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kitkat_2002

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Posted: 16 years ago

#221

aaahh... finally u updated... kitna wait kiya... par it was worth it...

u write so beautifully....

liked jai's thoughts a lot...

do continue soon...

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johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#222

progress hui! very heartwarming part!

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nema123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#223

Wonderful part Abhi.... Bani should now open up to Jai...

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amisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#224

wonderful parts very touching loved it pls cont soon.....

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Posted: 16 years ago

#225

wonderful part

What will hapen now.

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tam2

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Posted: 16 years ago

#226

Hi Abhi ... gr8888 part ... romance is in air ... ❤️😳 ... wonder how long it will last knowing Bani's state of mind .... 🤔 ... But I sure hope it will last for long ....❤️.... liking the way Jb's relationship has progressed so far .... and Jai's all attention is focused on Bani only ...❤️... too good ... do cont soon ... 😃 ...

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#227

Its nice to see how JB relationship imroving, Bnai opening up to Jai & others.Best part is end part where Bani responded jai as wife & sensed jai wanting her.

Adi Jai convo was touching.

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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#228

hey..just read the whole ff...excellent work..loved the way bani and jai's emotions were protrayed...cant wait for more..continue soon pls...cnt beleive Jigs is behaving like this..lets hope jai figures it out and helps bani...😊

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Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#229

Hey Abhilasha,

Atlast you updated. Loved the whole part. Good to see that Bani is opening up to Jai and coming to her normal self. So Jai is realising his mistake, he does not want to push her....... good.

Why did Bani get teary in the end? I wish you could give us an insight into that and also what does she feel for Jai.

Waiting for the next update.

take care and keep writing

Shweta

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sparky

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Posted: 16 years ago

#230

Very nice part.. very emotionall too and i would like to say that it is never to late to rectify your mistakes and better late than never... hope jai and bani will find their peace and love in each other and in their baby.. pls continue soon..

thanks

reena

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