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Hey everyone!
This is my first FanFic. But this might not be a complete one. I'm just writing this as it cums to my mind. I;m writing this keeping in mind the current situation of the show.
So…………………Here goes nothing. Hope you enjoy.
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It's Mukti's b-day!!!! The whole Bajaj and basu family decides to give her a surprise party.
Mukti wakes up with a smile on her face. She takes a shower and puts on her best clothes. Thes, she goes downstairs,
Mukti: ChhotiMaa!!
(hoping she would wish her.
Prerna: Arre, Mukti! Chalo, jaldi se nashta karlo varna office ke liye late ho jayo gi.
Mukti is disappointed but doesn't say anything. Half a day goes by and nobody wishes her a happy b-day.
She goes to the office and sees prem talking to his current GF on the phone. Prem sees her but just ignores her and continues to talk on the phone.
Mukti finishes her work and goes home. There she sees sneha waiting for her.
Sneha: Arre mukti! Itni der kahan lagadi?
Mukti: Voh main……………… mujhe thoda kaam tha.
Sneha: Accha thik hai. Ab ye lo aur jaldi se pehen ke neeechhe aajao.(hands her a bag)
Mukti: lekin ye-
Sneha: Mujhe kuchh nahi sunns. Go now.
Mukti goes and puts on the gorgeous red dress that was in the bag. Along with the diamond earrings that had little red rubies in the middle.
She goes downstairs.
Sneha: Wow mukti! You look gorgeous. Ok now lets go.
Mukti: kahan jana hai?
Snehs: Tum shalo to sahi!
On their way there, Sneha keeps smiling to herself thinking: " Mukti, you have a frown on ur face but I no this surprise pary will bring a smile on ur face."
Sneha and mukti enter a huge hotel. As soon as they enter, Everyone yells "SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Mukti is completely taken aback. She walks towards everyone and they all give her presents and wish her a happy birthday and give her blessings. Then she faces prem who just keeps staring at her face with that same feeling of guilt that he had during the rape case. Mukti just walks past him.
Then prem is sitting in the bar section of the hotel and has a drink in his hand. HE is now feeling guilty but he can't figure out why. He has already a lot of drinks but yat he keeps drinking more and more. He is thinking to himself: " Why did I do this to her? I said sorry to her but I;m feeling guilty. Could it be true tha she doesn't luv me anymore. If she does, why did she reject my proposal."
Then he has this strange look on his face. Luv in his eyes but anger on his face.
(this is the main part but I kinda had to build up the story to get to this part.)
He walks up to mukti who is talking to her friends. He pulls her close to him by pulling her arm. He holds her ahnd and takes her to the middle of the dance floor.The music plays and he starts dancing with her. ( I cant decide which songs, you decide.) HE starts dancing with her and she has this " what the hecks is he doing" kinda look on her dace. ( this is kinds like what Bajaj and Prerna do way before the leep the first time they get married.)
Prem and Mukti end the dance with Mukti leaning down in Prem's arms and them looking in each other's eyes. Then, they stand up straight and prem puts his hand on mukti's face with tears of unhopeful ness ( not sure this is even a word) in his eyes.
Mukti gives him a sad look and then runs out of the hotel realizing that everyone is looking at them. Prem suddenly looses his balance and falls on his knees, then prerna cums and picks him up and takes him home.
I might conitue this if you want me to but I'm not sure. I f I can cum up with sumthing, then I'll surley post it. I tries my best and hope u guys enjoyed it this. Please write comments and tell me if I shud continue this or not. Please give honest feedback. Thanx for reading. ByeJ
Here's Part 2:
Prerna and Mr. bajaj take prem to his room. Bajaj leaves and prerna puts prem to bed. She hears prem murmuring to himself "Mukti, mukti, I luv u mukti,"
Prerna is kinda shocked to hear prem hear this.
Prerna to herself: Main jaanti thi ki prem mukti se pyaar karta hai lenkin itna pyar, voh behoshi ki haalat mein bhi osska naam le raha hai. Mujhe mukti se baat karni hogi. PRem balalaika hai aur voh oosse pyar karta hai."
She leaves the room and goes to mukti's room. She sees mukti sitting on her bed with tears in her eyes.
Prerna: Mukti…..(mukti stands up and wipes her tears.)….mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai.
Mukti: Kahie ChotiMaa
Prena: voh…..(first hesitates then just says it) kya tum prem se pyar karti ho?
Mukti is shocked to hear this question.
Mukti looks down and says: nnahi, I hat him.
Prerna: ye sach nahi hai. Tum oosse pyar karti ho.
Mukti: Nahi, main osse pyar nahi, nafrat karti hoon.
Prerna: Achha! To tumhari akhon mein aassoo kyun hai? Aur tum meri akhon mein akhe daal kar ye baat kyun nahi kehti? HUH?
Mukti: Maine kehdia naa! I hate him!
Aur mujhe is baare mein kkoi baat nahi karni. Aap mujhe aur takleef de rahi hai.
Prerna just turns around and leaves.
The next day, everyone is in the little mandir section of the Bajaj house getting ready for the daily aarti.
