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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Hey Tanu,

Nice, so they are going to be together in one room, Jai is jumping on the bed? Haila... 😲

'You are never too old to be a princess alright? This is our time for fun. I am going to make sure by the end of the holiday you will have forgotten about Granddad Aparjit and found a nice sexy maybe Italian man.'


Granddad Aparajit... 🤣

Don't let Ronit "Sir"s fans see this, they will come after you with belans..
😆 😆 😆

Good part, Honey!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Hai Bunny,

Beautiful update 👏

Jai is already fida over Bani 😉 😳 😳, loved the looks Bani gave him 😆 😆 😆

"Disney Land Paris" this must be fun 😛 😳 😳

Pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
yaar, i think im the last one to read this part 😛
fantastic (i know it was going 2b a bit short because of your exams, but it doesn't mind 😉 )
yeh jai bhi na 😳 a real flirt... i would fall 4 him

i tried to read this part in the morning, but my internet failed to 🤢
sooo, i had to wait till now (22.37h local time @ the netherlands 😆 )

okay, i cant wait till the next part (its never too long for me, or for ur other fans 😉 )

keep it up!

SA 😳
Edited by ducky_euro - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
SS...so fast...I don't mind 😆

So Bani is in Disneyland? Liked the talk between Bani and Rano...one thinking it to be a place for children and the other one showing her a good reason to enjoy! JW does appear to be a flirt but a good one. Laughed reading when Bani thought that she was stuck with a flirt while she disliked that kind of species! Must be an interesting relationship growing between them...as JW thinks because of the opportunities he will get to spend time with her!😆. Hope Bani will get to know that he is a diamond(hopefully) in the heap of coal!

Rano called AD 'Grandfather'? 😆..funny! Particularly at one place you have written a perfect thing...what Jigyasa must have been going through...the comments and curses! Very thoughtful.

Looking forward to the Masti like all of them!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Jai already seems to be maha impressed with Bani....anyways his small antics really are adorable and maybe would just be right to bring Bani out from her bad mood. and I look forward to getting around Paris...

Swathi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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A Big Thank You to: Shaz, Henz, Pooja, Swati, Tropa, Nir, Ranjana, Divya, rongna, Vedo, amiee, Rama, Niruba, Sukh, 100%-princess, Sheena, Mel, SA, SS, Swathi and to all the silent readers!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry for being late, but I was not well over the weekend, so I could not finsih the update! I have a longer update for you guys today... But I don't like the way it's turned out.. sorry .. not the best of parts.. 😕

Ignore any errors, if major do PM me so I can change them!😳

Part 3

'Jai… GET OUT!!' Ranveer banged on the bathroom door as Bani and Rano looked on, laughing. Jai had been in the shower for the past 30 minutes, and Ranveer was getting impatient. Bani was definitely feeling much better today, and after a night's rest, she knew she had done the right thing. Aparajit would never have been able to keep her happy.

'I'm coming… I'm coming..' Jai shouted from inside. Ranveer mumbled something underneath his breath.

'This trip… I'm going to make sure I have a shower before Jai!' he informed the girls. They nodded and laughed at him.

The bathroom door opened and Jai walked out, buttoning a white shirt. Bani looked up and caught his eye and then went back to combing her hair. They were all ready; they just had to wait for Ranveer.

'Hurry up, Man! You're going to make us late..' Jai said, as Ranveer was going in with his towel. Ranveer threw him a nasty look and then banged the door shut. Jai chuckled.

***********

Jai and Ranveer out their sunglasses on, protecting them against the strong rays of the sun, as they walked towards the entrance of Disneyland.

'I can't believe you brought me to Disneyland!!!!' Bani whispered to Rano.

'Live a little! You need to become a kid sometimes OK…?' Rano replied back excitedly.

Jai looked over to Bani and gave her a small smile. Bani knew he had heard their conversation! Why do I care if he heard? Doesn't mean anything to me!

'uh.. Rano? Tickets?'

'Ranveer has them!'

'Even mine?' Bani asked surprised.

'Yes!'

'How did you know I would come aswell?'

'Because had you not agreed, we would have dragged you out of your

room… You were going to come with us one way or another..'

Ranveer showed the man their tickets and they entered Disneyland! 'Ok… guys.. what's first?'

