Prem n mukti FanFic(part 12 on pg 5 or 6) - Page 3

thanx
i'm kinda running out of stories to write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Part 6:

Sorry for the delay guys. I was just really busy with my homework and other stuff. L

The nest morning, everybody is happy. Prem and mukti cum downstairs together but (they're their sam old selfs again) arguing. They sit on the dining table still arguing. They are having an argument on wat everybody shud eat for breakfast: Tushar and kuki join prem's side and sneha and kasak joinf mukti.
Mukti: NO! Mujhe voh yucky sandwiches nahi khaane. Iwant alloo ke parathe.
Prem: CHUP! Moti! Jab dekho khaane ke baare mein sochti rehti ho. Aur kkoi kam nahi hai kya tumhe?
Mutki gets mad and is about to throw butter on his face. Just then. Prm duck in his chair. Behind h im is birju kaka. The butter hits him right in the face.
Everybody except mukti laughs.
Mukti: prem! Too ther to jaa--
Prerna: (interrupting) Bas! Bas! Tum dono bhi na! Ab ye haal hai to shaadi ke baad kya hoga.
Prem: maine kuchh nahi kiya, ye to basanti-- (suddenly realizes wat prerna just said)
Mukti: shshadi?
Prerna: haan, shadi. KYun, kya khayal hai?


Part7:

The nest day, Bajaj and prerna go to jeevan.
Bajaj: Hum tumse aaj kuchh maangne aaye hai.
Jeevan; Kahie sir.
Prerna: Hum prem ke liye mukti ka haath maange aaye hai.
Jeevan is ahocked.
Jeevan: Mujhe khushi hai iss baat ki ki aap logg meri mukti ka haath maangne aaye hai……………….lekin…….prem?
Prerna: Tum chinta mat karo jeeevan. Prem badal gaya hai, who mukti se pyar karta hai.
Jeevan: Nahi… mein nahi maanta. Ye meri beti ki zindagi ka sawaal hai.
Prerna and mr. bajaj try to convince jeevan but he doesn't agree to the marriage.

Part 8:

They go home and see everybody waiting for them eagerly. When they see the sad looks on prerna and Baja's faces, every body is really tensed.
Prem: maa…….kya hua?
Prerna and mr. bajaj don't say anything, they just look at prema nd mukti and nod with a hopeless look ont heir faces.
Everybody is shocked.
Everybosy slowly leaves. Only ones left are prem and mukti. After staring at each other for a long time, both of them leave with tears in their eyes.
Later that afternoon, prem goes to talk to mukti.
Prem: Listen…………………….mukti….
Mukti turns around and hugs prem before he could finish his sentence.
Mukti: Prem, aisa kyun ho raha hai.
Prem: Mutki…..mein jaant ahoon ki hum dono ek doosre se bohat pyar karte hai ……lekin kal holi hai aur hum dono ko apna gam chhupa kar sabki khushion mein shaamil hona hoga.
Mukti nods in agrrement but still crying.
Meanwhile, tushar, kuki and sneha are having the same conversation. They want them to keep prema nd mukti and want them to have a fun holi.

yeah such a short one 😭 but a gud one.. thanks but keep posting 😉

ive just read all of the story an its rly rly gd
plz count soon 😛

Part 9:

The other parts were so short.
I think that this might be the last part. I will end this and maybe start with a new fanfic. Or maybe I MIGHT continue with this. I donno, I'm not sure. We'll see.


The nest orning, prem comes down and sits on the couch. He takes the news paper up to his face and starts reading. A while later, he looks up and sees sneha and tushar to his right and kuki and kasak to his left. They are all smiling and have their hands behind their backs ( they have "rang" in their hands) Sneha cums towards prem.
Prem: Sneha…. Don't you dare!! Sneha snehaaaaaaaaa!
…………….and he has red color all over his face.
Prem grabs sum "rang" and starsts running after sneha. He is about to throw it at her when she ducks. Behind her is mukti. PRem gets mukti right on the forhead. She has red color in her "maang".
Everybody is quiet all day becaue of the incidents tha happened between prem and mukti.( They can't get married but yet all this is happening to them which is just making them closer which is hurting them) Prem tries to sheer up everyone's mood but it doesn't work.
At night prewm goes to talk to mukti about sumthing important.(u'll find out later)
The nest day everybody is in the living room. Jeevan is there too. He is saying sorry to Mr bajaj and prerna on how he rejected the marriage proposal for mukti. And he cars about his daughter and blah, blah blah…
Suddenly, sumbody is in the doorway and calls "Chotimaa"
Eveeryone turns around and is shell shocked to see prem and mukti standing in the doorway holding hands.

heheh they got married did they not 😉

hi
this is first time i read it out. i really enjoyed it. prem n mukti is my favourite n i like ur dreams for them keep it up ........................
melissa

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot
u have to continue plz do!!!!!!!!!!!!

