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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Hai Divan

Beautiful story 👏

Bnai in a bikini was a change 😳 ....Jai is already fida over her 😆 😆 😆

Eagerly waiting to see our irritated Bani and headstrong Jai coming close 😛 😛 😳

Pls cont soon 😛

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luvsagar

@luvsagar

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Kanta
Too, too good!!
Love your ff's please continue soon!

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huma

@HumaG

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

yeah a mushy ff! 😃 me liking it already bani in bikini 😆 😆 😆 thats a change no wonder JW is latto over her!

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nikita28

@nikita28

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Hiya,

Great start, can't wait to read the rest.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

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Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Kanta, what a sizzling story. Read it yesterday and was trying to post, but the Internet connection just wasn't happy with me, it seems. 😆

Just like a M&B kind of story, mushy yet so real, romantic yet at its fighting bext.

I want tutorials from you now, how do you manage to write so well and so articulately? It's such a great pleasure to read your stories always.

Thanks a lot KantaBen 😛

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Perveen

@Heartbreak

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

loved it divan
will be waiting for the next part

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Awwwwwwwwww a mushy mushy story 😳 😳 😳 ......I am so loving it 😳 😃 .....Bani in bikini 😎 .......the battle of sutubborness is on....loved how JW is trying to get bani's attention....she is in pink and going to the party with the man she doesn't like 😉 😳 ......our beloved Bani rani doesn't know what is coming in her way😛.....let the fun begin😳.......can't wait for more fireworks.......now update soon with more mushy mushy stuffs 😆

Good job dear 👏

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ferns82

@ferns82

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

wow kanta that an amazing start, so well written, u described the characters so well, and sparks fying every where and very mushy too 😳

loved the start, continue soon,

ferns

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Me love mush😃, me love story😃, me love Bratty Bani😃, and me absolutely love hunky and no-nonsense Jai😍
Thanks for the story and me is waiting for nxt part😉

byebye
Renu