'Something fun!! A roller coaster…' Rano looked at the map. 'Ok.. Let's go to Sapce Mountain: Mission 2! Our supercharged canon will blast you on a warp-speed ride into the unknown. Feel the g-force as you dodge screaming meteorites and black holes - and then go back and do it all again!' Rano read off the leaflet.

'Sounds exciting…' Jai replied walking in the ride's direction.

'Oh.. Man!!' Ranveer groaned as he saw the queue for the ride. 'So I guess a ride a day .. huh? That queue is MILES long!!' Ranveer looked for the ride nearby. 'That queue is shorter… Let's go on that one!!'

'Ranveer Bali! I am NOT going to sit in teacups!!' Rano exclaimed and Bani tried her hardest to suppress her laughter.

They all queued up and for the next hour, caught up on each other's life. Jai found out that Bani wanted to work abroad and if possible, go back to India. Hm.. wants to go India? Bani was quiet, spoke when spoken to and looked very uncomfortable with him. Jai loved it.

'Please place your bags on the rack at the side, and lower your seatbelt.' The woman in the box spoke. All the passengers obliged. Ranveer and Rano were sitting together, so Bani was stuck sitting next to Jai, a few rows behind them. But then she would rather sit with Jai than a stranger!

'Better get used to it!' he replied cheekily. Bani looked at him confused. 'Hanging out with me! Ranveer and Rano will be together, so you will have to out up with my company for the remainder of the holiday. Bani groaned inwardly. Urgghhh… just what she needed

***

The ride began moving and the screaming started. As it reached the maximum speed of 100 kmph, the screaming got louder and unknowingly, Bani had clutched on to Jai's arm, momentarily, stopping all blood flow. Jai released his arm, and then took her hand into his. All he could hear were Bani's scream.

The ride stopped and the Bani took of her seatbelt with one hand, as she tried to release her hand from Jai's. But Jai wouldn't let go.

'Um.. Can I have my hand back?' Bani asked, her voice hoarse from all that screaming.

'No.' Jai replied as he led her out of the ride. Bani tried to pull her hand away but his grim became firmer, all the while making sure he did not hurt her.

'Guys… That was so much fun!!' Rano screamed, holding on to Ranveer's arm. She looked at Jai and Bani walking towards them and saw the two holding hands. She grinned at Bani and then nudged Ranveer. He too saw, and winked at Jai. Jai's grin got even bigger!

'If you don't mind… I'm just going to borrow Bani for a little while…' Rano said to Jai. Jai released Bani's hand and Rano and Bani walked in front of the boys.

'Yaar, ek din bhi nahi hua hai… and already?' she asked Bani.

'Rano! Don't start… Jai is just.. URGHH.. held my hand without asking and then wouldn't let go! Pata nahin kya sochta hai apne app ko!'

'Sorry for interrupting, but Bani you held my arm first during the ride, so don't blame me!' Jai came in between Rano and Bani.

Rano and Ranveer laughed and they made their way towards the next ride.

'This was a really good idea..' Jai commented.

'Yep, Really good idea… I love rides, and I love Disney cartoons...'Rano replied back

'How about you Bani?' Jai asked.

'Hmm..' Bani replied back, not wanted to talk to him. She wanted to keep away. Not get involved in anything. She didn't need new friends.

'AHHH…' Rano screamed. 'Look..' The trio looked to where she was pointing.

They stared back at her, not really understanding why she was so excited.

'Have you seen John Abraham.. or something??' Ranveer asked.

Bani at once turned and looked back to where Rano was pointing, 'John? Where?? I wanna get a picture and his autograph…. He's soo good looking…hayee..' Bani was lost in her dream world.

'No way.. Look Minnie Mouse and Mickey!.. Let's go get our pictures taken!' Rano dragged a reluctant Bani and Ranveer to where the cartoon characters were standing.

Ranno and Jai posed enthusiastically, while Ranveer and Bani took turns clicking the cameras. 'Rano, abh chale?..' Ranveer asked quietly. 'Bachon ko bhi turn de do..?' He looked over to the long queue of children waiting for their turn so they could come and take pictures.

Rano smiled sheepishly, and then asked for one last picture. 'With the four of us togther? Please?' Ranveer agreed.

