SS: Kismath...bani’s story last part pg 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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HELLOWWWWWWWWW everyone...

last nite i was sleeping and i had this thought on my head..so i decided to let you guys know about this....yes FIRST time i'm writing a short story HOPE you guys like it plzzz let me know how it is...😊

Dixit's Residents Mount Abhu

nixkant Dixit: years old chap he is a Doctor.. his wife…

Kiran Dixit: house wife, loving caring, sweet and the best mum in the world, she will die for her five children and husband.

Bani: elder daughter of the house, she is just 17 years old, loving, caring, bubbly, makes everyone laugh with her none stop jokes..her dream is to be a Doctor like her father…she has just finished her school..

Daksh Dixit: he is the second child of KD & NK, he is 16 years of age still in high school

Rano D:15 years very sweet and lovely..just like bani very understanding and sensitive…

Pia D: very bubbly full of live just funny… 12 years of age very protective toward her younger sister..

Sonam D: the youngest child of KD & NK she is just 5 years...every one loves her because she is sweet

Walia Residents Mumbai

Karan W: big business man of India…juro ka ghulam

Krishna W: house wife…looks after her four children…she is a cruel woman.. loves to play with others emotion... using her husband & son's… she does anything her daughter tell her…

Ranveer W: thei first child married to Rashi… and has 2 years old daughter vidya….

RR: are very sweet loving people…

Jigyasa Bali: second child a cruel, wicked woman…likes to ruin her brother and bhabi's relationship… married to Aditya Bali and has 2 children, Sahil 6years and Anu 4 years….

Jai W: third child very loving person..hot, sexy is not enough to describe him…loves her mum a lot ..will do anything for his family..he is 23 years old

Nixiket W: Good looking boy ..he is in colloge, wastes money on girls. care free spoilt boy …

O.K phew..that was long intro…OK back to story

Good morning papa and mama,
N & K loocke up form the table, a smile appeared on their face's…a huge smile on her face…wearing a blue chodidar salwaar kameez and a tray full of breakfast items on her hand…her brown eyes were glittering with shine

N & K: good morning beta ..

nashta ready…place the tray on the table…her mum looked up…smiled

bani beta rano, daksh sub sorahai hai kya…bani smiled

haa mama wo sub sorahai hai because its Saturday..so no skool… (ok guys bear my hindi yaar. I'm really bad at speaking hindi and writing)…saterday was indeed a beautiful sunny day in mt abhu…

bani her mum and dad had their breakfast..the other were still sleeping …kiran took a sup from her tea and said….di ne phone kiya tha shaadi next week hai…a silent appeared every where bani looked at her mum and

N said…agar didi zeyada insist kar rahai hai tu you guys go you no I cant leave clinic like this…and got up from his chair and left….

bani looked at her mum and said papa is right.. I mean we can go to the wedding waise be humare holidays hai so we can be at the wedding diya di and masi will be happy or ise bahani will see Mumbai as will…..

I know you really want go and see Mumbai more than your sisters weding…said smiled kiran…bani chuckled… mum..said bani….

around 10 am every one woke up and had their breakfast including sonam…all were very happy that they were going to Mumbai to attend their masi's daughter wedding and all of them were more happy to see Mumbai because last time when they visited Mumbai was 3 4 years before…off course they were kids…they have heard a lot about Mumbai the dream city….but never explored Mumbai

they day flew by as they made their plans for their 2 week visit and decide on what they were going to wear...bani being bani said mama hum masi ko nahai kahengi ki hum aarahai hai…will surprise them… the others cheered yes mum we will not let them know..said daksh .yeshhh mummy don tell mashie…siad soman in her sweet childes voice….every one giggled bani hugged her tight…they made their plans…they will be leaving next Tuesday…

WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO BANI…WHAT WILL FATE BRING HER…

WILL SHE MEET HER MR RIGHT THER…

Boring may be…ok guys seriously I need your comments any thing are welcome..plz let me know if I should continue or not….i well be waiting for your comments

sonam😊

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Zaara91 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it seems no one like my story... 😭 i will give small promo... jb gets marrid...
if you guys are no intersted then i will stop 😕 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Sonam... no need to cry dear... 😃 ... lovely start.... wonder who's wedding is that...🤔 ... looks like our hero and heroine JB will meet in the wedding... looking forward to next part... 😳 ...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sonam really great start dear, i am sure that JB will meet as bani is gonna get lost in mumbai or rather what about someone making fool of them and them left with no money 😉

please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx fot rthe comment TAM2 jani SWATINARNG...it menas a lot...it dose encourage me to erit so i thought toupdate the next page as want to finis this soon...

