SS:Beauty and the Beast-Pt 3,pg6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1-pg 2
Part 2-pg 4
Part 3-pg 6

I know you must be thinking where is the Disney movies and where is Kasamh Se. Well i don't know if anyone has ever written this before but if you have then please let me know and i'll close it before i even begin.

Now the story is related to the Disney's Beauty and the Beast so the majority of the credit goes to them but i have put down some of my own twists here and there. So the concept is same but the settings, characters, and some minor things are changed.

I am very fond of Disney movies and i love all of them but my favorites has always been this one, Mulan, Little Mermaid, and Cinderella. I love others too but these are my favorites.

So here is my little SS that i will continue soon after my exams but here is a sneak preview i have so far.

so stay Tuned for more....
rooj
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The whole world couldn't believe it. The same man, who hated the world, whom the world hated, is now one of the brilliant and most loved man today.

Some believed that luck changed him while others believed that love did, but only one person knew that it wasn't neither but rather both.

Where ever he went now, it was always "Jai sir this or that..." He became the only name on everyone's tongue now, be it kids, mothers, or businessmen. Most amount of fans following him were of girls. He had everything, love of the people, fame, money, respect...etc but there was one thing that his eyes always searched for and he wasn't able to get it.

To understand what happened with him, we will step back in time and tell the tale from the beginning till now to see how he got and who is he missing in his life.

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How do you like it so far? I'm going to apologize in advance for not continuing this asap due to my exams but this idea i just got and didn't want to let it go out of my hands.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start. Can't wait for the update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rooj...what about the tinda and karela... 😭

Ok I love disney movie too...watched them over and over with my kids...especially the songs. I can't to find out how the beast got tamed...and beauty disappeared.😊

good luck on exams.👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Rooj,how are you doing? I wish you all the best for your exams. 😃

May I just say that I love Disney movies, 😳 😳 I watch them all the time.Happily ever after is my favorite part,loved the sneak-peak.Will be eagerly waiting to read the first update. 😛

preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very different and interesting...please continue....all the best for your exam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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where ish Tinda and Karela
i am waitting fol that 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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what an awesome idea...plzzz cont rooj...cant wait to see how it turns out.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Rooj,
Do continue with this story.
Beauty and the Beast is my absolute favorite Dinsey movie. I would like to know how you will handle this story.
Do not worry about not continueing ASAP. concentrate on your Exams and I hope you will do well.

bye
Ranjana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mmmm fairy tale....always a treat to read them...BRing it on Rooj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys,

I'm back and i have to thank you all for waiting and for the comments as well. i really appreciate all of it.

Now those of you who are wondering if i'm still writing Tinda and Karela then I have to say that yes I am. and will finish that soon. but i have to start working on this one first so here is my first part. Hope you love it, but first i said it is similar to the fairy-tale but not exactly like it.

Enjoy!
rooj
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Part 1

In the far corner, on the top-most hill of Mumbai, a man and his wife lived in a Haveli. They started out small, went through a lot of hardships to get to the position they are at now.

One of the richest man in the whole city, Uday Walia was blessed with a dutiful, loving, and caring wife, Krishna Walia. They were blessed with everything except for one thing they desired the most: a child of their own and the heir of their company. One day the God granted them that wish too and they were blessed with a boy. They named the boy Jai. They were blessed with a girl soon after, Jigyasa. But since Jai was the first child of the Walia clan, he was the most loved around the house.

He was everyone's favorite. He was given the best education, best clothes, best everything. He was cherished around the house that he was called a brat at times but no one ever had the guts to say it in front of his face.This made him invincible and he believed that he could rule over others.

Jigyasa loved her brother too but she was jealous of all the attention he received from everyone. The whole house was latto over the boy. Even though Jigyasa had a heart of gold and had a strong heart but she was a human too and loathed her brother a lot. She yearned for the love of her parents, yearned for their attentions. Of course Uday and Krishna loved Jigyasa as well but they loved Jai more than her, this same behavior made Jigyasa bitter towards her family and her brother.

Since Jai was spoiled a lot as a young boy, he grew up to be tough, bratty, rude, arrogant, and sort of greedy. He thought he owned the world where ever he went. Due to that very reason, he was hated by all. The so called friends he had were only there because of his money, except for Aditya, his childhood friend. His parents were always worried about him and his future so they decided to do something about it on his 20th birthday.

While Jai went to live on like that, Jigyasa slowly grew stronger and cleverer than Jai in the hope that her parents would notice her.

But fate had something else for them all because one day, on Jai's 20th birthday an old man came to the Walia house in search of some happiness and survival. He was directed inside the house by Jai's parents so that Jai would do the deed himself. In return, Uday and Krishna hoped that the old-man would bless Jai and he might change.

Jai being Jai, didn't realized the importance of the act, he ignored the old man and humiliated him in front of the whole world. What he didn't know was that the old man was really a priest testing Jai by his parents. Instead of giving Jai the blessings, the priest cursed Jai for life: "You have insulted me! You have insulted God! I am going to curse you for life by God's grace! You will under go a tragedy in your life very soon and from that day on you will be the sole reason for your own destruction! You will never be happy after that day until the day you learn to change yourself! You will only become Happy the day you find the true meaning of life! Mark my words!"

Jai's parents became so worried from that time on, while Jai ignored it and Jigyasa only waited for that day to come.

That is exactly what happened: two days later Uday and Krishna met with an accident and died on the spot. Jai became so depressed and became harsher. He was so hurt and so heart-broken that he became a stone-hearted man. Jigyasa took advantage of that situation and decided to act on her impulse. Instead of reviving her brother, she poisoned his mind, hoping to turn him mad so that she will be the only heir to the family's jyadad (forgot that word 😆 ) but her plans were spoiled slowly when Aditya intervened and married her.

Jai went on to take his father's business to higher grounds. But as he advanced on, the more stone-hearted he became. Every time he tried to change himself, Jigyasa came in the way and spoiled his plans. Since she was blessed with two children as well, she wanted all the jyadad for her children and herself. She pretended to be Jai's only and closest hamdard (again forgot) for that reason. She wanted to gain everything for herself. That was one of the reason she never let Jai marry for the next 7 years until the day Jai met Bani.

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Hope you like is so far...I did my best. sorry for the mistakes since i'm writing it in a hurry and writing at 1 in the morning.

Please leave comments if you like it
rooj

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