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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank god you updated i was waiting and waiting, actually i was waiting for kyun ki.... but you updated this one. thanks...

OMG jai's gonna propose to bani, he really loves he no matter what her past is. Shamita left sumit, what losers they didn't even tell shamita that sumit was married before, but really want tina to find out that sumit is impotent. i just hope sumit and tina doesn't get in the way of bani's happiness.

So jai is proposing to bani in paris, How romantic. you know they do call paris "the city of love" 😳 there just might be enough fireworks between them 😳

wonderful part
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey nice update

glad bani stopped wedding ... cant wait for propsal ... hope nothing goes wrong ...... n bani accepts :d
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey nikita 😛 ....
awesome update 👏 👏 👏 ......happy that bani stopped the wedding 😉 😆 😆 ......wow jai is planning to propose bani in paris 😳 ......jai is soo cute 😳 .....
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow nice part
jai is caught by neelam
and he finally realises he's in love with bani
and bani, poor girl, so much stress and confusion 😛
cant wait for your next update

SA 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part yaar 😊 😊 😊
hope she accepta the proposal
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
glad that jai still loves bani after knowing her past
hmmmm cant wait 4 paris
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part
glad that jai knows the truth cant wait 4 him 2 propose
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Posted: 17 years ago
Loved the update. I'm glad that Jai found out. The scene at the shaddi was great, she gave back to Tina, although Sumit needed two more slaps 😡.

I am so happy Jai wants to propose, I liked the scene in the hospital between Jai and Bani, it was very sweet.

Please continue soon.

BD
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey!!!!!!!!! It was a wonderful update. I really liked it but I think the next update will be exciting.

Hopefully, Jai and Bani will be in the most romantic city, Paris ofcourse. I love Jai. He is a true lover. I knew he wouldn't stop loving Bani even after knowing that she is married. I am eager to know how he will propose to her.

Uday is also a very supportive father. One question the reports that Neelam was talking about, are they important to the story?? Anyways wonderful update. Waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey..Sorry...for the late update...Hope you guys liked this one...
Dedicated to-Balpreet-(My inspriation😳), Rimjhim, Tropa,
Kanta Di, Koolgal, Binish, Niruba, Ducky_Euro, ~*Noor*~,
Hipreet, Iqbal Neha 1, Smiles_Uk, Jinzcool, BD, Janu_2006
Thanks for all the wonderful comments...
This update kinda became musical, sorry for that...😆
This part in red, for love…Sorry in advance…

Enjoy…

When Jai and Bani reached home, they continued to pack…It was 1100 and Jai saw Bani's room door open, he went to close it, but saw her awake and walked in…Alarming her

Bani-Oh..You scared me!!

Bani got up, fixing the bed, letting him sit…

Jai-Rehne do, I'll do it…tumhara pown(foot) kasia hai?

Bani-Its good, don't worry…

Jai-Look Bani, I'm really sorry, about

Bani-Jai!! It was an accident relax…

Jai-I know, but it was my accident

Bani-Oh god! Please Jai just stop..Its not your fault…Wase tum soch kya rahe the…

Jai-Hun?

Bani-I mean gari chalathe waqt?

Jai-Uh…kuch nahi…Mujhe bouth neend arahi hai, main chaltha hoon…

Bani-(smiling)-Okay, Good Night kal subhe flight kithne baje ki hai…?

Jai-730am…So be up by 300am

Bani-Whats the point of sleeping!! Its in 2 hours!!

Jai-True…But I have a lot of work to do

Bani-Jai!! What kind of work!! We're going for a party!!!

Jai-Yeah, but I have a lot of work…See you in the morning…

Bani-Fine!! Night

Jai spent the rest of the night going his preparations, and thinking of his life with Bani…

Jai-(dreamily)-Kash..

FAST FORWARD>>>

Jai-Bani!! Mere tie kahan hai?

Bani-Main atharva ko nasta kehlarahi hoon, aap kud doondlijiye!

Jai-Bani!! Nahi milrahi..

Bani-(sighing)-Jai!