It was Tuesday and early that day they all left to get the train to Mumbai. they said their byeee's to their papa who could not go with them right now but promised that he will be there on the wedding day….

Mumbai after a long travelling they finally were in Mumbai train station…they got off from the train took their luggage and took the taxi to the Randheri's house who was kirn's jiju and her niece was getting married…

Randheri Mansion

Decorated with lightes beautifully.. all the kids were shocked…they were looking at the house like they have never seen one before….mummy biggg..eyes popped out..daid sonam…kiran looking at her childrens shodk face she smile and all went….

Didi…Shelpa (lets name her that) turned around she was shocked to see her sister with her 5 niece's all smiling…she was shocked hell shocked…that was indeed big surprise….they all greeted each other kiran and shilpa got emotional after a long time….the kids were happy too …bride running down looked at her masi and then bani… you said you were not coming…said the bride…well thought of a surprise…said bani…the two of the hugged each other the bride was bani's best friend…..they all hugged each other they were tired so they end up the day. bani was with the bride….

so how is jiju? said bani… pata nahi …what..havent you meet him yet…said curios bani ..i have.. he is fine…said the bride…love marriage…said bani …now way…arranged mum and dad has chosen him they say he is really good person.. has his own business.. said bride…but di do you like him… said bani…well I don't know but you see love can happen after our marriage…said bride… both smiled an went to sleep…few days all th preprations were done…bani's papa come as well…mehindi night was awesome…every one put mhendi on including the children..sonam did too she was soo happy showing her mhendi to everyone….

now it was sangeet night everyone come down the walia's all come down and shelpa took kiran and introduced her to them….

bhaisab..said shelpa yeh mere behain hai kiran hai mount abu mei rahte hai and he is nixikant her hasband,,he is a doctor ..said shelpa…both them men shaked hand and karan W introduced his wife, ranveer, rashi jigyasa, aditya and finally (here comes JW looking dashing in blue sherwani) jai…said karan the all said hello how are you…ND KD thought they were very good people…off course rcih respected people…every one meted and greeted each other now time was to bring the bride down…the groom was all ready there looked quite nice…

light dimmed … everyone looked towards the stair…here she was the bride looking beautiful with her sister's and cousin's…on the other hand bani looked beautifull in the pink lengha … they walked slowly down the stairs….on the other hand jai for the first time he was shocked lookind at this beautiful girls…he thought..man who is she…infact every one in the sangeet were looking at bani she looked so amazing…she felt very shy at on how people were looking at her…specially men…all the girls come down. they went on the stage they bride and groom were seated…everyone congratulated them and bani went down to her family…you look beautiful beta sad kiran…shy thanx mama…umm papa our sab kaha hai…she asked questioningly…hai yahe kahe beta…some how bani thought some one's eyes were following her every where she didn't like that…indeed she was right jai was following her….



sangeet was over…gusts left slowly…bed their byes to every one it was walia's turn now ….every one was waiting by the door the walia's approached them and acha mr randheri 'ill get going 5thankyou soo much for everything….its not a problem walia sahib…said mr randheri….Krishna..looked at bani carefully..bani didn't like this gesture…she asked zaroor app ki beti hoge kiran..ji han mere beti hai bani…bani said hi to them…wowww boy oh boy jai was soo happy…thinking so bani name hai..not bad….they all left….next day the wedding took place followed by bidhaaie …bride was hugginmg her family and crying every one cryed….nithe passed another day

WM

everyone was at the breakfast table..excluding karan… jai was happy…he come and took set next to his mum… in happy voice he said mum mei appse kuch kehna chatho….everyone loocked up ha bolo..said Krishna…mum I want to get married…said jai…everyone was shocked at the same time karan was coming down the stairs..he was shocked too…kise shadi karma chati ho tum..said karn..now jai was shocked ..OMG I dint wanted dad to find out like this …jai told them that he wanted to get married and he said…he wanted to get married to bani nixikant's daughter…now Krishna and jigs were maha shocked so as the others ….banis said Krishna and jigs..ha mum…said jai…the other were happy karan liked bani so as the rashi and ranveer they thought she was very sweet loving acring person…but Krishna and jigs were not happy …karan said they will be going to the Randheri's house to ask for bani and jai's reshta….jai was really happy…hearing this…

Krishna and jigs were fuming about bani…(jigs live with her parents… in their house)
how can jai do this… she is middle class girl not she is fitted in our society..said jigs
Krishna was angry too they were keep planning on how to not let this reshta happen….they tried everything not to let this reshta take place but karan warned Krishna and jigs that nothing should happen since they were ging to their home to night and will as for her hand…on the other hand rashi was so happy because she like bani a lot and there will be some whom she can talk as she can not talk to jigs or mummyji…because even though rashi belonged to a rich family still this mother and daughter tried to break her and ranveer's relation ship but it didn't happen as ranveer never listened to her mum whereas jai was mum's boy…karan informed the randheri's that they werecoming to their home tonight…

