1ST FANFIC OF PREM-MUKTI-KUL-UPDATED PG 4

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This fan fiction starts after September 1st episode. After Mukti and Kul meet, Prem imagines Mukti.

MORNING

Mukti's cell beeps….

SMS: KUL: COFFE PEENEY CHELENGEY?

Mukti calls Kul

Mukti: inthi subah??

Kul: Madam mujhe nahi patha aap kab cooffe peethey hai, par mein tho morning hi pitha hoon.

Mukti: kul wooh actually

Kul: Mukti, pehle mein tumhara dosti banna chahtha hoon. Mein tunhe samaj na chahtha hoon. Aur milne se hi yeh sab possible hai. Tum ready ho kar coffe day pe aao, mein tumhe unske bath office chod dunga.

Mukti: teek hai.

COFFEE DAY

Kul is waiting for Mukti

Kul: good morning

Mukti: good morning

Kul: I am sorry agar tumhe jagake ………

Mukti: that's ok.

Kul: tho tell me kya logi

Mukti: coffee

Kul: breakfast bhi karo.

Mukti: maine socha hum coffee ke liye mille hai

Kul: well, madam kya aap mere saath breakfast karenge??

Mukti smiles: sure sir

Kul and Mukti have breakfast

Kul: ok I will drop you

Mukti: kyat um mujhe bus stop tak chod sakthet ho?

Kul: kyu?

Mukti: tumhara office mere office ke rasthey mein nahi hai, tumlate ho jaoge. Mein apni adapt chod na nahi chahthi

Kul smiles: ok tumhari marzi. Par ek sharth?

Mukti: kya?

Kul: bus aane tak kya mein tumhare saath wait kar saktha hoon

Mukti: ok

Kul and Mukti are waiting for the bus

Kul: mukti tum shaam ko kya kar rahi ho??

Mukti: kyu?

Kul: well mein soch raha tha…mein tumhe dinner pe lejau

Mukti: well depends agar kaam jaldi ho jathi hai tho mein tumhe call kar dungi.

Kul: ok mujhe call karna

Just then Prem is driving by………………………………………………….

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow yar this is nice 1 👏
but seriously yaar i can't stop thinking abt PM's future now a day
anwayz do continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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interestin continue soon wonder wat prem will do when he sees mukti n kul 2gether
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
thats really gud plz continue 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow thats awesome continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Debo and Prem are in the car

Prem passes by Mukti and Kul and sees them in the rear view mirror.

Debo sees them too

Prem's face becomes very sad

Debo: Kya hua? Tumhari chehra uthar kyu gayi?

Prem is just quite

Debo: oh yea…mukti ki ko kissi aur ke saath dekh kar tumhe jalan ho rahi hai??

Prem: tum apna bakwas band karo. Mein kissi se nahi jaltha

Debo: right, who tho dikh raha hai

Prem: hey you listen, tum apna kaam se kaam rakho and stop butting in ok.

Debo to herself: ek baar shaadi ho kar property mere naam aane do thab bathungi.

Prem drives away.

AT WORK

MUKTI'S CELL BEEPS

SMS : KUL: I HAD BREAKFAST WITH A VERY SWEET GIRL. I THINK SHE LIKES ME. WHAT ABOUT YOU?

Mukti smiles…..: kaafi romantic hai!!!

SMS : MUKTI: I HAD BREAKFAST WITH A TEEK TAAK LADKA. I THINK HE LIKES ME. LAGTHA HAI EK PYAARA RA DOST MIL GAYA.

Kul smiles…:not bad !!!

EVENING

Mukti finishes her work and goes home.

Prerna: mukti tum abhi tak thayaar nahi huyi?

Mukti: kaha jana hai chotima?

Prerna: well kul ke saath dinner pe jana hai na??

Mukti: apko kaise patha

Prerna: kuch deer pehle uska call aaya tha. Tum nay eh dress pehno.

Mukti: yeh kyu?

Prerna: maine kaha na

Mukti : teek hai



Mukti gets ready

Just then a driver comes in

Mukti: yes??

Driver: mam mujhe Kul sir ne beja hai Aap ko lene ke liye.

Just then Mukti's cell beeps

SMS: KUL: OFFICE MEIN KUCH URGENT KAAM AA GAYA. MEIN TUMHE RESTURANT MEIN MILTHA HOON.

Mukti gets a bit annoyed

Mukti: ok tum challo mein aathi hoon

Mukti: chotima mein chalthi hoon

Prerna: teek hai beta. Have fun

Mukti reaches the restaurant. Kul is not there

Mukti: excuse me I am here for Mr.Kul Khanna

Reception: Mam, please go inside the door on your left.

Mukti: ok

Mukti opens the door and goes in. There are no lights. Mukti Enters…….

Prem comes to the same restaurant

Prem: I need table to for two

Reception: sorry sir we are booked today

Prem: what the hell? Mein yaha hamesha aatha hoon.

Reception: sir today there is a special event in the restaurant and someone ahs booked all the tables.

Prem: how can they book all the tables. Mein jaake dekhtha hoon

Prem goes and opens the door.

Prem is looking

There is a spot light on Mukti

Kul comes walking towards her

Mukti: Kul yeh sab??

Kul: Please. Just Let me. Mein jantha hoon ki aaj tum mujse pyaar nahi karthi. Par Mujhe yakeen hai ki ek din zaroor karogi. Main us din ka itezaar karunga kyuki mein jantha hoon ki who din zaroor ayega. Bas aaj mujpe barosa karlo. Kyuki yeh barosa hum dono ke liye kaafi hai. Yeh floor mein pehle bhi dene chahtha tha, par nahi de paya. Mukti, marry me.

The lights turn on……

Kul kneels in front of Mukti.

Mukti closes her eyes for a minute. She opens it and says YES!!!

Courtesy for this scene: KAL HO NA HO.

Prem face feezes. Tears come into Prem's eyes. "KABHI NA SUKOO AAYA KABHI NA KARAAR"…..

Prem turns around and leaves.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg!!
amazing part!
i feel so sorry for prem but he deserves it!
awesome part!
plz cont soon!
u rock!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
hey do continue soon
gr8 part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww tht was sooo sweet count soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ooooooooooo!aa...a...m....az....amazi.....ng....amazing.... 👏 i loved it......ummmmmm....just a request could you please ....CONTINUE RITE NOW IF U R LOGGED IN......PLEASE

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