Fanfic(hum sath sath hain)updated on pg 8 - Page 2

WOW Shaina this seems soooo intresting.you are doing a fab job.
And ...my...my...uuuffff....Ronit in Army uniform and as a major...WOW...Right now i can litrally imagine him in that style. 😳 😳 😉

WOW Shaina this seems intresting... soooo .And ...my...my...uuuffff....Ronit in Army uniform and as a major...WOW...Right now i can litrally imagine him in that style. 😳 😳 😉
U are doing a fab job...Keep it up 👏 👏

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx guys and girls.I will update my fanfic soon...............thanxxx once again 😉

Wow Shaina! Great job yaar:) Keep it up! 👏

countinued................
(Dr.Anuj was scolded by Dr.Dan)sir I was stucced in the traffic jam........and u............r countineusly scolding me...........not fair!!!
Dr.Dan:"O.K Anuj...........plz sitdown and next time b careful,O.K?"Anuj:"yes sir.........."(and sits on his place next 2 his best friend Dr.Raj Malhotra,and iz still thanking GOD 4 his help)
(back 2 Surween and Major Mayank)
(Surween reaches @ the branch and enters inside hurrily,then goes straight 2 the managers cabin 2 find out wats the problem)
(Surween knocks the door and enters the room)
Surween:"Sir............wat happened???...........any problem......u called me so urgently"
Manager:"Surween................sitdown and relax,nothing so serious............(stands up and starts walking in his cabin.........he is very tensend)
Surween:"Sir! Iam sure there iz some thing very serious,plz tell me......can I help u"
(Manager turns and give her a sad luk)
"Surveen Tell me hu iz the cashier in ur branch,?"
Surveen:"Sir! Mr. Mittal Iz the cashier there ..any thing seroius?"
"surveen, I have a complain 4m a coustumer,that he had gone that 4 his payment but he was telled that there iz no pay................even 1 single penny in his account and the account iz closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Syrween shockess )"Wat......... 😕 😕 😕 ,Sir I mean hu can it possible???"If the man opens the acount there and iz still receiving his pay 4rm there then hu can it possible???".....
(surween stands up in worry and then)

(Surween luk @ her senior manager and )says:"Sir! can u plz call that man here I want 2 talk 2 him?
Manager:"o.k surween!"
(now here in the Army mess)
(major bajaj is going 2 the board of meeting as he enters the room......... he cees majors and generalz there wid many senior kornels!!!)
(Major slutes them all @ once)
"Sir,"(All gives him a luk and noded their heads in acceptance of his solute!!!)
(Major goes and sit on his seat) 😉
(then 1 of the major gives him a luk and passes a file 2 wards him)
Major Mayank Bajaj takes the file and reads it ,(all the army memberz r looking @ him wid some expititions and hopes)
WATS THAT IN THE FAILE.........................WAIT AND READ!!!!!!!!!!!AND DON'T 4GET 2 PAY UR COMMENTS!!!

WOW! I cant wait to knw what that file contains! Good job Shaina! Keep it up:)

Nothing comes to min Shai.... please write the next epi soon yar i cant wait....

thaxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx again,I will update it as soon as possible😉

Countinus...............
Major Mayank Bajaj iz reading the file carefully and sfter some time He luks at everyone,general askes him "Major have u readed the whole file?"major maynk replies"Yes, sir I have read it totally,............but sir wat can I du 4 u in this case as it is a local city case and has to b solved by L.Police or C.B.I 😕"
General noded his head that he ageers and say"Major!!ya I know that this case has 2 b solved by L.P orC.B.I but none of them can still solve it and now the issue bcums a serious matter,and on the bhalf of all army I request u 2 solve this case as u had solved all the cases b4"
(Major thinks of something 4 a while)and then says"Sir,U have 2 ordered me,not to request............I will try my best 2 solve this case but I will alwayz need ur support sir!!!"(all memberz smile and general luks @ him then says)"Major, I was very sure that u will accept thia chalange ,go.........get ready anf remember that u r going there as a common citizen,not as an army officer!!!Understood?"'yes sir,I know hou to solve this matter. (and gives them a sulute and turnes 2 door.general askes him to stop)
Major Mayank stops and turns 2 the general and luks at him.............
general wishes him all the best and says that my support and blessings r always wid u...........not only mines.......but the support and blessings of the whole army iz alwyz wid u major..........all the best.!!!
Thanxxxxxxx Sir,(and goes out of the room)
(cum back 2 Anuj and surween)
(Anuj and his b.friend Dr.Raj Malhotra r cuming out of the board of meeting and Dr.Anuj is upset a little bit 🤢 ,Raj says )Wat happens yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!! u kno naa Dr.DAN alwayz bhaves like this ...........y r u so upset?
(Anuj stops and says)I am not upset bcoz he insulted me infront of all ,Iam upset bcoze I have'nt eat any thing since morning............)Raj gets a shock(wat.....u mean u were not stucked in the traffic jam )
"No,not at all I had wakedup late in the morning, and just rushed out of house 2 cum here"(innicently)
(raj smiled and says u will never change.........cum let's go to the canteen,then they rushed 2wards the H.canteen,There they orderd 4 a tea and some sanwiches,after a while they hears an annoucement of an emergency case and Anuj run 2wards the emergency ward)
(cum back 2 surwen)
(surween iz very woried abt tha situation and suddenly gets a shock!!!!!!!!)😲😲
"U..................wat r u doing here?,sir ..........."
(manager luks @ her and say )"he's the guy,who has a problem ?"
"Sir,he is fraud............he was trying 2 cash others checks by doing theur false signatures,..........sir he iz a fraud"
WILL MANAGER AGREE WID SURVEEN?2 FINDOUT WAIT AND DON'T 4GET 2 READ NEXT EPISODE
2 b countined..............

WOW!!! Great stufff yaar Shaina! Keep it coming dear:)