Fanfic(hum sath sath hain)updated on pg 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: amali2305

Oh Shai..., when is surween and Mayank going to meet.... 😛

plz.......wait a little bit ...........😉

Hehehe..

Great job again Shaina! Keep them coming:)))

u r so gr8 shai..... please continue .... hey how do u feel when i call u shai... 😛 😳 u dont mind no....

Hey Shaina u are doing gr8 👏 👏 .continue the story yaar

Originally posted by: amali2305

u r so gr8 shai..... please continue .... hey how do u feel when i call u shai... 😛 😳 u dont mind no....

wats the thing in this 2 mind yaar..........we r all friands 😛😳

continus..............
Its 7:00 a.m..............
anuj is still sleeping bcoz he is very tired
(back 2 Surween)
Surween iz worried and her mom is asking her"surween y r u not getting ready?"wat happened"
" MomI am not going anywhere now,I will go 2 yhe police station 4 a complain,against that man"
(her mom gets a shock...... 😕 😕 )
"wat r u saying.............."mom plzzzzzz"
"O.K............du wat u want 2 du..........."
( Surween takes a breakfast nd gets ready4 leaving)
(ther in bajaj house,mayank is geting ready 4 his mission,there his mom knocks the door.....
Mayank replies"cum in............."
(His mom is getting surprized,where is he going)
"Mayank,where r u going......."
"Oh.mom,I am going 2 the Army mess,there I have 2 entre mu attendence"
"O.K...........but don't 4get 2 take ur breakfast son,We r all waiting 4 u on the the table"
"O,K"(then he go downstairs and after taking a breakfast,he is readt 2 leave just then his father interrupts.............mayank,"
"yes,papa............."
"mayank u have 2 cum 2 my office 2day.............but u r going somewhere else..........."
(Myanak walks 2wardshis father and replies)"papa.....I have sum work 2 finish there after that I will definetaly cums 2 ur office"
(now his father iz happy and sys "promise...........???"
Son's promise dad............"
(then he rushed out of the house and goes 2 the A.M)
(Here in the A.M,Mayank parks his bike and enters the controller's room)
(there the general is waiting 4 him)
"Sir, may I cum in.........???"
(general surpizes 2 c him as he don't know that he iz tha reqiured man)!!!!!!!!!!!!
"U............yes,cum ,In."
"Sir, my name iz MAJOR MAYANK BAJAJ"
"Oh...........major............welcum,plz take a seat..."
"thank u sir,I was unable 2 recognise u as u r complely giving an impression of a common citizen" 👏 (major):)] 😊 )
"her iz ur file youg man and if u wnt sum more information,contacts me"
continus................

Wow!


Major Mayank is just so cool man!! I love him totally;))
Carry on Shaina:)

Continus............
(Mayank is reading the file,and after a while he luks @ general )"Sir............!!!"
"Yes major........have u readed all the case?"
"Yes sir,I have done it....."
"Major u have 2 join the C.B.I 4 the solution of the case,and u can get help by their senior officerz too,"
"O.K Sir,...........can I leave now sir?"
"Yes major u can go now.............and all the best major............b carefull"
"Thank u Sir and don't worry, I will b very carefull"
(then Mayank goes to the parking plot and gets his bike out of there and rushes out towards the C.B.I main branch)...................
(back 2 Anuj)
(Anuj wakes up and getting ready 4 his breakfast,He takes it just then the phon rings)"Hello............ya...wat..............Is he O.K?..........I am cumming,"
"hu's there son"............(mom asks him)
"ma, there was a call 4rm the hospital the patient iz getting critical state..................."I am going....
(then rushes 4 leaving)
(back to Surween)
(Surween is sitting in a police station since last 3 hours but in vain)
(she is getting horible) 😡
(then she getsup and run 2wards the outdoor of the P.S
She iz in gr8 anger and is hitted by a bike and fell down on the street,now she iz trying 2 getting up there a man is comming 2wards her 4 her help...........the bike honour!!!!!!!!!!!!She refuses his offer and gets up by her on after she getts up she starts 2 scolding the man)" R u blind................can't c........idots....... 😡 "
(the face of the mn iz still not shown)"Wat r u staring??????????? hah...............hu r u?"
(face iz shown)He iz .......................?
Continus.........................

It's my Major Mayank alright! Woohoo! Atlast they meet:))

WOW stuff Shaina:)

Who's angry Shaina?! What happened?