Bani came to the room, and Jai sneakily closed the door

Jai-(hugging her from behind)-Bani…

Bani-Jai!! TUm bhi na…konsi tie chahiyeh?

Jai spun her around, and placed his hands around her waist…

Bani-(looking, seeing that he had a tie on)-Jai!! Tumne Tie penihui hai…

Jai-Toh…Ek kiss

Bani-Nahi!

Jai-Please…

Bani-Nahi!!

Jai-Please!!

Bani-Fine!!

Bani moved closer when…

XXX

Jai's alarm went off…

Jai-(waking up, as he had dozed off on the table)-Shit!

Jai ran his hands threw his hair, and shook his head…

XXXXXXXXXXX

At 300 JB went to the airport, and Uday went to drop them. Bani was excited and so was Jai.

When they reached the airport

Bani went toward check in while Uday was talking to Jai

Uday-Kush raho, aur mere bahu ko ghar lekar anna…

Jai-Ji..

XXX

Upon boarding the flight

Bani was breathing heavily…She had a fear, of planes crashing and hijacking…

Jai-Whats wrong Bani?

Bani-(putting her hand on his, on the arm rest)-Kuch nahi, just a little nervous…

Jai-About what?

Bani-The plane ride!

Jai-Oh god!! Bani!! You'll be fine

Bani-Are you sure?

Jai-Positive!

XX

Take off was harsh…There was a lot of turbulence, and Bani held on to Jai tightly as Jai enjoyed it, but he tried to calm her down…

When they arrived…

Bani-God Jai!! I cant belive it !! We're in Paris!!

Jai-(finishing the sentence)-The city of love!!

Bani-Yup…So when is the party?

Jai-Tonight!

Bani-(confused, took out her card)-Liken card par toh kal likha hai

Jai-Sorry, kal hi hoga…

They got to there hotel, and went to their rooms…

Jai-Meet me down here at 500pm

Bani-Okay Jai…

When bani entered her suite, it left her spellbound!! There were tulips everywhere!!! She walked up to the bed, on which there was a blue box…She unwrapped the box, and saw a beautiful dress inside…attachted to it was a note..

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NOTE
Tumhare liye, ek toufa, tumhare kubsurathi ko nikare ga jo…Isko pahen kar anna

Hum ko humhe se churalo

Dil main kahein tum chupalo…

-Jai

*Will be waiting in the lobby at 500 sharp

Bani read the note, and was confused…What did that mean??

Bani-(to herself)-Iska kya mathlab hai…?

She shrugged it off, and looked at the sari…

She rested a bit, and then wore the sari and went downstairs…

She looked around waiting for Jai…

Suddenly someone came and tapped her on her back..

Bani-(turning around)-Jai!! TUm..

Bani bit her lip, and saw that it was some random man…

Man-Excuse mua madam mousel, Are you Bani ?

Bani-Uh…Yes I am

Man-This is for you…

The man handed her a red rose, with a note attatched to it…

It READ
Tum iss sari main bouth kubsurath lagrahi ho,

Bhar jakar dehko…

Ek limo tumhara wait karrahi hai…

Bani looked around for Jai, Bani walked outside, and saw a black stretch limo waiting for her

Bani-OMG!!Yeah sab mere liye?

The shoufer opened the door, and Bani sat inside…

Bani enjoyed the ride, but she really was confused..

Bani-(trying to change the subject)-Jai zaroor koi mazak kar raha hai….voh bhi na…

When they arrived to the destination, the shoufer opened the door, and Bani got out…She was escorted to a canopy set in the sand…Near the ocean…There were candles in glass vases…set along side the canopy making a pathway… The view was breathe taking, and unable to describe in words... They had a perfect view of the Eiffel tower…The sun was setting, almost melting into the ocean…Bani breathed in the cool ocean air…

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Her eyes searched for Jai, as she walked to the canopy… The canopy was completely white, The drapes were white, as well as the table, with blue candles…There was a note on the table…She picked up the note shaking her head…

Bani-Ab dehkthe hain, iss main kya hai?

But before Bani could open the note, Jai caught her hand…

Jai-

Bani-Hey! Yeh sab!!

Bani-Its just!!

Jai-Shh…Dinner?

