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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul



P :do u think I'l touch a ugly creature like u?if so,then
u r wrong.i'm from a gud family.i wont touch a girl &n bsp;

lol i rly like tht part

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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
vaah kya fan fiction hai very interesting 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
Part-5….Sneha:what?I just don't believe this
Mukti:this is the truth.he
said he's madly in luv with
kali.i saw them coming
2gether.
S:I cant believ that prem
does like this.where is
prem?
M:he is sleeping.
M makes tea.M gets an idea.she
puts salt into it. Prerna
cums:u made tea 4 prem?very
gud.giv it 2 prem
M:prem may not drink it
S:why?
M:bcoz…he said he'l drink tea
only if its given by u
aunty
Prer:that's bcoz he is used
it.don't feel bad beta.then
don't call me aunty..call me
mama
M:sorry mama.actually,I was
used 2 calling u
aunty.that's why
Prer:its ok.i'l cum with u 2
prem.then he can't refuse 2
hav ur tea
M smiles:thanku mama
M & prer go 2 the room.Prer
shouts:prem..get up
M laughs.P gets up & is
embarrassed getting insulted b4
M.
Prer was tuf:did u tell mukti
that U WONT DRINK TEA UNLESS
ITS GIVEN BY me?
M:no mom
Prer:don't lie.2day onwards mukti
wil b the one who is
giving u tea.so drink it
M smiles & gives the tea.P
tastes the tea.P gets
irritated tasting salt.why did
u stop?drink
P stares at M.M tries 2
control her laughter.P drinks
it.M winks at him.Prer goes.
P:2day u made me drink salty
tea.i'l make ur life salty

M:really?I luv salt
M smiles & goes.P gets
irritated. &n bsp;

Prerna:2day I'm going 2 make
a grand lunch.
P goes inside the kitchen.
Prer:as usual u r helping
me.mukti…prem always helps
me in cooking.he is a gud
cook

All hav lunch.P brings a
pudding. P:sorry,its specially
made 4 my luvly wife
mukti.only she'l get it
All r smiling. Slok:so sweet.a
romantic dish
Prer:hav it mukti
M thinks:sumthing is wrong
M extends her hand. P:no,I'l
feed u
All smile. M stares at him.P
feeds her.Its really
sour.she cant bear it.
Every1 goes. P:now u realized
how disgusting 2 put wrong
things into the food?
P smiles & goes.M is angry.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14

plzzzzz conti its very intersting
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
Part-6…Sneha goes 2 p:prem..tho I'm younger than u,
I'm ur bhabhi eventho u call me by my name. so plz don't
feel bad.why r u torturing nimmo?
P was shocked. S:u may b shocked how I no abt it.u no
that mukti & r close friends eventho I got married
early.
P becomes angry.P thinks:so she was telling everything 2
sneha
P:u r wrong.mukti is the one who spoiled my image.that's
why I cant sit simply.i'l destroy her peace.my marriage
plan was also 2 take revenge on her
M cums there:that I realize.i no that ur intention is
only 2 desturb me.but don't think I'l tolerate
everything like balaji heroines
P:u r not that courageous.u were always a shy girl.u
were even scared of boys
M:I was a shy girl.but nowdo u think I'm like
that.otherwise I wud'nt hav talked like this 2 u
M goes. P is confused.
Prerna:prem & mukti shud go 4 honeymoon.
P:it's a waste mama.so boring
Prer:why don't u think abt mukti.every girl wants honeymoon
with her husband
M thinks:honeymoon with him.i'l never long 4 that
Slok:mama,actually bhai wants honeymoon.b4 marriage he
used 2 tell that his dream is go 2 a beautiful place
with his wife
Every1 except M laughs.P is embarrassed.Suddenly P
clicks an idea:ok,we 'l go 2 goa
M:no no..no need
P teases:whats this mukti?why r u so shy b4 others 2 say
that u too r interested 2 go 4 honeymoon
All laugh. M is angry.M thinks:this stupid fellow is out
of the track.how can I go with him 4 a honeymoon?it'l b
so boring & irritating
M is irritated. M:a trip with only 2 ppl..it'l not b a
fun.so u all shud cum with us.
P thinks:whats this stupid girl up2?
All smile. P:no mukti ,ur trip wont b boring even if we r
no there.infact it'l b boring if we r there with u all.
Slok:ya bhabhi.bcoz how can a newly married cuple
tolerate oldies?
Prer stares at him.Slok keeps silent.All laugh.
Prer:in 1 way,slok is right
M did'nt no what 2 say.P smiles. P says in his mind:
just see how I'm going 2 spoil the trip

WHAT'L HE DO?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Part-7...Mukti is angry with prem:why did u tell others

that I'm longing 4 a
honeyoon?2 insult me?
P:yes,2 insult u.u insulted me
b4 sneha.now I made u
understand how hurt u'l b when
u r insulted.but usually
silly girls like u wil b
longing 4 a cool honeymoon with
cool & sexy guys like me
M:u r sick
P did'nt care.

