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Hi,
This update is a somewhat a filler, to help progress the relationship between Jai and Bani. I am planning to end this ff in about 3-4 chapters. Hope you all like it, comments and suggestions always welcome.
Bani I wanted to thank you.
Bani looked up confused.Thank me she asked , for what?
He stared at her, his eyes shinning mischieviously. For the excellent parathas, they were wonderful.
She blushed and then smiled inspite of herself. You're very welcome, Mr Walia.
Good night, Bani he said and turned to walk towards his chair.
Good night Mr Walia, she said almost relieved, and turned to walk away. Just as she reached the door. She heard him again call out her name, she turned to find him walking towards her.
One more thing, before you go.
Yes, Mr Walia?, she asked. He lifted his had and reached up behind her head and pulled at her bun, her hair fell tumbling down . She looked at him suprised.
You look better with your hair open Bani, he siad turning around and walking to his desk. Bani stared at his retreating back and stood there not knowing what to do . He sat at his desk smiling at her for a bit and then spoke.
Good night Bani, and please call me Jai, Mr Walia is too formal for my wife.
A red tinge covered her entire face and she mumbled good night and ran out. She could swear she heard his deep throated laughter comg from the room.
CHAPTER 8
Bani was in a frenzy trying to get everything set up. Rano had three days holidays coming up, and she had decided to visit. Jai had walked in to an hour before he had to pick up Rano to freshen up, but couldn't find Bani anywhere. He called out to her, and she appeared from her room a little later, a troubled look on her face. She smiled stiffly at him, and spoke softly. I will get your coffee ready, why don't you go freshen up? Jai looked at her curiously. Is everything okay Bani? Yes, she mumbled, putting he milk on the stove. Jai walked towards her, and gently placed his hand on her shoulder. Bani stilled and found herself unable to move. Jai gently turned her around and faced him towards her. Bani's eyes remained lowered, till Jai raised her chin to make him look at him. Bani, what's the matter? Bani bit her lip, looking embarrassed, it's really nothing. Bani, Jai said a little more forcefully. Bani took a deep sigh, it's just that Rano will be here, and she will know we share different rooms, I......she couldn't continue, and lowered her eyes again.
You should move all your things to my room while Rano is here. Bani looked back at him shocked. Look, Jai continued when he didn't get a response from her. I will sleep on the couch and you can take the bed, okay. It's only a matter of three days, we can be like roommates. This way Rano will never know, and also Dad won't find out. Bani still looked unsure. I...., but Jai cut her off. Bani, he spoke gently, holding her hand, we are happy with our situation, we have formed our own little world here, but neither Rano nor my parents will understand this, and you know it will cause them unnecessary pain. You understand what I am trying to say right? Bani nodded, but kept looking down. Jai gently raised her chin, so she was looking at him. Don't you trust me, he asked? She caught his eyes and saw the pained look on his face, and spoke, 'More than I trust myself'.
Jai stilled hearing her answer and his eyes fell on her luscious lips. He rubbed his thumb gently on her lower lip, and Bani held her breath and closed her eyes. Suddenly the shrill ring of Jai's telephone made her snap open her eyes, and she saw him fumbling with his phone. She blushed and tore her gaze away from him, and he answered the phone with an awkward, Hi. Yes, Rano I am on my way she heard him say. He hung up, and spoke hesitantly, it was Rano, she called to say she will be at the station in half hour. Bani nodded. I'll be back soon. Bani nodded again.

When Jai had got back an hour later with Rano, he met Bani at the door who smiled at him, and when he smiled back, she blushed a deep red. Rano noticed this and thanked god silently. Her sister was finally happy.

Jai watched the two sisters chatting away. He looked at the clock, it was 11:30 at night. Aman had been put to bed, and Jai felt bored. He stood up, and cleared his throat. 'good night Rano', I will see you tomorrow. Rano stood up and looked at him apologetically, Sorry jiju, I lost track of time. I won't keep Bani di up much longer. No, no Rano, I understand completely. You have a lot to talk about, lot ot catch up on can sit up as long as you want, he smiled at her. Rano nodded. He looked at Bani, who had her eyes lowered. Good night Bani. Bani mumled good night without looking up. I will leave the night light on for you Bani he said and leaned in and kissed her on her cheek. Bani's eyes shot up and a huge blush came over her face. Rano squealed, Awww, How cute, di and she began giggling.