Part 10:

Not only that but mukti is weainga wedding sari with sindoor and a mangal sootar.!!!
Jeevan is furious, He goesto slap mukti but prerna stops him. She tries to calam him down. Then she turns around to talk to prem and mukti.
Prerna: Ye tum logon ne kya kiya?
Prem: maa……..voh……humare paas aur kkoi rasta nahi tha.
Prerna: Hum raasta nikal lete, lekin y e sab karni ki kya zaroorat thi?
Afering having a short argument, Jeevan leaves. Mukti tries to stop him but he doesn't listen. Prem and Mukti go up to Prem's room. Mutki cries.
Mukti: Shayad humme aisa nahio karna chahiye tha.
Prem tries to console her.
Prem: Humne jo kuchh bhi kiya, thik kiya. Listen.. Kyun na hum tumhaare baba se baat karke dekhe, shayad voh humaari baat manjaye.
Prem and mukti go to jeevan.
Mukti: baba
Jeevan: Door hojayo meri nazaron se!
Prem: Dekhiye, aap humari baat to suniye.
Jeevan: Mujhe kucch nahi sunna!
Prem: main aur mukti ek doosre se bohat pyar karte hai, isseliye humne shadi ki. Mera yakeen maniya, mmein badal gaya hoon. Mukti ne mujhe badala hai.
Jeevan is sitting on the bed and prem and mukti aur sitting on the floor next to him. Afteralot of emotional talk, jeevan finally puts his hand on prem and mukti s' head and gives them blessings. They all hug.
Prerna and bajaj are talking about wat just happened.
Prerna: Ek tarha se to ye thik hi hus. Atleast voh dono mere aur anu--…….I;m sorry, mujhe ye mentionnahi karna chahiye tha.
Bajaj" No prerna.. It's ok. Tum thik keh rahi ho.
Just then prem n mukti cum there
Mkti: choti maa.
Prerna and Bajaj turn around
Prem: maa, humne mukti ke bab se baat karli hai.
Mukti: ab humme bas aap kii aashirwaad ki zarrorat hai.
PM touch their feet and they give th em blessings.
Mr.b: llekin, main rumhari shaadi ko abhi shadi nahi maanta.
PM(confused): kya matlab?
Mr.B: Matlab ye ki hum tum logon ki shaadi dobara se dhoom dham s karenge.
Prerena: Lekin mr.b =, shaadi man se hoti hai, dhang se nahi.
Mr.B: I mo prerna, lekin main apni bete ki shaadipoor suniys ke saamne karna chahta hoon.
They all agrre with him.


Part 11:

Meanwhil, Shavan and aparna are having there usual discussions on how to kill bajaj, prerna, and anurag.
Aparna: You now beta, hum itni der se in sab ko maaren ki koshsis kar rahe hai, k=lekin nothing seems to work. Shravan! Are u listening?!
Sharavan: o, sorry mom. Main kuchh soch raha tha.
Aparna: kya soch rahe the, main bhi to sunno.,
Shravan: Kyun n a hum mukti ko apna nishaana banaaye. Ek teer se panch Nishaane.
Aparna: Arre haan.. Ye maine kyun nahi socha, mukti gai to prem bhi gaya, aur prem gaya to prerna to ro ro kar hi marjaaae gi., Aur prena margayi to mr. B aur anurag ko to heart attack hi aa jaye ga.
Thwy both share an evil laugh.

OK. Ppl, I think it's time to add in sum fun. I hope I didn't bore u too much with the whole wedding and stuff. L
So, mukti cums out of her room to go to work. She's in the hallway when she hears a whistle. She turns around and sees---hoo else?---prem standing with is arms crossed on his chest and him leanign against his bedroom door.
Prem: Lookin' god Basanti.
Muti rolls her eyes and thinks "here h e goes again"
Mukti: Tum? Phir churu hogaye? Aur by-the-way, mera naam mukti hai, not basanti.
Prem" o really? Lekin mein to tumhe basanti hi bulaaonga.
Mutki gets irritated and is about to leave. She sstops and thinks " Isse main sabak sikhaati hoon"
She outs a loving look on her face and walks towards him
He wlks towards her too.
Mukti: Mujhe tumse kuchh kehna hai.
Prem" kaho
Mukti: tum naa….(her loving look turns mean) bilkul bhoot lagraheho…….as usual.
Prem: u…..abhi batato hoon ki bhoot kya hota hai.
Mutki starts running and prem runs after her. When they cum to the stairsm Prem slips and falls on mukti. There isi complete silence. They look into each other's eyes. Mutki finally breaks the silence.
Mutki: Dikhaayi nahi deta kya?! Bhoot kahin ke.
Prem: Soorrryyyyyyy! Geeeeez.
Prem is about to get up.
He stands up and starts walking but he falls again.
Mutki starts laughing hysterically. The next thing you know, he's in bed with a doctor and the whole family surrounding him. HE has a fractured leg. Mukti is looking at him and smiling in a "that's watu get for….." kinda smile.
He's nodding at her in a "u just wait till i get better" kinda way.
So, days pass with mukti teasing prem by eating delicious food in front of him (according to doctor' s order, he can eat only and only fruits and vegetables.)
Tehn prem's leg is finally better. Prem and Tushar are sitting outside talking about random stuff.
Tushar: ….so ur leg's finally better, right?
Prem: ya? Y?
Tushar: u think u can run.
Prem" bilkul.
Tushar. Ok then..(points to mukti) we'll test ur running then. Wat say?
Prem gets the idea and askes : do u hav a pen with u?
Tushar givs himthe pen, prem opens it up , takes out the ink, put's it in his right hand and outs h is hand behind his back.
Prem goes to mukti. He points to her face with his left hand and starts laughing.
Mukti(confused): aaeeee…..mr. bhoot..has kyun rahe ho?
Prem(still laughing) :aaj tumne aaiyna nahi dekha kya?
Mukti: kya matlab.
Prem goes to her right cheek: u hav "kalak"right here, (left cheek) right here, (forhead) right here, chin(right here) and (nose) right here.
Mukti spots a silver jus of water and looks into it. She realizes that prem had just done that a minute ago. She turna around to look at him. He's giving her a "sarcastic" type smile and holding up his right hand for her to see the ink.



That's all I have time for right now, will update the rest as soon as I can. Plzz leave more HONESt comments so I can improve. TC. Bye.

Yay I love this happy stuff! And I love it that marriage hasn't really changed their funny quarreling nature a bit! Please write more of Prem-Basanti cute little fights!