON SOON
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
omg that's soooooo good. plz count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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it was fantastic... i have really no words to describe... the last part was like kuch kuch hota hai....loved it.. continue soon.... 👏
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#27
wow!that was such a great part!continue sn!!
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#28
awwwwwwww so sweet!! nice fan fic ..... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
woww it wassssssss fantasticcc
plzz contt soonnn 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg...so sweet and so cuteeeeeeeee...i wish this really happens in kzk...omg.mindblowing fanfic....plz continue as fast as u can 👏 👏 👏

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