An hour later, Bani tipped into the room. She saw Jai sleeping uncomfortably on the couch, his log legs dangling off the side, and the bedside light was turned on. She would tell him to switch wth her tomorrow, he looked very awkward sleeping on the couch.

The rays of sunshine flooded the room, and she heard the door knob turn. She knew it was Aman. She was about to go open the door when she heard Rano talking. Beta, you have to knock first, and she knocked. Jai woke up with a start and looked at Bani, who looked lost. He immediately flew out off he couch and jumped into the bed, and slid under the sheets. Bani took in a deep breath and proceeded to open the door.

Hi, Di Rano said and Aman ran in the room, and got up on he bed and jumped on Jai. Jai let out a loud groan and Aman laughed. Jai pulled off the sheets from his face, and picked up a pillow and both he and Aman got into a pillow fight. Rano and Bani started lauging seeing the sight, when Rano's eyes landed on the couch. There was a pillow by the floor and a blanket draped carelessly on the side. She frowned, and then looked back at Bani watching Jai and Aman fondly. She dismissed the feeling she got and slipped away, leaving the family to have their fun.

The next two days followed the same routine. Jai refused to take the bed and allow Bani to sleep on the couch. But half hour before Aman was to get up, Jai would slide into the bed to be prepared for his arrival.

It was Rano's last day, and Bani had taken the day off to spend with Rano. She was busy preparing kheer when Rano sat up on the table beside her. Di, she asked hesitantly, can I ask you something? Yes, Rano, of course. Di, are you happy with jiju? Bani stilled for a second, and without turning around asked Rano, Yes, I am but why do you ask Rano? Di, it's just that sometimes when I look at you , it's like you have all this love for him, but then you have this distant look about you, like you are yearning for him or something. Bani held her breath, Was she so obvious?

She kept quiet for a few minutes and then spoke, Rano you are just imagining things, we both are very happy together, and you have seen him with Aman, he loves him like his own, she replied stirring the pot slowly. Rano looked at her concentrating on making kheer. She slid off the table and stood near Bani.Then why are you not looking at me when you are talking about him, and why was there a pillow and bedsheet on the couch in your room, and why was Aman pointing to the guest room, saying mama's room and was dissapointed on not fiding you there? He looked for you in the kitchen before he ran to jiju. I mean di, what's going on, are you and jiju not........she trailed off not knowing how to put it. Bani slowly turned towards Rano, and saw her with her head held low. Rano, she said softly. I thought you were finally happy di, I thought you finally ahd someone to love you, the way you deserved to be loved, finally get a chance to have a family of your own, she said and started crying. Bani hugged her, and softly whispered shhhhh, till she slowly settled down.

Rano, she said a while later. I am happy here. Mr Walia is really a wonderful man. We may not share a traditional husband wife relationship, but we are happy with the way things are. We care for each other and we care for Aman, and he simply adores Mr Walia. But, di what about love? Love , Bani signed. Love is overrated Rano. Rano looked up at her, you don't really mean that di, I have seen you look at jiju, you have never looked at anyone else that way. Don't you love him? Bani blushed inspite her self and smiled softly. I think I do, she replied softly. Rano smiled. Then, why don't you give your marriage a try di? Jiju is really a wonderful man, he is perfect for you.

Bani bit her lip. Rano, love can't be forced, it can't be rushed. Mr Walia looks at me as his friend, nothing more. But, di have you asked him how he feels. No, Rano I can't do that, what if he doesn't feel the same way, what if it ruins everything. I am selfish, I don't want to lose what I have with him. But di, what if he does feel the same way? I just can't take the chance Rano, Bani said getting up. Now, please let it go, and don't tell anyone about this, she pleaded. Rano nodded her head and they sat silently for a while, before Bani had to get ready to pick Aman.

Two days later, Bani and Jai were invited to the Walia's house for Diwali celebration. Here too they were forced to sleep in the same room. Unfortunately, though Krishna kept knocking at their door, ever so often, that after Jai had tripped brusing himself running from one end to another, it was decided that Jai would just sleep on the bed. It was awkward for both of them at first. But they knew they had no other choice.

The sunlight streamed into the room. Jai got a whiff of sweet scent of rose and opened his eyes. Bani was sleeping on his hand and her hair was spread across the pillow. He stared at her, her innocent face, a saw a strand of hair lay carelessly on her face. He reached over gently and tucked it behind her ear. Bani stirred. Jai immediately shut his eyes. Bani opened her eyes and saw Jai's face, she smiled, then realized where she was. She stared at him for a while drinking in his appearance. She saw his hair flopped over his forhead, and smiled at how cute he looked sleeping. She reached her hand out to set it back, but stopped midway. She then gently lifted herself to make sure she didn't wake him up. and got off the bed. She pulled the blanket and covered him with it, and left to the bathroom to get ready. Jai opened his eyes, and smiled. He liked having her close. He took in a deep breath, her sweet scent still lingered on his bed.