By now it was 620pm

Bani-liken…Isnt it early?

Jai-well we have a full 4 course meal!!

Bani-Jai…Yeh sab?

Jai-Main kaha nahi…Shh…

XX

They ate dinner, which was really quite, all the dishes just wowed Bani!! She was like!! OMG!! And Jai just watched her expression…and smiled..

Jai was really lost throught out dinner, she looked amazing in the sari, just as he had imagined it…As he saw it everything was going well…

A live orchestra played the music in the background…as Jai sung…

Sasoon ko sasoon main dulne do zarra..

Bani's was in awe!! She never knew Jai could sing so well, sounded as if an angel was calling her to the heavens…

Jai-May I have this dance?

Bani just put her hand out, and was swept away by Jai…

Jai continued to sing…

Sassoon ko sasoon main dulne do zarra

Bahoon main humko pigalne di zarra

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh pass agaye hum…

Hum tum

Bani began to sing…being totally in the moment…Her eyes couldn't leave Jai's…

Tumm…Hum tum…

Jai felt really happy seeing that Bani sang…

They continued like that for some time...Until Jai himself interrupted…

Bani was literally on Jai, Jai tapped her shoulder…and pulled away..

Jai-Dessert?

Bani-(feeling strange, coming out of a trance)-hun? Yeah…Jo bhi…

Dessert was something else…

Jai-Here dessert..

Bani-Just one?? I mean tumhara dessert kahan hai?

Jai-Nahi, I don't want dessert…

Bani-Are you sure?

Jai-Yeah…positive…

Bani-Okay…

Bani dug her spoon into a chocolate mousse…and found it hit something…

She moved the mousse revealing a plastic dome…in Which there was a ring!!!

She took the plastic dome out, and opened it revealing the ring…

Bani's mouth went wide open, as she stared at the ring, then Jai…

Jai took the ring from her, and walked her over toward the water…

Jai kneeled down, holding the ring…He took a deep breathe, as did Bani…and began…

He started out singing…a couple of lines, after clearing her throat…(FROM JANAT< THANKS TO RIMJHIM)

Zara si dil main de jaga tu

Zara sa aapna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa..

Patha nahi, kaise aur kab, Liken main tumse pyar karne laga…Ab tumhare saath har pal rehna ka dil chahtha hai… Jai began to chuckle…I know this sound kinda corny…Liken sach hai…

Kya tum mujhe aapne pure zindagi tumhare saath guzarne ki igazath dogi? Bani…Kya tum mujhse shaddi karogi?

Jai stood there, waiting for her response…He gave his hand out for hers…When she didn't respond he took her hand and put the ring on himself…

Jai-Bani…Main aur kneel nahi karsak tha…!

Bani still stood there motionless…

Jai got up…and went to hug her when…

Bani moved back…

Bani-yeh…Yeh nahi hosak tha…

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Jai-Oh, I understand..no hugging till we get married..thats okay…Chalo..lets go see the Eiffel tower…

Bani-(pulled away from his reach)-JAI!!

Jai-Hun? Kya hua Bani?

Bani-Tumhe samajmain nahi araha kya? Main…main tumse shaddi nahi karsak thi!!

Jai heard the words, seeming like buildings crashing on him…His heart hurt, and it felt like someone wripped it out, and threw it in the ocean…His eyes welded up, and his legs felt weak…

Bani moved back…and Jai turned around…bani kept walking back until she bumped into something…More of a someone…She turned around to see what it was…and it was…

SUMIT

Jai-(Taken aback)-Liken…liken kyun??

Bani-Sumit?

Jai-Sumit?

Sumit-Haan, main!! Mujhe yahan ek contract mila, and I decided to take it…When I found out what hotel you were in they told me you were at the beach…I wanted to say sorry..For everything…

Sumit hugged Bani, and she stood still…She looked at Jai who seemed sick…

Sumit-Kya hua bani? You look sad? Arent you happy to see me?

Bani-hm..Uh…Sumit, kya tum hotel jasak the ho, main athi hoon..

Bani's voice cracked, and she seemed as if there was a whole in her heart..

Sumit-Fine..

