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kitkat_2002

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Posted: 16 years ago

#241

amazin... abhilasha...

as usual awesome... plz let the baby be okie...

grt goin...

loved the way jai treats her n u have soon bani's charachter so beautifully... luved it... the way u have portrayed it...

do continue soon..

tc...

kitkat..

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johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#242

great part- jai needs to break thru banis defences somehow!

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pptm469

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Posted: 16 years ago

#243

Hey nice update...I have loved the story so far..looking forward to more..please update soon

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MrsKhan-Sobti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#244

as usual amazing...

hope bani opens up more towards jai

do continue soon

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visma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#245

A sweet part with Jai and Bani it was really touching and can see Bani's attitude changing towards Jai. But when will she open up truly towards him and confide things, Waiting for the time the would be real couples. That is more undersatanding an a level headed Bani And in the mean time I hope Jigs doesn't create any problems.

And please update soon.

Its been too long gaps.

Bye

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#246

Nice to see Jai's love & care is changing Bani. But wonder why she is scared of his passionate touches? Why does she think its lust & not physical expression of his love. Why doesn't she need him in he same way too.

Hope that Bani opens up with jai & her apprehensions & insecurities are gone. may be Anu's presence will help. I am guessing that who was at the door.

Great part.

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Binish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#247

lol.. iss anu ko bhi abhi aana tha.. lol.. great part abhilasha.. continue soooon yaaar...

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sparky

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Posted: 16 years ago

#248

What a treat at the midnight. hehehe.. actually here in india it is half past night and since i was not sleepy decided to switch on pc and what i found ..that abhilasha has posted a new part of her story..

the part was an emotional ride.. i m wondering why Bani is not comfortable with jai's TOUCH. while in jai's words, she once not only let him touch her but let him make love to her.. so whats the difference now?