Prem n mukti (new fanfic) updated!page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey. this is my first eva fan-fic. hope u enjoy it.

The whole bajaj family decide to go to panchmeshwar for a 1 month vacation. Prerna says that all of them need a break and they need to go to a guest house in panchmeshawar and spend a relaxing 1 month there.

Evryones finished packing up their bags. They are about to leave when mukti enters without her bag-

Prerna: mukti, where is ur bag?

Mukti: no choti maa. I am not cuming.

evryone luks surprised including our hero- prem

Prerna: wht? why arent' u coming?

mukti: Its your family outing naa. u guys go n enjoy it. I have sum work here.

Bajaj: but we are all going becuase we want a brek from work. Come naa beta.

Mukti says: but...

Prerna says :next time u differenciate between yourself n this family. I will slap you.

mukti laughs: ya...i know...but

Prem says :Miss basanti. wht do you expect. that we shld all beg u for coming there. Come on....don't waste time. pack ur bags quickly. If not, mother india danda leke aa jaaegi.

mukti (sighs): ok them. I'll go n pack my bags.

evryone smiles. Sneha goes to help her.

to be continued.....😊

Edited by smarie pants - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Whoa... you really are keeping true to the spirit of each character!!!!! Prerna would definitely say something like I'll slap you Mukti, and Prem would say something like MOther India will get the danda!!!!!!!!!! Please o please continue with the awesome fanfic!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It is great plz cont. as soon as possible
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome! do continue!! i wonder whts gonna happen w/ premukti! 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok! herz part 2!

Everyone leaves for the airport. The check-in and board the flight. on the flight, prem n mukti have seats next to each other(you bet). 😆 Mukti is super-annoyed becuase prems sitting next to her. she calls the airhostess to her seat. Prem is bowled over when he sees the airhostess.

Mukti- can you change my seat please?
airhostess- yes mam. sure.
The sirhostess puts prem in muktis seat and mukti in prems seat. so, they still are sitting next to each other. mukti gives up. However, prem starts flirting with the airhostess.
Prem- can i have sum water plzz?
airhostess- sure
she gets him water.
prem- thank you miss..?
airhostess- Soniya. Soniya bakshi.
prem- what a lovely name- Soniya bakshi. You kow what her name is?(he points to mukti) Miss Mukti deshmukh.
Prem snorts.
Mukti (angry)- She never asked my name. so just shut up.
prem- hmph.
he drinks the water gives the glass back to the airhostess n she leaves.

Prem n mukti are having dinner. Prem calls soniya again and again and keeps flirting with her. the airhostess gets really angry but she keeps on smiling.

Prem writes "Phone number? " on a tissue paper and he shows it to mukti.
Prem- do you think I shld give this to her? I mean, ask her phone number?
Mukti is disgusted.
prem- what do u think?
Mukti- SICK.
Prem smirks.
He calls Miss soniya again and gives the tissue to her. she writes sumthing on it and gives it back to prem. prem smiles. He looks at the paper- a number is written on it. and thats the number to the police station!! prem goes red!! he tries to hide it but mukti gets hold of it and smirks.
Mukti- ahaa. I will make sure that you give a call on this number.
Prem tries to get the paper but mukti dosent let him to. finally, prem tries to pull it from her and it tears.

Mukti(sarcastically)- Now look wht you have done. U could have called on this number and u could have had a nice romantic candellight dinner in the JAIL with the police. 😆

prem- shut up basanti.
mukti- u stole my words.

prem looks in the other direction to hide his face. and then, he smiles. 😳 😳 😳 n so does mukti.

to be continued..... 😊


Edited by smarie pants - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum fanfic...luvd it 😊 especially da last scene
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful fan fiction
very cute and 😆 😆 😆
plz continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very gud yaar wonderful interaction btwn them
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for the fanfic it was great especially the last part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aaww brilliant i love all these fan fics !
plz continue it !
thanks 4 spendin all this time just 2 write these 4 us 😊
ThAnKs 😃

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