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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: YOOUSHA

U updated I read it
Nt at all gud part
plz never cont this ff Hehehehe i got really tensed on readin this..yaar y do u always irritate me only..lol..but i love that๐Ÿ˜‰
Okies ho gaya bohat sara mazak nw seriously I liked it
Especially the nok-jhok between JB thank god u confessed it...

A song for this ff hmm..thanx..

Chanda mama so gaye
soraj chachu jage
dekho pakro yaara
ghari ke kaante bhaage
Ek Kahani Khatam tou dooji
Shuru ho gaee mamu
Subha ho gaee mamu re mamu ๐Ÿ˜† par meri pehli kahaani khatam nahi huyi di..lol..liked the song..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Yeah..in time!! dura update kahan hain..and soory..
Such main jahan tak mujhe yaad hai...I commented..Well anywayz..
The update was awesome, and the whole Pretty women thing was cute...I cant wait to read the next part!!

Jaldi kar..


nikita..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
ood start i'll be reading it now !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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opa it shud be good ! don;t read it odd ! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok sorry my next part's here..read it now...

PaRt : 2...!!!

(dedicated to nikki- who was the most eager to read it i think..lol..and my minku di..whose back..!!!!!!!! and ofcourse u yoousha..lol..and luv_pritee..luv u all..)

jai and bani took their bags from the room as they finished their show...

bani: that was soo rude of u jai to fight wid me all over again on air..

jai: o yeah..that was u..who told u i dedicated that song to u..i mean the song"pretty woman" and that too to u.(lookin her from toe to head).o puhlees...u r just the opposite..that song doesnt suit u at all...

banni's jaw dropped down..

bani: if thats the case..wot do u think u r srk?? o puhlees..u r as bad as i am..

jai: so u agree u r bad....gud..

bani: nooo...i mean..oof..im not bad ok..im nice..

jai: oh so u think im nice too..u know im as bad as u..but u rnt bad..so im as gud as u..na..??

bani: tum..tum..na..!!!!

jai: main wot..??

bani: aaarghhh...its impossible to handle u..

and she left..

jai smiled to himself..

*****in college*****

a college is shown and pia and rano r waitin there for bani..

pia (lookin at her watch) : i had told her to cum soon..we have our show 2morrow and..late kate..oof..

rano(jumped up): they came...

pia got too happy and her face lit up..but when she saw there they werent jb they were sahila and pushy..

pia:u mean your SAHIL came...

rano blushes...and pia smiles..

shail cums there and gives a warm hug to rano..

pushy: hi..but wot r u all doin here,...at the gate..

pia: jai and bani..u know we have to rehearse for our show..

pushy: o ya...when's it..??

rano: 2morrow at 7..(lookin at sahil) u both will cum na..???

pp 2gether: u mean SAHIL will cum na..

rano and sahil both blush..

sahil: we'll cum..no worries..

just then jb cum..

bani:hii..

pia: u late yaar..

jai: yeah..she's a late kate..u know even in radio station she was late..and now here..

bani rolls her eyes as all giggle..

jai: btw guys..bani just told me that she feels im a nice guy..

pia" wot..?? bani u have feelings for jai..?"

bani: noo..(lookin at jai)i didnt say that ok..

jai: u did..

bani: i didnt..

jai: u did..

bani: i didnt..

jai: u did..

rano: its ok if u feel sumthin for jai bani..i mean its not bad to love..(she blushes a li'l)

sahil: i agree...

(rano and sahil look at each other and smile..)

bani: its not..its him..!!!!

jai: wot..?? when did i say u r nice..??

bani: u just dedicated a song to m jai..

pushy: p ya..i had listened..(2 jai): waah yaar..u think she's pretty and all and didnt tell me..?? (to jb) but u'll suit each other very nicely...

pia: i agree wid him...100% correct..

bell rings and all leave except bani and jai..

jai holds bani's hand..bani tries to leave it but cant..

bani: wot r u doin..?? leave me..

jai pushed her a li'l nearer..

jai: wot do u think u did..?? u just made all realise that we like each other..

bani(leavin her hand as jai's hold losens): not my prob..u started it..u shud have thought avt it..

jai: but wot i said was true..

bani: nopes..it wasnt..

jai: it was bani..

bani: noo jai..it wsnt..

both 2gether: oof..!!!!!!

and both leave..bani goes from one side and jai goes from another side..really annoyed by the other...

PrOmO::::::::::::

bani and her band in the dressin room..

pia: wot..??? who id this..?? all r dresses for the show are torn..

rano: omg!!! we have our show in 30 min..

bani: wot to do now..??

wot will happen now..?? wot about their show..??

to know wot happens..keep in touch wid "rise and shine wid jai and bani(R&SWJB)....

preeti..๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by prettypreeti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
wonderful ppart pls cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hun.. great part.. omg.. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† .. JB are hilarious.. they r soo funny.. omg.. i have a feeling its gonna take them a while until they realise wat they feel for eachother.. lol.. and jai stop balming bani for everything.. she is the innocent one.. lol.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ .. o and this reminds me of salaam namaste.. where preity and saif r alwayz fighting cuz saif is alwayz late.. ๐Ÿ˜† .. anywayz continue soon.. sooner yaar.. hehehe.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey pri...............
nice ff ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ...........atleast better then that 1 ๐Ÿ˜† .............just joking both ur ffs r great ๐Ÿ˜‰...........so jb as rj.... thats a kool idea ........waise who gave u the idea ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† love their fight and no 1 is negative thats really nice.......so my VBP hope u will cont.soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

VBP-2 ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by koolgal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
So Jb argue all the time but pals think they made for each other. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30

hellooooooooooooooooo,

i am here i am here i am hereeeeeeeeeeeeee and i read ur ff and luvedddd ur idea its soooo cool and refreshing really nice ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

thanxxx for the welcoming dedication๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—

so both jb r rjs pretty cool man!! and they keep fighting with each other thats sooooooooooooooo cute๐Ÿ˜Š....i am sure fighting will lead to other things ahem ahem๐Ÿ˜ณ lol.......and all their frnds think they r made for each other cooool....so pia is nice in ur ff??.......aur yain dresses kisne phaadi?? i hope its not jai and party nahi toh bani will kill him for sure lol

cant wait to read more cont. soooooooooooooooooon

luv ya lodsssss

mahima

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