Sumit really didn't pay mind to the man sitting on the sand…

After Sumit left, Bani went near Jai…

Bani-Jai…main…main…shaddi shuda…Aur tumne asse socha bhi kaise? Ki? Main aur tum?

Jai-Par Bani…

Bani-Nahi Jai…isme mere hi galthi hai!! Its not your fault…Jab…jab maine tumhara office join kiya tha, thab maine single likha tha…right??Aur phir, shaddi main..maine Sumit ki kithni besathi ki!! Tho but natural…ki tumhe assa laga ki main, main aur tum!! Liken assa nahi hai Jai, Main aur Sumit…It was just one stupid argument..nothing more…Ab tho hum baath bhi karne lage… Toh lets just put this whole thing behind us…Okay…Chalo…Hotel wapiss jathe hain…

Jai-(heart broken, catches Bani by her wrist)-Tum aur Sumit? Ussne tumhare saath jo kuch bhi kiya usske bad bhi…I mean he tried to rape you?!

Bani-(pulled away)-Liken, jo bhi ho, voh MERA pathi hai!!

Jai-(didn't have anything to say)-

Bani-I'm really…sorry Jai

Bani went to the table, she grabbed her bag, and shoved her cellphone, along with the note into her bag…She left…

Bani took a cab back to the hotel…and cried most of the way…

Jai-(at the beach, kicking sand)-Shit!! Main kithni pagal tha, jisne socha ki MAIN, mujhe Bani jase jevan sathi milegi…

Jai sat there most of the night feeling depressed, and alone…

Bani-( at the hotel)-Mujhe yeh sab bhool jana chahiyeh!!Aur wase bhi…main aur Jai sirf dost hain..aur kuch nahi…kal hotel main humhare company ki party hai…I'll just act normal and forget all this…

Sumit-Bani, aggaye?

Bani-What the hell? Tum yahan? Aur beach? Yeh sab kya tha?

Sumit-(shocked she was mad)-Come on Jaan…

Bani shrugged away from Sumit's touch…

Bani-Tumne mere saath jo kiya usske bad tumhare ithni himat? Aur tumhe mere room ka key kisne diya?

Sumit-Manager ne!

Bani-Get the hell out!! Tumhara aur mere rishta uss din katham hogaya, jis din tumne mujhpar haath uthaya…

Sumti tried to pull Bani close to him, but Bani kicked him between his legs…

Bani-Mujhe yeh bouth pehle karna chahiye tha…

Bani called secutiry and got Sumit kicked out…

Bani didn't sleep the whole night and neither did Jai,

Jai spent the entire time at the beach…

Sach ke raha hai dewana

Dil, dil na kisi se lagana

Juthe hain pyar ke wade sare juti hain pyar ki kasme

Maine har lamha jishe puja

Jisse chaha usine yaara mera dil toora

Tanha Tanha chorra…

He got back to the hotel earily in the morning…

Jai and Bani met in the lobby…

Bani-(seeing Jai just coming in)-Jai!

Jai-(turning and seeing Bani looked tired)-

Bani-Jai, tum abhi abhi arahe ho?

Jai-Hmm…

Bani-look Jai, I'm really

Jai-Don't say it…Sham ko party hai, be there at 700

Bani-(Bani sighed)Okay…

XXX

Bani tried to sleep in the day but unfortunalty it didn't work…

Bani-Mujhe Jai ke liye bouth bura lag raha hai…Main sham ko phir sorry kedoongi…

XXX

At the party…Jai and Bani entered together…and were shocked!!!

EVERYONE-SURPISE!!!

There was a huge banner going across the room, and it read congratualtions, Jai and Bani…

Jai was really shocked..!!

Uday came up to Jai and Bani and hugged them both…

Uday-Arre mere bahu! Tujhe kya laga Jai, sirf tu hi surprises de sak tha hai, hum nahi!!

Sanjay-Hey bani!!Congrats on the wedding…

Bani began to cry and she ran out crying…

Jai called the party off, and told Uday, Neelam, and Sanjay what had happened…Sanjay went to talkto Bani…

Sanjay-May I come in?

Bani-Please go away!!