P-M go 2 Goa.They stay
in a guest house.The NEXT
DAY,P is about 2 go out.
M:where r u going?
P:2 the beach.who wont go 2
goa beach?I no that u won't
2 cum with me 2 the beach.but
sorry kali wil b there
with me.so I don't need u.u
no..she's waiting there 4
her hot bf
M:u think like kali I'm
hanging around u?never.i'l go 2
the beach.but not with u
P:thanku so much
P goes.M is angry. M goes 2
beach.M sees P alone.M
smiles:where is ur hot gf?
P is embarrassed. M:why
does she wait 4 her silly
bf?right?
P is irritated. P's cel rings.
K:its kali's.she'l reach
here soon
P talks 2 kali:hi sweetheart
Kali:sorry prem,I cant cum 2
the beach
P:what?don't tell like that.
Kali:my grandmom has cum.she's
taking me 2 temples.
P:when did u start going 2
temples?
Kali:what 2 do?I'm forced 2
accompany her
P is irritated when he sutch
off.
M smiles:what happened?ur hot
gf is not willing 2 cum?
P is embarrassed. M:I new that
she'l not cum.bcoz I've
never felt that she luvs
u.otherwise she wud've waited 4
u.poor boy
P:enuf.she is
hospitalised.that's why
M:oh really?ur luv made her
physically weak?
M laughs. P cant tolerate it.
M:anyways,I'm going 2 enjoy
the waves.u imagine kali
dancing with u in the waves
M goes 2 play in the water.P
is angry:cum soon.we've 2
go soon
M:u don't want 2 enjoy in the
water?if no,ok…I wont cum
out intil I get fed up
P:then I'l go M:ok,go.i'l
cum alone 2 the guest house

P:I'l go home M:really?then
u'l hav 2 answer 2 ur
parents' questions
P is fed up & had 2 wait 4 M.

They go back. Prerna:how was
the trip?
P:it was extremely boring
Slok:really?I don't believe
this.this is bhai's acting
mama.i no what he wud've done
with bhabi there
M smiles at P.P gets angry.
Prer:hold ur tongue
slok.this is the wy u've 2
talk b4 ur brother & wife
S:sorry…but how can I not
ask?how was the honeymoon
bhabhi?
M:it was very sweet
S:wow!tho bhai lied,bhabhi
told the truth
All laugh.P is irritated.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
HEY DAT WAS RELY GUD
ive just started to read ur fan fic now n its rely gud please cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Part-8

MUkti tells Prerna:mom,I've
an offering 2 god since god
has brought us 2gether,
P:whats that?
M:prem has 2 walk 2 the
Shiva Parvati temple by foot
Prem is shocked:what?I
cant.almost 5 km.never
Prer:u shud'nt tell like that
beta.God wil punish u.its
god's grace that u got a wife
like mukti.u shud do it
P stares at M.M smiles in a
teasing way.
P:why not?but what we both
planned is to go
2gether.is'nt it mukti?
M is shocked. P:actually I
scolded mukti 4 that.that's
why she did'nt tell that she
wants 2 do the
offering.mukti is longing 2 do
so
Prer:why did u scold her?she is
such a nice girl.she's the
real devotee of god
P smiles at M.M is
angry.Prer:both of u go.god bless both
of u 4 a long happy married
life
Prer goes.P:u thot while I take
strain,u can sit
simply?no.u'l suffer.its my
word.
M was determined.

Both walk till the temple &
sweat.Both walk till the
temple & sweat.M is really
tired. P laughs:this was ur
decision 2 do this jhoota
offering & now u r cant bear
it.so funny
M is angry.

The next day,P gets ready
4 a party. M:I'm not
interested 2 go 4 a party.so u
go alone
P:no,u've 2.otherwise I'l make
every1 believe that u r a
cheater
M is irritated:after walking a
lot,my legs r paining
P:don't find any silly
excuse.don't lie abt pain
M:I'm not lying.
P was sharp:u've 2 cum.
Finally M gets up & wears a
costly salwar kameez.They go
4 the party. All r dancing in
the party. Kali who has
worn a very small skirt & a
short top cums & hugs K:hi!
P looks at M's expression. M
thinks:so 2 show this only
he brought me here
Kali:why don't we dance
2gether? P looks at M:why
not?
Kali-P dance 2 chori{saathiya}


TUshar looks 4 his car key.
T:Oh!.i'd given it 2 Prem
when I went out.now I've 2 go
out also.let me go 2 the
party
P goes 2 the party hall.He
sees M sitting alone.
P:mukti!
M is surprised 2 see him.
T:where is prem?
M thinks:wow!this is a nice
chance
M pretends 2 b dull.M:he is
dancing.
T looks at the ppl who r
dancing. He was shocked 2 see
P dancing close 2 Kali

WHAT WILL TUSHAR DO?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
dat was rely gud please continue sooon

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