SS:Beauty and the Beast-Pt 3,pg6 - Page 2

me 1st 😛
great story
just get rid of jigs and intorduce bani
pls cont soon

nice start......heroin badly needed to save the hero (villain for now)😆.....please continue

Roojoo,

Someone's writing style has changed I guess 😃 Seriously the way the prologue and the first part was written..it followed the traditional good old way of narrating stories. Loved the way in which it was written. 👏

Coming to the story...Jai getting spoilt was evident and the reason what made Jigyasa so cunning was perfectly placed. Waiting to know what happened next....

Btw for Jai's faults why did the couple had to suffer?...Just a thought!

Now finally your two hindi terms 😆...yaad aaya their english terms or still feeling sleepy? 😳

Hey Rooj,hope your exams went well. 😃

loved the first part,the way you introduced each and every character.the change in Jai to Jigyasa's cunningness everything was etched so fine.lookin forward to readin more of Jai and Bani. 👏

preet 😳

great starting rooj 👏
i dont know why ut i kinda feel sorry for jai right now 😆
as for jigyasa..no comments 😆
cant wait for bani's entry
continue soon


nadia 😛

i lubbbb it!!!jiggs as usual pure evil..thats what shes best at! 😆 😆 pls cont soon!

Wow..Beauty and the Beast!!!!!!!!! its my favorite Dinsey movie. Loved the way your narrating the story..Took me to olden times...

So Jai is a rich spoit brat and Jigs as usual a cunning person. Great beginning Roooooooooooojjjiiii..Looking forward to read JBs meeting..

You will not believe how happy I am to see you back at the forum and also to know that you are going to continue with my favourite Tinda n Karela soon 😃

Rama

Thank you so much guys for the comments...

Originally posted by: Twinkle_23

me 1st
great story
just get rid of jigs and intorduce bani
pls cont soon

Thanks...most definitely try to get rid of her but not yet😉 ...as for Bani keep reading 😉

Originally posted by: niruba

nice start......heroin badly needed to save the hero (villain for now).....please continue

thank you so much...well the heroin is definitely going to come but in style...i will most definitely continue soon...

Originally posted by: ree_views

Roojoo, Ree...

Someone's writing style has changed I guess Seriously the way the prologue and the first part was written..it followed the traditional good old way of narrating stories. Loved the way in which it was written.

lolz thanks yaar...i thought why not try something different, plus this story required a narration like that...but u never know if i ever had it in me or not right?

Coming to the story...Jai getting spoilt was evident and the reason what made Jigyasa so cunning was perfectly placed. Waiting to know what happened next....

Oh thanks...i was beginning to wonder if i really did justice to the story or not...i guess i did...i mean i changed things a little from jigs side...

Btw for Jai's faults why did the couple had to suffer?...Just a thought!

haha...yaar its not the couples, they are in a better place but Jai is suffering a lot since he cherished them...and plus u need to teach Jai a lesson

Now finally your two hindi terms ...yaad aaya their english terms or still feeling sleepy?

haha...yaar u know how i am in sleep...t^2d^2 lolz. and no i didn't remember as of yet.

thanks ree...
but yaar it is not that great when people just come here read it and then not leave one comment but u get so many hits...its not encouraging...but oh well i'll finish writing this while listening to Disney songs, my encouragement yaar...lol

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Rooj,hope your exams went well.

loved the first part,the way you introduced each and every character.the change in Jai to Jigyasa's cunningness everything was etched so fine.lookin forward to readin more of Jai and Bani.

preet

thanks preet...
my exams went pretty well...better than i expected them to be...
thanks that u love the introduction...that was Jai's introduction, Bani's yet to come...
keep reading!

Originally posted by: nadia.s

great starting rooj
i dont know why ut i kinda feel sorry for jai right now
as for jigyasa..no comments
cant wait for bani's entry
continue soon


nadia

thanks Nadia,

well i feel sorry for Jai too and im sorry to make him like that. lolz. but it is needed so have to...as for Jigs, u will have comments on her soon enough...and Bani well keep reading...

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

i lubbbb it!!!jiggs as usual pure evil..thats what shes best at! pls cont soon!

thanks...hope u love the next part too...as for jigz i planned to make her nice but then i was like no it doesn't suit her and the story...but keep reading to find out what happens to her...

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Wow..Beauty and the Beast!!!!!!!!! its my favorite Dinsey movie. Loved the way your narrating the story..Took me to olden times...

So Jai is a rich spoit brat and Jigs as usual a cunning person. Great beginning Roooooooooooojjjiiii..Looking forward to read JBs meeting..

You will not believe how happy I am to see you back at the forum and also to know that you are going to continue with my favourite Tinda n Karela soon

Rama

thanks Rama,
Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorites of Disney as well...and thanks yaar the story required such narration...so yea...

thanks hope you enjoy reading about Bani as much too..next up is her introduction...

thanks...i thought people forgot about me..lolz. no i will definitely continue soon with the new update for tinda and karela...i plan to finish that soon...so enjoy! and thanks for the welcome again!

rooj

hi Rooj 😛
great start buddy 👏
Jai he spoilt brat
Jig the result of ignorance
waiting for Bani amma's entry so that she can change buddha 😛 😆
plz cnt soon

ps-cont Tinda & Karela too 😛

great start rooj 👏 👏 👏
really liked the concept and story line. 😃
cant wait for JB to meet 😳
do continue soon