That night the Walia's had a party. Jai peered over his glass at Bani standing in the corner surrounded by women, she stood out in her pink sari, simple yet enchanting at the same time. He was still looking at her, when she looked in his direction and smiled. He quickly averted his eyes. He didn't know what had gotten in to him lately, he couldn't help looking at her, even when he had people talking to him, he wasn't really listening. He found himself looking in her direction, catching her twinkling laughter, her animated talking, her gentle guidance to Aman. He stared at his drink, trying to wash her image form his mind. He didn't realize when his feelings towards Bani became so intense.

He knew he always looked forward to speding time with her, hearing her laugh, talk, just enjoying her concern for him. He loved how her face lit up everytime she was happy, how her face reflected so easily all the varied emotions she felt. He loved her xpressive eyes, they twinkled everytime she laughed. But, now the attraction he was feeling fer her was increasing. Maybe it was all the festivities going on, or the fact that they had been sharing a bed lately, making him all the more aware of her. He was finding it harder to ignore her now, he was finding it harder to hide his feelings form her.
He shook his head slightly to clear his thoughts. He needed some fresh air, he excused himself saying he needed a refill on his drink and slipped outside. The cool air immediately washed over him, and he felt less tensed. He sat on the swing and leaned back closing his eyes, thinking about the last few days.
BD

Edited by bdev - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Awwww that was such a cute part, both in love but scared to declare it. and jai running back and forth between his bed and couch, I was wondering when he would hurt himself and thats exactly wat happened.
Well its nice to see u back. Pls do keep updating. would love to see how they finally confess.
Cont. soon hun
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Thanks forupdating.

jai & bani are both attracted towards each other but don't want to express it with fear of spoiling the friendship they have distanting the other.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the great update. It is so well written.
Thanks,😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hope Jai and Bani doesn't go on playing musical bed - sofa for too long and get caugth.
BD great update, continue soon, loving every minute of the story.
Take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANKS A LOT FOR THE UPDATE
lovely part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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There is some error in page 13 and I am unable to open it. Can you please repost chap 8
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That was really sweet!!!! :) Im loving how he is really falling for her.. total coincidence I came onto IF.. and saw this was updated! Cant wait for more!!
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BD, wonderful update to a beautiful story.

Continue soon, waiting to read what happens.

Take care.
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Hello
Here's the next part, hope you enjoy reading. Sorry for the delay!!
He knew he always looked forward to speding time with her, hearing her laugh, talk, just enjoying her concern for him. He loved how her face lit up everytime she was happy, how her face reflected so easily all the varied emotions she felt. He loved her xpressive eyes, they twinkled everytime she laughed. But, now the attraction he was feeling fer her was increasing. Maybe it was all the festivities going on, or the fact that they had been sharing a bed lately, making him all the more aware of her. He was finding it harder to ignore her now, he was finding it harder to hide his feelings form her.
He shook his head slightly to clear his thoughts. He needed some fresh air, he excused himself saying he needed a refill on his drink and slipped outside. The cool air immediately washed over him, and he felt less tensed. He sat on the swing and leaned back closing his eyes, thinking about the last few days.
CHAPTER 9
Bani bit her lip contemplating what to do. She had been stealing glances at him the entire time. He looked lost, many times she was sure he was looking at her direction, but the one time her eyes met his, he turned away. Was he angry with her about something or was the whole situation of them being in the same room making him uncomfortable and miserable? The thought saddened her immensely. She knew he was not in love with her, she was slowly learning to deal with it. But, to have him avoid her was heartbreaking. She waited for a while, and then excused herself leaving Aman in Rano's care. She walked out into the lawn, and the cool air made her shiver a little. She looked around and found him leaning against the chair in the corner of the lawn. She walked towards him.

