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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88 story so far
plz cont soon
get this jigs out of jais life
she will make his life hell
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rooj. hope your exams went well.
This story is mindblobbeling. You have written a very clear an intrigeuing intorduction to this story. Now Bani-rani will come in and save Munna ' the beast' Wallia (somehow munna and beast dont go together😆) and they will be happily ever after. Right Rooj?😳
I want to see how the curse will be broken.

Thanks for the update.
beybye

Ranjana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start rooj, continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hai Rooj,

Beautiful start and very captivating 👏

I must had a lot of drama...with the priest cursing him and all...but it was really good....had a nice flow 😳

Hmmm...so Jigs is the villan of the story. I guess for all the attention Jai got he has to now pay for them 😳 😳 😭

I hope his princess (aka Bani)....will change him and the shrap will move away 😳 😳 😃

Pls cont soon 😃
Edited by melonie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i love disney stories wonderfully written pls cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you guys so much...

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

hi Rooj
great start buddy
Jai he spoilt brat
Jig the result of ignorance
waiting for Bani amma's entry so that she can change buddha
plz cnt soon

ps-cont Tinda & Karela too



thanks...
well i had to make Jai the spoilt brat and had to make Jigz her evil self...as for Bani's entry...keep reading it is going to get interesting...
will work on tinda and Krela too...next update will be on that..

Originally posted by: divya_123

great start rooj
really liked the concept and story line.
cant wait for JB to meet
do continue soon



thanks...thanks it is something new i have tried so hopefully it works out in the end...again forgive me for the mistakes...and will continue soon

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 story so far
plz cont soon
get this jigs out of jais life
she will make his life hell



thanks...well jigz has to stay here for now...just keep watching what happens...
the reason she is there is because unlike the movie, where magic spell bounds the prince to turn into beast and the rose is there to remind him of his acts, Jigs is there for the same reason. She is the 2nd villain of the story.

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Rooj. hope your exams went well.
This story is mindblobbeling. You have written a very clear an intrigeuing intorduction to this story. Now Bani-rani will come in and save Munna ' the beast' Wallia (somehow munna and beast dont go together) and they will be happily ever after. Right Rooj?
I want to see how the curse will be broken.

Thanks for the update.
beybye

Ranjana



thanks Ranjana,
my exams were good except for one class but not much to worry. i passed it. hehe.
well Bani will come but in a timely fashion and that too in a very sensible way...as for Jai and Beast comparison...well if you have watched Beauty and the Beast then u remember that how Beast was in his actions, Jai is going to be similar to that...but physically it is totally different.
this story is parallel to that story...i love Disney movies hence the adaption!


Originally posted by: swatinarang

great start rooj, continue soon



Thanks Swati di...will continue soon

Originally posted by: melonie

Hai Rooj,

Beautiful start and very captivating

I must had a lot of drama...with the priest cursing him and all...but it was really good....had a nice flow

Hmmm...so Jigs is the villan of the story. I guess for all the attention Jai got he has to now pay for them

I hope his princess (aka Bani)....will change him and the shrap will move away

Pls cont soon



Thanks mel(hope u dont mind me calling that)

well Jigz is the villain of the story but she is the 2nd villain, there is one more...just keep reading. I have explained above how jigz role is parallel to that of the rose from the movie...
Bani will soon come but not as of yet...it will be a good story i hope...
the curse will be broken just like in the movie but you have to read to see how it will be...even i have to figure that out. lolz. 😉

Originally posted by: amiee

i love disney stories wonderfully written pls cont soon....



thanks amiee...even i love Disney stories...aren't they the best? especially when it comes to depressing days. I love there songs so much!
will continue soon

thank you so much guys...

will like to clarify one thing: this is an adaption of Disney's Beauty and the Beast but it is not entirely of the same story. Plus the role of Bani is being played by Prachi, as in the original Bani here. So as i am writing this i imagine Prachi as my Bani.

rooj
Edited by rooj-i - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Rooj Billi......

A new story...haila..I haven't seen it yet!

It's late out here, but I promise to come and read it tomorrow....

-- S
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hey Rooj Billi......

A new story...haila..I haven't seen it yet!

It's late out here, but I promise to come and read it tomorrow....

-- S



Hey shins...

I know u haven't read it yet but i hope u read it along with the next part...

so waiting for ur comments all together...
rooj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys!
Here is my next part with utmost apologizes for being so late on this. Sorry but i have been busy lately.

Also to my fans of Tinda and Karela. im really sorry but i haven't really started working on it plus my next update for that story is going to be long, i have no idea how to write it from where i left off. so if u guys have any suggestions please pm me.