Randheri house…

every one was missing the bride…they wree all busy with there own works mr randheri informed shelpa about the walia's coming and told her the reason..too shelpa was shocked …said lekin bani to abhi choti hai..muje nahai lagta ki kiran or nixikant manjayegi…well up to the although walia's are nice…said mr randheri….kiran informed kiran…kiran was shocked …but didi bani to abhi be choti hai or uska sapna hai ki she want to be a doctor like her father…said kiran..i know kiran don't worry just say to themtaht she is young I hope they will understand…although they are very nice people…ise rishta naseeb walo ko miltha hai ..said shelpa… nixikant was really shocked when he got to know that the walia's chose her daughter for their son…bani was unaware of what was happening ..

the night came the walia's come…jigs and krishan had plastic smiles on their face…god knows what their plan was…. karan told them the reason he was there for…nixikant said he will not agree to this reshta because his daughter is only 17 years and she wants to study further…karsn said that's not a problem she can study after she gets married we will not stop her from studying…sensing that they were not going to agree Krishna took kiran out side and started her fake crying ..emotionally blackmailing her…say things like if you say no my son will kill himself because he really loves your daughter and I promise that i will look after her as my own daughter… kiran was shocked at what this woman was saying…sensing her dilemma Krishna went down on her knees to touch kiran's foot…basically begging her to say yes…kiran said yes but you have to make bani's father say yes too…after all so much drama KD and ND said yes at that night poor bani didn't even know what was happing…the walia's were happy like anything specially jai OMG his was going to get married that too with bani…. the walia's left everyone was so shocked at what just happened…


at the same night bani got to know that she was engaged…she was shocked…she started crying…how can you do this you guys didn't even asked me once…why mum …kiran and shelpa explained how it happen.
kiran cried said I was so scared beta they way she begged me I couldn't say no to her I didn't wanted her to curse you …and every one knows that jai is a good guy……bani was not happy she was crying…in the wm jai was so happy that he couldn't sleep…jigs and Krishna were planning on what they will do next…the awfull night passed next morinig came the walias come down with a panditji to fix a date for the wedding and engagement…bani was not happy at all but she still come down set next to jay while jai was keep glancing at her …pandetji looked at their knodly (hope I spelled it right) he said that the engagement can be done next week but the shadi will take place after 1 year…know one was happy ecept bani…but jai sai is there ant closest day the pandet said after 1 week there is a mohorat for the wedding…jai was happy bani was sad….both families agreed and the walia's assured the dixits that they will keep bani happy like their own daughter….

enjoy reading 😃 😭
here i will be ending it if you interested or not i will continue...but your comments will encourage me to continue thanx for the silent readers too...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Sonam.... lovely part! Jai is a gonner!!! i guess love at first sight... 😳 😉 ... ur pretty fast... two update in one day...Thanks.... do cont soon... 🤗 ... looking forward to their wedding.... 😳 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good ff.Wonder how Bani will be after marriage. Willhe start liking Jai.

I am confused about Krishna . I thought she didn't want JAiBani to get married.then why did hse beg Kiran to agree for their marriage?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sonam congratulations on your ss!!! Kya baat hai sweety!! I really like the story. It really nice. Only the marriage thing bothers me. Jai is a total mama's boy. iff omething happenes and Krishna and Jigs blame Bani he will believe them.
But i am thinking Bani is a strong girl here and will set her Sasu-ma and SIL seedha like sugercane!😉
I liked your spelling of 'Kundali'😆 Sorry i am just teasing you.😳
Thanks for the PM and i will be looking forward to the next part.

Byebye
Ranjana

Edited by RANJANA_RRJ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaibani_fan

Good ff.Wonder how Bani will be after marriage. Willhe start liking Jai.

I am confused about Krishna . I thought she didn't want JAiBani to get married.then why did hse beg Kiran to agree for their marriage?

jaibani_fan thanx for the comment

will jai is in love for sure so krishna cant stopp the marriage instead she agreed because she has other plans for jb which will happen after the wedding

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aw....First of all congrats...On ur 1st SS....
And second of all...I loved it!!!
Dont worry...Give time...people..will comment ....
And wow!!!Jb already love... 👏 ...
And now Bani engaement??

Kya hoga kal???
😆 😆
Nikita..
Update soon....and Dont worry...!!KK..

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