Jai smiled as soon as he caught the whiff of her perfume. He heard her shifting and the tinkling of her bangles, and he imagined her tucking her hair behind her ear, something she always did when she was nervous. She probably needed to ask him something. He stayed still waiting for her to speak.
Suniye, he heard her soft voice.
He signed, her voice was melodious and sweet, it took immense resolve on his end not to turn around and kiss her. He was shocked at his feelings, he was never the type to be not in control around people, but she managed to make all his defenses crumble, and she never even had to try, all she really had to do was look at him with her honey brown eyes, and he would melt. Every resolve, every decision, every tactic to remain stoic and unaffected would fly out the window.
When he didn't reply for a while, still caught up in his building emotions, he heard her again, a little louder this time, Suniye. Ji kahiye.
He imagined the blush on her cheeks that would cover her entire face when he said that. A few seconds later, he heard her again.
Mr Walia, I wanted to speak with you. Yes, my dear Mrs Walia, what is it? I am listening, he said his eyes sill closed and not turning around, just imagining the varied emotions on her face.
I wanted to know whether everything is okay, you left so suddenly, are you feeling okay, is something the matter, she rambled on.
He smiled, so she was looking at him, he felt happy at her concern for him.
I have a slight headache, thought I would take a little break and then rejoin the party. Is it any better now? she asked him concerned. Shall I get you something? No, I will just wait it out, it is not that bad, he said. Suddenly he felt her hands on his head, gently massaging. That feels great Bani, it was just what I needed. He heard her giggle softly, I know.
He let her massage his head for a few minutes, and then reached up and caught her hand. Bani stilled. He turned around and looked at her, his warm eyes bored into her own. She lowered her eyes. He gently kissed her hand, and she looked up surprised at the gesture and then colored immediately. Warmth suffused her entire being, and she stood not knowing what to do. She felt a gentle tug and fell forward on his lap. She grabbed at him for support, and looked up at him trembling. She felt his hand go around her waist and hold her tight. Bani he whispered into her face, you look beautiful tonight. She felt herself floating, being in such close proximity to him was playing with her emotions, with her senses. He pried her hand that was holding onto his shirt, kissed it and then placed it on his shoulder instead, now able to pull her closer to him, till he could feel her against him. He moaned slightly as her soft body molded against his, and spoke to her in slow rumbling voice, that made her feet curl. Bani I have been wanting to kiss you all night. Bani immediately lowered her eyes. I am going to do it now, if you want to stop me, now is the time. Bani sat still unable to move, the close proximity to him and his deep voice made her feel strange. She licked her lips unknowingly, and then she felt his soft lips against her own. He kissed her gently, and heard her deep moan. He pulled her closer and dropped more feather like kisses on her lips. He felt Bani's hand tighten around his neck, and he needed no more invitation. The soft kisses were replaced by more passionate ones, as all the emotions that the two of them had bottled up for so long came rushing up to the surface. A shrill ring of the phone bought Jai to his senses. He withdrew from her, and her eyes slowly opened. He could see the brimming emotions in her eyes, and her flushed face. He gently cupped her face and leaned his forehead against hers. The phone buzzed again. He pulled her gently towards him, as she laid her head on his chest, she took a deep breath of his wonderful musky scent. He smelled wonderful and she felt content being in his arms. With his free hand, he picked up the phone. Hello, Oh Ranveer, where are you? That's great, see you in a bit.

Jai and Bani sat holding each other for a while, and then Jai spoke, My friend Ranveer is coming over. He's has been my best friend since college days. He is very eager to meet my wife. Bani smiled. Chale, he asked her softly. Bani nodded. They both stood up, and Jai put his hand around her shoulder. Bani blushed and leaned into him. She loved being in his arms, his strength, his protectiveness and his love radiated through. She glanced up at him, as they were walking. He looked at her at the same time and smiled at her, and gently pecked her on her cheek. It burned and Bani felt warm all over. They continued walking back to the mansion, and Jai never left her till they entered inside and Aman came bounding over to Jai and caught his leg. 'Carry me', he ordered, and Jai smiled and picked him up, but held on to Bani's hand, while Aman related his many stories to him, and Bani looked on happily.

Rano, Uday and Krishna had tears rolling down their eyes as they watched the scene ahead of them. Rano held Krishna's hand and grasped it thankfully. She had told Krishna everything that had happened, she had seen her sister's pain and vulnerability and had needed to confide in someone. Krishna and Uday had seen Jai with Bani and Aman, they had noticed the glances, the admiration he had for Bani, they had observed it in the way he talked about her, they were sure he loved her too. It was then that they had then hatched this plan of getting them here and always having them be together, this was sure to bring their emotions to the surface, they deserved each other, they deserved the happiness that was long time waiting, they did not need to be pining for each other, not knowing how the other felt.
BD
Edited by bdev - 15 years ago

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