Rano and Ranveer on side of Mickey, loking very much the happy couple, while Bani and Jai were on the other side, Jai had his arm around Bani. She tried to remove it in vain. 'Just relax amd smile sweetie..' Jai whispered before the picture was clicked.

Bani fumed in anger!

They had a quick dinner and then went to bed. The next two days were spent in Disneyland and it's ride. Jai as usual, tired his hardest to annoy Bani and each time he was successful. He didn't know why he was doing it. He just loved to see Bani getting all angry and irritated. She looked even cuter.

It was their third evening in Disneyland. They all decided to go out for dinner. After their day out at the rides, all were starving. After quickly freshening up they made their way to the nearest restaurant. The past two nights, they had ordered take away as they were tired of sitting in their room.

They were seated and looked over the menu. They waited for their drinks after placing their orders.

'This has been so much fun, I don't want to go back. Just one more day and then back to boring London life!' Rano sighed.

Bani and Rano looked at each confused as they saw Jai and Ranveer exchanging looks.

'What??' Rano asked

'Nothing..' Ranveer replied. ' So Bani, what did you like best? The teacups na..?' Ranveer changed the topic.

'Yea, the teacups were the best! My favourite ride so far!' Bani grinned!

Rano looked at her, 'You don't have to take his side!' he commented

'Nah.. I really enjoyed them!..' Bani winked at her.

They spent the evening in pleasantly, with Jai trying his best to annoy Bani, playing footsie under the table, reaching for the jug of water as the same time as Bani.

Jai was really testing Bani's patience, and by the looks of it, it did not seem she would last long!

*****

The fourth day, they decided to spend the day in Paris. All four woke up early and after getting dressed and having a quick breakfast, they walked towards where the coach was going to depart from.

'The amount of walking I have done in the past few days, I haven't done in my lifetime!' Rano commented. Bani agreed. Exploring Disneyland, was not an easy task. The park was huge and it took them a couple of days to exhaust all the different rides!

On the coach, much to Bani's displeasure, she was again seated next to Jai. 'So we meet again..' he had said when she tried to squeeze past him to sit in the window seat.

Rano and Ranveer were behind them and after a few minutes, they had both fallen asleep, head resting on each other's. Looking like the perfect couple.

'They look cute… na?' Jai asked Bani, watching them sleep, through the gap between the two seats. Bani looked aswell and then nodded.

'Very cute…'

'You know what, watching them I think I should sleep aswell… What do you think?'

'I don't really care. Do what you want to do!' Bani replied and then turned her face away from him, watching the scenery from the window. She turned around when she felt Jai resting his head on her shoulder.

'Uh… What are you doing?' Jai opened his eyes and looked at her.

'Sleeping!' he replied, closing his eyes and then snuggling closer to Bani. Bani tried to move further away from him, but she found that a bit hard as there was not space to move in the seats.

She did not know why he irritated her so much. She knew he was doing in on purpose, most of the times he was alright, but then something came over him and he would just sit and do everything to annoy the hell out of her. He moved a few times and Bani realised that he was not asleep.

'Why do you do it?' she asked

'Do what?' his head still resting on her shoulder.

'Annoy me… You did it on purpose, I know that! Have I don't something to you, that you re taking revenge for?'

Jai laughed. 'I'm not trying to annoy you, I'm just friendly, it's in my nature.'

'Not friendly, over friendly. I don't even know you, and you just act like we have been friends for years!' Bani replied back.

'Oh.. Ok..' Jai raised his head from her shoulder and held out his hand. 'Jai Walia, Want to be friends?'

Bani laughed at his childishness, 'Are we in nursery again?'

Jai nodded and then gestured to his hand. Bani shook it. 'Fine Mr. Walia. Friends. But don't annoy me!'

'In your dreams!! Now that we're friends, I have the right to annoy you even more!' Bani banged her head against the back of the seat. What have I gotten myself into?'

Jai rested his head back on her shoulder and then closed his eyes. 'You're not going to leave me are you?' she asked.

'Not a chance in hell… I'm going to annoy you as much as I can! Now that you're my friend!!' he laughed, before falling asleep.

Bani banged her head repeatedly against the window.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
booo! 😆

will be back!

argh the wrk ive been given!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
wonderful parts pls cont soon........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
jai is a cute as ever love the way his annoying bani... 😉 😉 😉
Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago

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