Meanwhile, prem gets up and has a very bad headache. He sits up and gets flashbacks of what he did last night.
Prem: OMG! Ye maine kya kiya. I have to say sorry to mukti right now.
Prem quickly walks downstairs and looks for mukti. He Finally sees her and goes up to her.
Prem: Mukti, mujhe tumse kkuch baat karni hai.
Mukti: I don't care. Mujhe akela chhod do.
Then she just walks away. Prem gets really mad and goes back to his room.
The pooja has started. Everybody is doing aarti.
On the other hand, prem is think to himself: She doesn't luv me, she hates me, ab voh zindagi bhar meri nahi hogi, Voh zindagi kya jisme mujhe mera pyar hi na mile. Ab mein jee kar kya karoon.?
Prem furiously looks around in his room for neend ki goliyan or any othe rstrong drugs but he doesn't find anything. Then he sees a basket of apples eith a knife sticking in them. He quickly grabs it and brings it up to his face. He has flashbacks of the sweet and sour moments between him and mukti.
Prem: mukti, I love u and always will. Marne ke baad bhi.
Then he stabs himself in the stomach with the knife. HE decides that isn't enough so he cuts his wrist. He is in serious pain.
half opf part 3:
Part 3:
He decided he has to see mukti and mother indya one last time so he unsteadily makes his way downstairs. He stands in the stariway and calls out: Mukti!
Everybody turns around. They all have pale faces. Especially Mukti and prerna. They see the knife in prem' s hand and him all covered with blood. He falls down an. Mukti rusn towards him. Everybody is just standing there. Prerna is just too shocked to move. Mukti runs towards prem and starts crying and paniking.
Mukti: Prem! Prem! Ye tumne kya kiya! Kkoi ambulance ko bulaao!(cries harder)
Bajaj hurries to the phone and calls the ambulance.
Prem's head is in mukti's lap. Prem touches mukti's face and then feels sudden pain. Things get blurry before his eyes and he faint's.
He is rushe into the operation theatre. Everybody is impatient and worried. Mukti is continuously crying with sneha trying to console her. Prerna is still too shocked to move. Bajaj is trying to get her to move.
………..She finally moves, looks around and instantly breaks down crying.
Then the doctors cum out of the OT.
Tushar: Kya hua doctor? Prem kaissa hai.
Doctor: Patients ki halat bohat critical hai. Ooska kaafi khoon beh chuka hai, but that won't be a problem. Hum hospital ke bllod bannk se khoon lene ja rahe hain.
He leaves in hurry.
Then Mukti runs out of the hospital.
Sneha runs after her. Mukti and Sneha reach the mandir. Mukti and Sneha do all kinds of prayers. Mukti at one oint even does one of those prayers where you put a fire thing in ur hand and wait till ur prayer have been answered. (sorry I have no idea wat u call it) . Sneha tries to stop her but she won't listen.
While mukti's hand is burning more and more, prem on the other hand is being recovered.
Suddenly, Sneha's cell phone rings
Sneha: Hello?…………haan……kya………thank u kuki. Mukti, muktiprem thik hogaya hai.
Mukti opens her eyes and gives a smile of relief and then runs to the hospital with joy. She runs all the way there and then stops in front of prem's room.
Mukti ( to herself): Main ye kya kar rahi hoon? Why do I care? Voh thik hagaya to mujhe kya?
Mutki walks out with a sad look on her face.
Sneha calls from behin: Mukti! Mukti!
But she just leaves.
Part 4:
Prem is surrounded by everybody.
Everybody is there but prem's eyes are looking only for mukti. He asks prerna: Mother indy…….voh …….mukit………?
Prernra: haan, voh yahin to thi, pata nahi kahan chlgayi. (looks at sneha) Sneha kahan hai voh?
Sneha: pata nahi, vih abhi yahan thi ar kuchh kahe bager chelgayi.
The next day, everybody is at home except for prerna. She is at the hospital with prem.
Kuki sees mukti and calls her.
Kuki: Mukti! Ye maine prem ke liye naashta pack kiya hai. Kya tum isse le jaaya hai, kya tun isse le jayo gi?
At first mukti hesitates a=buthen takes it and leaves.
Prema nd prerna are talking.
Prem: I think aap ko ab ghat jaana chaiye.
Prerna:nahi, main tumhe yahaan akela chhod ke nahhi marooning.
Prem: dekhiye……aap fresh ho kar aajaana.
Prerna: r u sure?
Prem" positive.
Aa soon as she leaves, prem puts a frown on his face. HE had been smiling just for his mom, but inside he was really sad.
He thought to himself: why? Kyun bachaya mujhe? Voh to mujse milne bhi nahi aai.
Just while he;s thining this mukti enters. She lays down the food and gives it to him. He eats it. They don't say a word to each other. Then mukti hands him the glass of water and prem' s eyes catch mukti' sbadly burnt hand. He quickly grabs it.
Prem: OMG! Ye kya hua? Kaiise hua?
Mutki snatches it away from him and leaves.On her way out mukti sees sneha. Then she leaves.
Prem: sneha…….ye mukti ka haath?
Sneha: main batati hoon………………………………
She tells prem the whole thing. She leaves and prem is taken aback.