Now this next part of this story is dedicated my friend Ree and Rivs. Ree thanks for the long mails. and Rivs my heartiest Congratulations! I know I should've said it while back but i wasn't sure if the timings were right or not.
rooj
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Part 2

In a small town of Mt. Abu on the top most hill, hidden from the town's busy street, there was a small house of an inventor. He was an old man with a daughter who had a heart of gold. He worked in a hotel as part time but most of the time he invented new stuff. His name was Nishikant Dixit. His only wish was that one day he becomes the most famous inventor and that his daughter lives a happy life of her own away from this small city, especially far away from landlord's son, Aprajit(yea i hate him so much). He was a great inventor but because of Aprajit all his hopes and dreams were always shattered. Aprajit did his best to not let the old man's inventions to be picked out because then that would mean Nishikant's success leading to no blackmailing and one way ticket to out of this town.

The girl everyone talked about in the whole town was a book-worm of romantic fairy-tales. And on top of that she was the fairest, prettiest, and most respected girl in the town. She was Nishikant's most precious thing and for her he would go beyond to make her happy. She was Nishikant's princess and her name was Bani Dixit. Not only she was gorgeous, she also had all the talents that every girl envied and every guy loved. There was not one thing that she lacked that every girl should have. She could sing, dance, cook, was intelligent, knew a little bit about everything, etc. But she was best known for her cooking abilities. Her cooking was famous all over the city. She owned a small bakery in the streets of Mt. Abu; with help of her customers, mainly outsiders since the townspeople were forbidden to visit her most of the time by Aprajit, she helped run her house.

Aprajit, the most handsome guy in town and who was every girl's dream and every mother wished for such a son-in-law, was after the one and only daughter of Nishikant Dixit. No one knows the reason why he was after such a girl who didn't give him a worth of her time or even acknowledged his presence when he was around. Some thought that maybe it was because of her being the most prettiest in town and him being the hunkiest hunk, Aprajit wanted such a deadliest combination to show off and wanted people to talk about them in town like they were kings and queens. While others with smart brains had a different opinion. They thought that it was maybe because she was the only girl to have rejected him in the whole city, his ego was hurt and he wanted to make her his by hook or by crook. He tried to get her in many ways and he failed every-time. The only way he has been trying to get her to say yes to marry him was by blackmailing the Dixit family with threatening to take away their house.

Aprajit was getting tired of hearing no from the Dixit family and was tired of waiting around for Bani to say yes so he planned to get her the harsh way. He planned to send Nishikant on one of his inventions investments trips towards the jungle away from the town to Mumbai. He thought that if he sent Nishikant to town and then have him kidnapped or something and then he will go in search for him to show Bani that he cared and then he will be a hero in front of her and she will agree to marry him. But God had planned something else for him and as well as Bani.

Aprajit came to visit Nishikant one evening while Bani was in town in her usual spot reading away her favorite novels. Aprajit said, "Susar-ji, I ha---"

"I am not your Susar!" Nishikant sharply responded.

"Not yet but you will be soon," Aprajit informed as a matter of faculty, "Anyways we are not going to argue on that but I came here with great news for you today. I have found a great man who wants to look at your inventions and wants to invest his profit in them."

Nishikant didn't believe him at all, "What? I don't believe you. You are lying. This is again one of your lies or scheme to get to my daughter." He went to push him out of the door but...

"Ah but Susar-ji," Aprajit stopped him from interruption, "I sent him a sample of your inventions to see and I am not lying about that. This is not really my scheme and plus what would I get out of it if I did something wrong to hurt you because then Bani won't say yes at all, now would she?"

Nishikant was still suspicious, "How do I know you are not lying to me again?"

"Well because I have received a reply from him asking me to send you to Mumbai to show-case your inventions for final decision. Look he has sent me this," Aprajit showed him a letter from that man to Nishikant.

Nishikant took the paper from him to inspect if the hand-writing was indeed not Aprajit's. After thorough inspection, Nishikant asked for the investor's name and his name was Jai Walia.

After a lot of assurance, Aprajit was successful in sending Nishikant to Mumbai. While Nishikant prepared for his long journey and for new hope, Bani was sad and suspicious about Aprajit's intentions. She didn't trust him but she didn't have any choice but to believe him and let her father go on the journey alone even though she insisted to accompany him.

Months passed and Bani didn't hear anything from her father till one day she received a piece of her father's inventions in the mail and then she decided to go to Mumbai to see what happened to her father. While Bani was about to leave here, there Aprajit had no idea that she was leaving.

Bani left the next day after she received the little piece of invention. She searched for her father upon reaching Mumbai on little what she had until she was out of money and she needed to find a job to live off. That is when she first stepped into Walia Industries.

Upon entering the industries she soon found out that her father was forced to work in the industry's factory because of an unknown reason to her. So to take her father out of misery, she decided to offer her services to Jai in return of her father.

And that is where the story takes off.

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Please Stay tuned for more and if you want the next part please leave a comment if you want to know what happens next. 😆😉😛

Rooj
Edited by rooj-i - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haila!!!!!

this is something!!

yaar i grew up in US and i havent seen beauty and the beast! i know about it and know what happens but have never seen it!!

oh gosh!!! this story is awesome so far!!! plz cont soon!!!

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