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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

I'm absolutely thrilled with the response!😳 Thanks to everyone!🤗 Now I expcet atleast 30 comments after every part!😃😛 😆 .. nahh.. if it does get boring do let me know!😊

Rama - Is it JW? you will have to wait and see! 😉.. and they visitng lots of places.. well I think they are.. Ranveer doesnt tell me everything! 😆 Thanks for commenting.. and for the good wishes! 👍🏼😳

Divya - Thanks, and is it JW or not? Wait and see! 😆

Sabsj - Thanks for suggestion, but someone already has a similar title.... hehe.. Thanks for the wishes😳

Lenmed - Thanks.. will post the next part soon.. hopefully! hehe

Ranjana - Thank you! Good bachas always will be rewarded! 👍🏼😉

Britz - Long time no see! Hows you? 🤣 Thanks for the title! And start updating your FF aswell Missy!

Dalia - Thanks, will have to wait and see who it is!

Davia - Thanks! hehe.. yehh.. Rano kidnapped Bani.. will do my best to contuinue ASAP!

Sangita - Hiya! Studying?? Um... I am! This is what I do to relive the stress! 😆 Will update soon! Thanks

Ducky - Call me whatever you want! [as long as its nice! 😆😆] Thanks for the wishes! 😳 Thanks for commenting.. and your english is great! 👍🏼

hipreet - Thanks, will cont soon! 😊

SS - Good luck with your exams! 👍🏼

Chandani - Glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!

Henz - LOL, without help! Your memo doesnt fail you here!! heheh... hahahahahah..[wink wink, hint hint] hahahah.. Yp.. thats the right spelling! 😆.. Umm... the eiffel tower?? Um.. naa... we want hate before love! 😉 Dhak Dhak...🤣 in D.....🤣 luxury homes remember?? hehe😔 Thanks Henz

harshi21 - Thanks harshi, will cont soon!

K- Bunny is being good and studying 👍🏼 Nahh... Mummy koh mat batana.. i'm allowed to have a little bit of fun na..??

Urooj - Thanks!

Vedo - Thanks, glad you like the storyline.... hope I'll be able to keep it exciting! Don't worry about studies.. I have about 4 'mums' who won't let me do anything BUT study! heheheh

Swati - Thanks! will try and cont soon!

Mamta - Glad you liked the first part! 🤣🤣 hahaah.. cutting veggies! Thanks for the wished.. will cont soon! 👍🏼

btkr - Keep on singing.. I can hear you👍🏼😆 Haye.. another mom??😆 Don't worry..😉 won't neglect studies! 😳

Pooja - Yup, you can call me whatever you want! 😆 will try and make it adventurous! 😆

Shaz - 😲 Coughing fit.. why??... I can't update now.. I'm revising for exams so dont' have that much time 😳 and plus.. i think you'll send TWO belans after me if i fail! 😆

Tropa - Thanks! haha.. yup bhoot is here aswell!! 😆 Thanks.. will try and cont soon!

phool - LOL, Thanks for the encouragement! 😳😊 JW.. wait and see! 😉

Mel - Thanks Mel! JW or nor... you will have to wait and see! Thanks for the wishes!

Sheena - aww.. I know! I guess you feeling my pain aswell then! 😔 🤣 Glad you liked that line!! 🤣

MC - Long time no see!! I'm studying hard MC don't worry, if not for me then for you! Can't see you without a job na..?? All those plans gone to waste! 😉

Nir - Thanks, will continue soon, JW? hmmm.. let' see 😉

Niruba - Thanks, glad you liked it, will try and cont soon!


I have managed to come up with a title! Pyar Main Bhagham Bhaag... took inspiration from all your ideas! Thanks guys!🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
You only get comment from me, if you give me comment on my ss...samji...nothing is for free.... 😃

ps title is really bunny style...
Edited by divan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Haila kya rocking title!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Nice start....like the title too.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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SS Thanks for your best wishes...now what was due has to be paid na! The story appears cute by the looks of it although the situation was terrible in which Bani was. Thank God Rano was there to help her out. chop chop??? what was that?🤣

Liked how you mentioned that Bani didn't want to spoil Rano's trip. Very good friends I must say...caring for the other one more. Hey I liked that slipping from pipe😆

Title is cute 😳 definitely you were in Studies se bhagam bhag mood😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
nice title

bhagam bhaag to france! (ofcourse with cuddly JW 😳 ) 😆

Edited by ducky_euro - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Glad you guys approve of the title! 👍🏼😳

SS - Thanks 👍🏼

Yeaa.. I'm always in a bhagam bhaag mood from studies.. God knws How i'm gonna pass...