Sanjay-Please…

Bani-Ajao..

Sanjay came in and sat next to Bani…

Sanjay-Tum galath kar rahi ho…

Bani-Tum bhi!!

Sanjay-Main bhi mathlab?

Bani-I mean, tumhe assa kyun lagraha hai ki MAIN galath hoon? Jab ki main shadi shuda hoon…

Sanjay-Haan, shadi shuda uss risthe main, jo ki ab toot chukka hai…Jai ek bouth acha insan hai…

Bani- I know that…

Sanjay-Aur voh tumse bouth pyar kartha hai…

Bani-I know that too…

Bani bit her tounge…

Sanjay-Then…problem kya hai?

Bani-Koi problem nahi hai…bus main shaddi nahi karsak thi …

Sanjay-Tumhe daar lagraha hai…

Bani-What nonsense mujhe koi daar nahi hai..

Sanjay-Tumhe aapne rishta tootne ka daar hai…Liken Bani…har rishta nakamiyab nahi hota…Kuch rishte Amar rehthe hain…

Bani-(crying)-Aur agar yeh rishta bhi tootjaye?

Sanjay-Toh samjo ki voh rishta tumhare kiye kabhie tha hi nahi…Liken koshish…

Bani-Sanjay, ab agar mere dil toota toh nahi bachpaye ga…

Sanjay-Liken tum kud Jai ka dil toor rahi ho…kabhie socha hai…usske dil par kya bithrahi hai?

XX

With the Sanjay left…Bani wondered…

She remembered all the times, when Jai had made her laugh, made her smile. She thought a lot, and she realized she was just afraid...Afraid that she might get her heart broken again…She couldn't break Jai's heart because of it though…She would try the relationship, even if it didn't work…She belived in Jai, and knew she would be happy with him…

Bani felt really light…She stood in the mirror, looking at the ring still on her hand…She smiled, then ran to her purse…She wanted to call Jai…She wanted to tell him what she felt…But his phone was coming busy, and she found a note in her bag…Which she had accidentally dumped in her bag…

She read it aloud…

Dil na toote tumhara kudha ke liye…

Rahe humhara pyaar sadha sadha ke liye…

Bani-(aloud)-Jai bhi na, aaj kal kafi filmy hogaya hai…and wow he's an amazing singer…And I have to admit, that proposal was PERFECT!!

With the pleasant thought of Jai Bani began to hum, which soon turned into singing…(from SING IS KING)

dil kho gaya, ho gaya…

kisika…
ab raasta, mil gaya….

khushi ka…
aankhon mein hai, khwaab sa…

kisika…
ab raasta, mil gaya…

khushi ka…

rishta nayaa, rabba…

dil chhu raha hai…

kheenche mujhe koi dorr, Teri Ore…

teri ore

Teri ore

Teri ore

Hai rabba

Bani spun around her room feelings great…Sanjay who was in the hotel disressed about the entire situation, heard the sweet sound of singing from Bani's room…He knocked on the door…

Bani-(opened it, and continued to sing..)-

Sanjay-Bani?

Bani stopped singing…

Bani-

Sanjay-hm…Someones looking happy…So realized, Jai's the one?

Bani knodded, and Sanjay left with a smile…

Bani went to the beach…and found Jai there…

They both stayed quiet…

Bani-(ran up to Jai, she really wanted to sort this all out)-Jai!! Main kuch kehna chathi hoon…

Jai-Look…I really didn't know about the party…but…I'm sorry..

Bani-(cut him off)-But I want to say something…

Jai-You don't have to…I'm going Bani..I'm sorry I ever…I'm sorry I ever met you! I never wanted to hurt you, I didn't know love could be so painful…Have a happy married life with Sumit…

With that Jai left…

Bani-Jai!!

She called out to him, but he left…and Bani collapsed on the floor in tears…

Zingadi main koi kabhie aye na raba

Ayye toh koi toh phir jaye na rabba

Dene ho agar tujhe bad main ansson

Phele koi has aye na rabba

Jai left he went back to the hotel room, and cried…He packed his bags…and left!! For good!!
Now I think I'll run...😆
See you guys next time...
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nikita...

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