rise and shine wid jai and bani-part 6..!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is my second ff...my 1st ff is "pains of love" link..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=884165&T PN=1

..................and now for the second one.............

rise and shine wid jai and bani...

INTRODUCTION<<<<<

bani : she's not at all like the one in ks..she is cool and quite modern, stylish..but not sooo much...she's the RJ(radio jockey..)

jai : he's cool...handsome and all the girls are totally fida on him..he is also the RJ...

(bani and jai are partners and are RJ of the same show..called"rise and shine wid jai and bani")

pia: same as kasam se...the earlier one..she's cool too and all the boys are fida on this young lady...she's pretty and stylish..

rano:sweet and like the girl - next - door types...ekdum sidhi saadhi but not behanji types also..

(pia and rano and bani are a part of the band called "the wave")

pushkar: cool handsome and jai's best yaar...jai's more close to him than saahil..he is really helpful and he's frnds wid pia...

saahil: he is cute..and pushkar and jai's frnd..

(rano and saahil love each other and they are serious about it too..all know about their luvlife..)

all of these are studyin in school..in standard 11...ina school called "maurya high"...all are frnds..all are yaars..

ok so wot do u guys think..?? i'll start this ff only if u all like it...

anywayz here's the promo....

bani and jai are in the radiostation...

they r speakin in their mikes...

bani..."gud morningggg every1...this is ur favourite RJ bani dixit wid my...

jai(interupts)"im not urs...am i..??"

bani: "hello..?? im sayin wid my partner jai walia..."

Edited by prettypreeti - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is a nice start and iffernt jb are differnt

psl continue soon

davia

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok my preeeetoooo my crazy sis intro is kool unlike
I m waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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preeti great start.. i love the concept so far.. cant wait for the 1st update.. ab openeing kar bhi dho.. lol.. i like this JB.. RJ.. hmmm.. not bad.. i already have the pic in my head and its not bad at all.. lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...
Finally I am back..
See that you have been busy on another FF
Nice.. I love it..
Hmm..RJ...
Seems Salaam Namaste type..
Hmm..well..11th standard..
So I am guessing no Marriage.. 😆

Well great start..you better continue..
Stop with dumkiis..

nikita.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like the concept pls cont soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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can't wait to know what will happen.. continue soon!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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LIKE THE CONCEPT
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey preeti...
sorry for commenting so late....but awesome intro...and rj thing is too good...please continue soon...waiting for the first part..

luv pritee 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanx for ur comments...i'll update the first part after dinner..within a few minutes..
thanxx...

okay im back...here's update...

PART 1..

a radio station is shown..and a young sweet li'l girl is enterin there...she's bani..

bani's talkin on her mobile..

bani: haan pia...i'll be there on time..

pia:pakka..???

bani rolls her eyes..:yup..i know we have to practice for the show..i'll be there okay..?? bye..

as she was puttin of the phone she bumps into sum1

bani angrily:cant u see..??(she looks up and he's none other than jai..)

bani: cant u see and walk mr..??

jai:ayee..it was ur fault..u werent seein and was busy..

bani(interupts): anywayz..its time for our show and i think we shud leave..u see im not interested in ur not so useful and bakwaas talk..

jai: see...u are late..and not i..i was gonnna make u a call..coz sir told me..warna i have no interest in u..

bani: thank u..same here..

and they both enter in their respective room...even in their show they actually used to fight a lot but it was bcoz of this only that there show..which was aired early in the morning so that they dont miss much of their classes...was soo popular among kids and all students..

jai and bani wear their headphones and bani starts to speak in the mike..

bani..good morninggg every1..this is ur favourite rj bani dixit wid my..

jai(interupts): im not urs..am i..??

bani rolls her eyes and : oh puhleesss...thank god u rnt mine and dont be..i was gonna say my partner jai walia..

jai: thanks for not so gud intro..bani..

jai: thanx jai..(mockingly)

jai:well gud mornin to all and heres ur favourite song..pretty woman from kal ho na ho..

bani: noo jai we r gonna put the song...nayi subha from "i see u"..

jai: o yeah..but i really dont think im gonna put that..that..wierd type of song..

and jai pus his song..though bani doesnt want to..

jb put off their mikes' buttons and..

bani: wots this..?? we had decided that..

jai: noo..that was too..that type of song..

bani: it was no "that type" of song ok..??

after the song..they turn on their mikes and..

b4 jai cud say anything..

bani: thanx for the dedication of that song to me jai..

jai: when did i dedicate that song to u..?? i mean "pretty woman" to u..??

bani: wot do u mean..?? u said it just now..anywayz guys i think that boys are like this..too brave externally but too shy internally..

jai: thats wrong..

bani: o yeah...then tell them u dedicated that song to me..

jai: i wont

bani: tht proves it...

jai makes a face at bani and bani smiles..wid a face like "tit for tat"

jai: okk...i say this song was dedicated to bani..

bani: ohh...thanxxx

jai: but that proves that girls r weaklin..

bani: no it doesnt..i just said that if u do so then it means that boys arent shy..

jai: which means girls are weaklings..(noo...)

bani: noo..

jai: yess...

bani makes a face and then jai puts the song from hum tum..

ladki kyun na jaane kyun kadko si nahi hoti..(bani makes a face at this..)

sochti hain zyaada..

kam woh samaj ti hai,,,.

dil kuch kehta hain

kuch aur hi karti hain

ladki kyun na jaane kyun kadko si nahi hoti..

(jai smiles wittily and bani tries to ignore him)

pyaar usse bhi hain magar shuruat unhi se chahe..

khud mein ulji ulji hain par baalon ko suljaye..

tumhe badalne ko paas woh aati hain..

tumhe sataane ko jaal bichhati hain...

(jai now sings too..dont worry mike's off bani ignores him as far as possible..)

baaton baaton mein..

tumhe fasaati hain..

pehle hasaati hain..

phir bada rualaati hain..

ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladko si nahi hoti...

(as girl begins to sing..bani now makes a face at jai..and jai is like " gimme a break types")

aye itna hi khudse khush ho toh..

pichche kyun aate ho..??

phul kabhi toh hazaar tofe aakhir kyun laate ho..

(bani now singd too..mikes still off)

uske bina ek pal..

rehna na sagoke tum

usko pataa hain yeh..

kehna sakoge tum.

isliye ladkiyaan ladko si nahi hoti...

(now again ji makes a face as male voice fills the air)

jaane koun kounse dinn woh tumko yaad dilaye

pyaar ko chahe bhul bhi jaaye taarikhe na bhulaaye..

(bani now smiles wittily as female sings)

ladko ka kya hain

kisi bhi mode pe woh mud jaaye..

abhi kisi ke hain

abhi kisi aur se woh jud jaaye..

and finally the song ends...and so does jb's show...

to know wot happens later that day...plzz keep on replyin...😃

preeti

Edited by prettypreeti - 17 years ago

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