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suwas

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Liked the way Jai is dealing with Bani. She gave him a smile. Making her choose his shirt, having tea with her.

Hope bani starts behaving normal with him.

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HalleNJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

jai is in the right track, getting closer to Bani and make her feel that she is his wife.......nice part Abhi, wish the update was longer....please continue....

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monix1981

@monix1981

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

:) Nice part...Its nice that Bani is opening up wiht Jai...

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pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

Good to see Jai making inroads and trying to reach out to Bani. 😊 Loved how they both sat together and had tea and then Bani got to choose clothes for Jai👏

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Person23

@Person23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

nice part is it just me or is there sth wrong with bani?😕

but at least jai is trying to be nice to her

pls cont soon

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sparky

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

It was very short part abhilasha cant make it when it started and when ended too... but must say part was cute and i really appreciate Jai's efforts to make his marriage worthful. hope he wotn lose his patience bani reciprocate his feelings too

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jinal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#77

it is nice that jai is trying to make up with bani

continue soon

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tam2

@tam2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#78

Bani is one confused soul...😕... but nice to see Jai trying so hard to connect both their lives together .... but think it's little late for that ... but then again it's never too late ... to amend your mistakes ... hope Jai succeeds in his effort of making Bani realize his love for her ... anyways do cont soon...😃👏....

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mujer

@mujer

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Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Hey Abhilasha,

Just read all parts in one go. Brillaint. I am really impressed at how you are able to pen so beautifully Jai's turmoil. The man here has to work all alone right now to win this battle. He cannot even ask Bani for some help. Lady here is so naive that she does not herself realise the gravity of the situation and her relationship with Jai. Love his man for being so pati3ent , I really feel for him since he has nowhere to complain and no where to ask for help but I guess Bani not pushing him away helps a great deal.

Hats off to you for the same. Dekha inti saari taareef ab jaldi Update karo.😆

Edited by mujer - 17 years ago