I'm seeing a few 'chop chop' comments 🤣.. It's basically part of the slang.. used to say 'hurry up' 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Thank You sooooo much guys! Loved reading each and every comment!😛 Here;s the next part! Leave a comment on the way out!

Sorry, it's not very long!😳

Part 2

As Ranveer had told Bani, they stopped off at his friend's house to pick up Jai Walia: son of the business tycoon Uday Walia, and his wife Krishna Walia. He was the same age as Ranveer, 28. Four years older than Rano and 6 years older than Bani.

Jai put his suitcase in the boot and then climbed in to back seat. Rano had gotten off and offered the passenger seat but he declined, saying he did not want to be a kabab main haddi for the lovebirds.

'Jai Wali' he introduced himself to Bani.

'Bani Dixit.' She gave the smallest of smiles and then went back to looking out of the window, resting her head against the cool glass. She had never done anything so reckless in her life before. She could not believe she had run away from her own wedding. If Jigyasa bua ever tracked her down, she would be skinned alive. Bani prayed for her well-being.

Ranveer drove towards Central London and parked his car at his house. From there they took the nearest tube station and made their way to King's Cross St. Pancreas, where they would board the Eurostar. Bani checked her watch and saw it had been one hour since she had run away. She could only imagine the chaos and curses that were surrounding the wedding. The bride running away. Jigyasa Bua probably had fainted out of shock, she thought wryly.

She looked around and saw that Jai was busy talking to Ranveer while Rano was on the verge of sleep. What would she have done without Rano? If it wasn't for her, she would be taking her saath pheres with that brute of a man. She thanked God silently for sending her an angel in from of a friend. Bani had known Rano from when she was little, she was her mother's best friends daughter. They had grown up together and were best of friends, not friends, like sisters.

'So Bani… would do you do?' Jai decided to break the ice between them. It did not seem as if she would be talking anytime soon so he had decided to start the conversation. He had noticed her sitting very quietly, not joining in the conversation and she intrigued him. Brown luminous eyes, caught his attention. She looked like she had been crying but still had that sparkle in her eye.

'Nothing, I just finished my degree…' she replied not interested in talking to him

'That's great! What have you got planned for the future? A job?'

'Yes… Will start looking after this trip..'

Jai loved her voice. A soft sweet spoken girl with a hint of an English accent creeping in at times. He knew that with Rano and Ranveer busy with themselves, he would get to spend time with her!

***

They boarded the train without any hassle and got four seats facing each other. Somehow, Bani and Ranveer ended up sitting next to each other, and Rano and Jai sat facing them. Bani was still cautious of Jai. She did not want to be too friendly with him. He seemed like one of those flirt types, a kind that she avoided as much as possible.

The girls were asleep in no time, while the boys sat and talked about the latest football scores and their plan for the rest of the holiday.

'Jai..?'

'Yea..?' Jai looked at Ranveer.

'Um.. You mind swapping places with me?' he asked sheepishly.

Jai looked at Bani who slept peacefully, 'Not at all!' he grinned and at once stood up, gesturing to Ranveer to take his seat. Ranveer thanked him and then sat beside Rano, where at once put his head on hers and they fell asleep.

Bani also became comfortable with Jai besides her, holding on to his arm with her hand, she laid her head on his shoulder. Jai felt a warm feeling go through him. She was angel... his pari. He studied her face. It looked so young and vulnerable, all defences gone, sleeping like an innocent child.

He wondered what she had gone through. She looked a bit distressed when he saw her. Well he had loads of time, he intended to find out!

****

'Bani… Bani..' he shook her softly, waking her up.

'Hmmm…' she protested and snuggled deeper, her head on his chest.

'Bani … come on…' he shook her a bit harder his time and Bani reluctantly opened her eyes. Disorientated for a minute. Where was she?? Then last night came rushing back to her. She had run away. Oh God, There is probably a search party looking for me right now.

'Uh… Bani?' Jai tried again. Bani looked up, only to meet with a pair of hazel eyes, with flecks of gold in them. Realising that she was half- lying on Jai, she at once stood up and started to straighten out her clothes.

'Sorry… I..'

