Prem n mukti FanFic(part 12 on pg 5 or 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tulsimihir

thanx for ur support
but it will take me alot of time. I have to type it and i;m a really slo0w typer.
the one the one that i just came up eith is 16 pages on paper!!!!

LOL.....well i got to say great job on your fanfic.....you just started and its great.....great job and contiue soon!!!!!!!!!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey ppl!!!
i wud like it if i got more support
i saw that 1 sumthin ppl read this thing but only 11 replied!!!!!!!!
thats not fair
i work hard onthis to entertain u guys
if u support me i'll write more 😊 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i love ur fanfic plaese continue .... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i love ur fanfic plaese continue ... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes yaar, plzzzzzzz cont sooooooooon.. we are waiting eagerly......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5:

Then prerna cums back.
Prem: aap itni jaldi vaapas agayi?
Prerna: mujhe tumhaari chinta ho rahi thi to main jaldi vaapas agayi. Achha suno, main zara doctor se baat kar ke aati hoon.
Prem gives prerna an approving nod and gets lost in his thoughts.
Prerna goes to the doctor aska if prem can be discharged. The doctor agrees but says to be very cautios and carefull about him. Prerna goes to prem's room and packs all his belongings so he can go home. Then they leave for home.
At home mr bajaj tells prem to go straight to his room and get sum rest. Prerna and mr Bajaj walk him to his room.
After a while, prerna goes to sheck on him but he isn't in bed. He is sitting on the floor next to his bed.m prerna goes and sits on the bed nest to him. She puts her hand on his shoulder. Prem doesn't say anything. HE just turns around and hugs prerna and starts crying.
Prem: maa……….voh aissa kyun kar rahi hai mere saath? Main jaant ahoon ki voh mujhse pyar karti hai………..to phir. Prem puts his head on her lap.
Prerna: prem………….main iss baare main kuchh nahi kar sakti. Jo karn ahai tum hi kar sakte ho.
Then she just gets up and leaves leaving prem in even more tears.
Prem thinks for a while and then leaves for mukti's room.
Mukti again is looking out of her window at the moon with teas in her eyes. HE goes upto her and just stands behind her. She doesn't realize he's there. Then Mukti's red dupatta flies onto prem's face. After standing there for a while, he takes it off his face.
Mutki finally realizes sumbody is behind her. She sees prem and is shocked. She's about to leave when prem grabs her hand(the one that' s burnt). Mukti closees her eyes with pain. Prem walks up to her, brings her hand up to his face and gives it a soft kiss. Mutis quickly pulls it away. She tries to leave again but prem pull her back from the arm. He holds her by the shoulder.
Prem: wat's ur problem?!! Kyun kar rahi ho mere saath aissa? Main kitni baar keh chuka hooon ki main tumse pyar karta hoon. I love you mutki!
Mukti: but……. I hate you. Maine bhi apne pyar ka izhaar kiya tha na? lekin tumne kya kiya? Mujhe use liya aur phek diya. Tumhaai vaje se mujhe kya kya nahi dekhna pada. I really hate you.
Prem: to phir mere liye apna haath kyun jalaya? Ye baat meri akhon mein dekh kar kaho! Dekho meri taraf.. …aur kaho ki tum mujhse pyar nahi karti!
Mukti: nahi karti-
Prem: meri taraf dekh kar
Mukti(starts crying): nahi karti main tumse pyar! I hate you ! I hate you!
Mutki says that for a while and then and then suddenly hugs prem and says: I love you. I love you somuch.
Prem has tears in his eyes but a smile on his face. They both hug each other really tight.
Prerna had been watcing this whole scene. She has tears of joy in her eyes. She leaves and tells mr. bajaj what just happened. He is happy too.
Prerna: mr bajaj……..mujhe lagta hai ki humme prem aur mukti ke rishte ko bhadava dena chahiye. Humme unki shaadi karni chahiye.
Bajaj: Tum thik keh rahi ho prerna. Hum kal hi jeevan se baat kerenge.
Both are happy.
(oh ……geez……I'm running out of stories to write. Should I just stop??)

Part 6:

The nest morning, everybody is happy. Prem and mukti cum downstairs together but (they're their sam old selfs again) arguing. They sit on the dining table still arguing. They are having an argument on wat everybody shud eat for breakfast: Tushar and kuki join prem's side and sneha and kasak joinf mukti.
Mukti: NO! Mujhe voh yucky sandwiches nahi khaane. Iwant alloo ke parathe.
Prem: CHUP! Moti! Jab dekho khaane ke baare mein sochti rehti ho. Aur kkoi kam nahi hai kya tumhe?
Mutki gets mad and is about to throw butter on his face. Just then. Prm duck in his chair. Behind h im is birju kaka. The butter hits him right in the face.
Everybody except mukti laughs.
Mukti: prem! Too ther to jaa--
Prerna: (interrupting) Bas! Bas! Tum dono bhi na! Ab ye haal hai to shaadi ke baad kya hoga.
Prem: maine kuchh nahi kiya, ye to basanti-- (suddenly realizes wat prerna just said)
Mukti: shshadi?
Prerna: haan, shadi. KYun, kya khayal hai?




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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwww damn this is really good!seriously!fantastic work!Keep it up... keep updating...I wont get tired reading this ever 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
this is good. I really like it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
😳 😳 i love it...trust me i won't get bored reading this fanfic its great...plzz do continue.... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
LOVE IT IT IS REALLY GOOD 😉 CARRY ON SOON 😉

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