Fanfic(hum sath sath hain)updated on pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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continus..............
he iz Mayank....... 😳 😳 😳 (hu iz too confuzed and can'nt understand wat's happening) πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
"R u O.K......?"(surween iz still staring @ him)
"Wat O.K...?balh.blah............blah"(Mayank cee that surween can't walking properly)"Mam...........u r not O.K cum I will take u to the hospital..........plz cum"
"No,thanxxxxxxxxx,wat u have already done is enough 4 me!!!!!!I can'nt take any risk 😑 "
"Mam......Iam so sorry,but plz belive me I hane'nt done it.............." "wat........if u have not done it....hu did it....u................ 😑 (all yhe people r lukind @ them,mayank iz now getting irritated and angry @ her)"O.K fine,I have done it with my will, and plz now can I take u to the hospital?"
(Then surween sits besides him on the bike and both of them a going to the hospital)...............
(back to anuj)
(Anuj arrives @ the hospital and goes straight to the I.C.U)"Wat happened .Is he O.K?"
(raj replies,)"Yaa relax he is O.K now"
"thank god..........."(And iz sitting on his chair,in his own cabin)

(Just then Mayank and Surween arrivers there and knows the door of anuj's cabin).............
"Yes cum in,they enterz and Mayank tells anuj that this lady is hitted by ny bike...........plz chek her"

Anuj check Surween, and says "there iz nothing serious.but she has to take a little rest with these medicinez"
(then Mayank and Surween cums out of the room and till then Surween iz cooled............and iz trying to talk to Mayank)
"Luk......."(Mayank turns and askes her his name after realizing that she iz talking to him)
"Mayank..........."
"O.K..............I am sorry.I has behaved very badly.............." "Its O.K"(now they r outside the hospital)
"U............plz wait here.........I will b back after purchazing these medicines and with my bike"(Surween nodded )"O.K.............but I can purchase the medicines..........." "but the fault was mine"
(Surween impressed) πŸ˜‰ 😊 πŸ˜›
(Mayank cums back ,but Surween askes him togive the medicines to him and)"Now,Iam O.K Mr.Mayank........I can go home by my own"
"no no peoblem I can drop u 2 ur house" (Surween gets angry 😑 😑 😑 )"No thanxxxxxxx.I can manage."

(then Surween takes the medicines 4rm him and starts to walk...........but iz going 2 fell down again..........)
(Mayank holdes her by the arm,and on this sudden happening Surween is just 😳 )
"I had tell u that I can drop u to ur house........plz cum,Both of them seated and rushes 2wards the surween's house)
continus...................




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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
This is WOW stuff yaar πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ...continue it soon...am gettin impatient to know what happens next 😳 😳 πŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow yaar Shaina! Cute stuff yaar! Waiting for the next part..keep it coming:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx guyz i will update it soon πŸ˜‰
Dazzler23 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx guyz i will update it soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Continuz.................
(Both Mayank and Surween r now @ Surween's house)
"Here u r mam.............."(Mayank says 2 Surween)
(surween getsdown uf the bike and c Mayank)"Plz cum inside na,............."
"No,thanxxxxxxxxxx"
"U r angry wid me na,plz cum in"
(Mayank gets surprised and smiles)"No, mam actually I have a lots of work pending............which I have 2 finish.............so I am sorry,I can't cum inside"
"O.K bye.............and thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 ur gr888 help"
"No mention not,bye"(Then Mayank rushes awayand Surween is still lukking @ him)"He iz a nice guy"............
Then enterz the house,hermom gets worried and starts 2 asking her lots of Qs."Wats this.......wat happened?"
"Mom relax "(then told her all the ADVENTURE)
(her mom gets cool and thanking 2 the God )"Its O.K,thanxxxxxxxx 2 the God that the boy was nice"

(Here Mayank iz standing on the signal and the time iz 2:00 p.m..............Just then his cell rings and........)"Yes,inspector mahesh......tell me............(signal opens and Mayank Drives his bike with attending 2 the cell)O.K ..............ya,....no.........na............ya,Iam on my way 2 ur office and I will b there in just 15-20 mims.............ya bye"
(After a while Mayank iz outside the C.B.I headquaterz)
(He enterz then the guard checks his ID card,and allow him 2 go inside,Mayank goes staright 2 Mahesh's office nd he knoks the door)

"Ya,cum inside................."
"Hi Mahesh hu r u?"
(Mahesh luks @ him and)"Arre Sir,cum,um have a seat......"(Mayank sits and starts 2 talk on the particular issue)

(its time 3:00 4rm 2:00)
(After an hour they both stands up and shakes their hands,then Mayank takes sum files and rushes out of the C.B.I office,takes his bike and now he iz going 2 fulfil a son's promise)

(Here He is outside the BAJAJ-EMPIRES)
(Inside his father iz talking 2 his B.freind,Mr.Yashwardan Mittal)"I am so happy Yash,I have seen my son after 6 yrs,................han.........6 long yrs...........OMG,and 2day he iz cumming here 2 his own empire the BAJAJ-EMPIRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Mayank's younger bro- interrupts)
"But dad................r u sure that bhayya will cum......I mean........he is ................"
"He will cum, he has promised me"
(Just then the intercom rings and PA tells Mayank's dad that Mayank iz here 2 c him)
"Send him inside....plz"
continus.................


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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Ohkay..
so Rishabh is here..but will he accept the ownership?!

Hmmm..keep it coming Shaina:)
Dazzler23 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wait and watch.................no wait and read!!!!!ur siggi iz toooooooo gud
Dazzler23 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I will updat it later πŸ˜‰
sorry 4 the delay
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no probs yaar... but soon... cant wait... πŸ˜›

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