'The pleasure was all mine..' he winked at her. He held out his hand. 'come on… let's go..' he said with a cheeky smile on her face. Bani looked at him in shock. He didn't even know her, and he had already started? 'If you don't want to hold my hand, maybe link arms?' he asked She looked at him, and walked past him in a huff. He laughed and then followed Ranveer off the train. She got annoyed very easily, especially by him, he would enjoy teasing her he thought wickedly.

He remembered the look that she'd given him when he offered his hand, 'lagta hai impression achha nahin hain mera…' he chuckled. He would enjoy this very much!

Bani was walking with Rano. She still hadn't realised that she was in Frane. She was fuming over what Jai had said. Samajhta kya hai aapne aap ko? Flirting with me?

' Bani?' Rano clicked her fingers in front of Bani's face. 'You ok?'

Bani snapped out if it and looked around in shock. 'Are you serious??' she asked Rano.

'Yep..' she replied with a massive grin on her face. 'Miss Bani Dixi… Welcome to Disneyland Paris!'

'You're 24 years old…' Bani replied back.

'You are never too old to be a princess alright? This is our time for fun. I am going to make sure by the end of the holiday you will have forgotten about Granddad Aparjit and found a nice sexy maybe Italian man.'

Bani's face dropped as again she remembered how she had run away from the wedding. Rano, realising her mistake put an arm around Bani's shoulder and hugged her lightly. 'OK.. fine not European ok? We'll find someone else? Whoever you want…'

Bani smiled. 'Bani… this is the time for fun. It's not everyday that you get to go on holiday with your best friend and two handsome guys! Well one, coz the other one's mine..' Rano grinned.

Bani punched her lightly and they followed the boys to their hotel. Bani did not expect 5 star luxury with their budget and she was not disappointed. It was quite a small room with four single beds and a bathroom.

'Well what did you expect?' sighed Rano.

'actually, something even worse than this…' chuckled Ranveer. 'This is a pleasant surprise.'

'Come on guys, who cares, we're here to have fun… we're only going to come here to sleep… and the beds look comfy enough' Jai said, jumping up and down a few times, testing the bed!

'The man has a point…'

'Of course I do..' he replied back to Ranveer.

And so after dumping their bags and washing their faces, they all went to bed, exhausted after all the travelling, all excited about tomorrow. Even Bani!

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A few things, as u probably figured out, they're gonna be on holiday... I havn't visited all the places I'm gonna write about, so some info will be from net, other I'm gonna make up.. at places, there may be something that doesn't seem realistic! But then this is fiction, and I have exams going on.. so all is maaf!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Belans for you for not studying and belans for such a short update BUT i for give you !!!!!😆

I love this Jai, lots of attitude and sex appeal, i likes Tanu dear 😳, PLUS for a runaway bride Bani is a bit uptight nah, and ahhhhhh Rano and Ranveer two love birds so cute, PLUS me thinks that Jai's new prey is sweet and cute Bani, what was she thinking running away and that Jig's sounds like a pain if you ask me, i hope in this trip not only does Bani find love but also what she wants in life like a road trip to find her self, i hope she has lots of fights with Jai arre masala tu dal na par tha hai varna maaza nahi aata Tanu dear 😆😆😆!!!!

Well done, nice job, how long did Henna take to beat this update out of you is what i want to know 🤣!!!!!

AND guess what i'm eating ....................

🤣!!!!!!

I couldn't decide which one i liked best😳, so i tried them all, man look at the once with sprinkles DROOL !!!!!!!!🤣 *COUGH*😉

Love you and thanks for listening to my moaning today your a star 🤗!!!!

Sharan XXX

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

dum dum dum! 😃

will read tomrw.. u msut know why 😆

------------ As promised im back.. ive left revision 😆 ahh looks promising!

great update! 😃 CPCPCPCP! (hahahaha dnt think of Shaun please 🤣)

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH france! Eiffle Tower.. And disneyland! woohoo! i loved disneyland.. i hope Bani enjoys it too.. 😃 Hope she gets autographs off the characters 😆

Hehehehe when i read italian man.. i burst out laffin.. 🤣🤣 reminded me of that italian dude at ur school!

Jigs is in this too 😃 good good, even if she is the forever heart attack sufferer hehehe!

Seems this Bani likes her sleep and doesnt like anyone wakin her up.. well i think she should get used to it, JW seems nice but not that nyc to let her sleep the whole holiday 😆

Jai flirt shirt kartha hain already 😲 well then again Bani did sleep on him 😆

Cnt wait to read more

Henna x

PS. Shaz ud be glad to know, i never beat her.. she decided herself (A)😆

Edited by Henna 786 - 17 years ago

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