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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

thanks to all of them who read and commented. sorry for not replying them and sorry for delay

this part is for Davs di who is mad at me. and Nir who is chasing me with belan & for Tam.

this part is not much of a fun. no KW's talks. and no smily. sowii.

Part 5: The Kidnappers

In a dark room

Pia: Darling, it has been a loooong time now. We need money as soon as possible. Last day I saw a beautiful necklace in the mall. But I didn't have enough money. I think you should get into action now.

AD: Yes honey. I was thinking about the same. I have already decided my next victim. I m just waiting for someone to go there.

Just then a woman who looks like 'mom ki putli' enters the room. AD gives her the address. Pia watches her wide-eyed. A few minutes later he dismisses her.

Pia: Are you sure that you are sending her for such an important task? I mean is it a good idea to send her? You know how brainless he is don't you?

AD thinks for some moment.

AD: hmm..but it's not that difficult task. Ok. Let me see if she can do it. Hey Meera. Come back.

The woman comes back

Meera: Ji? Anything else?

AD: Yes. Just need to ask you a question. Let me see if you pass.

Meera: huh?! Ok.

AD: Tell me which 1 is your right hand?

Meera: it's an easy one. My right hand… May I borrow your pen for some moment?

AD: Ok

Meera 1st tries to write with her one hand then the other. A victorious smile appears on her face.

Meera: As I cant write with my left hand this is my right hand. I passed na? can I go now? I m being late.

Pia & AD looks at each other.

AD: I cant do anything. She is the only 1 available. Karuna's train has been cancelled. So she is not here yet.

Pia: I only hope she doesn't get caught.

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Walia Mantion

A party is going on in full swing. Today is Krishna will be fed with hard food for the first time ( don't know what you call that ceremony. We say them 'muhme chhawal' as it's the 1st time a child is fed rice). We see Meera walking in. The main ceremony is over. It's the time for food. Everyone is busy serving food. KW was under Jiggus responsibility. But Jiggu being Jiggu left KW alone while she saw her friend coming. Meera saw KW alone. She took him and covered him with her shawl and sneaked out of WM.

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Meera: Here. I have done my job.

Pia: Hmm….I see you have done it without being caught.

AD: Ahh. Now I can call him asking money.

AD dialled a number.

AD: Hello Mr Wadhwa! How's life.

Pushker: Yes life is good. But who are you?

AD: Doesn't matter who I am. Are you sure your life is good? Where is your son?

Pushker: My son? In my lap. Why?

AD: What? Your son is on your lap?

Pushker: Yes. But wh..

AD cut the call.

Pia: What happened?

AD: Its not Wadhwa's son!!!

Pia: Then whose??

Both of them turned to Meera.

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forgive my mistakes plz.

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

haial?😡

😡krishan ko uski pangli emera aur jungi ad aur pai en kidnapp kii how dare they😡krishan troubel them soo mcuh that they forget and run to police and sasy catch em and ptu em in jail///

hwo dare that bit&& meera doo it...

😡

pls cotnineu soon

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Oh My God Meera 🤣 ... she is so dumb.... 😆 😆 😆 ... trying to figure out which one is her right hand... 😆 😆 😆 ....

Lovely update sweetie... 😃 😃 😃 ....

Pia and AD looks good together... 😆 😆 😆 ...

They kidnapped KW ... but not to worry I'm sure he will give them a hard time... 😆 ... he is a smart boy..... 😉 ....

Thanks for ur PM....lovely update...Do cont soon... 👏 👏 👏 .....
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
He he, just caught up with the last two updates.

Man, Krishna is such an imp...teasing Jiggu rakshas like that and scaring the **** out of her! Poor thing!!

And AD, Pia and Meera are the kidnappers?? Meera is ambidextrous? Nice! And brainless as well! She kidnapped Krishna by mistake? This is going to be a lot of fun!

Pushkar Wadhwa? He is rich too with a son! I guess that must be Veer, right? Can't wait till Krishna and Veer gang up and kidnappers will get their own medicine!

Great updates, Tropa!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
hahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so funny

pls cont soon
thanks
sanju!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
😆

krishna is tooo good

plz cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
yes no KW... no fun... but this is meera is so.... dumb... 🤣 🤣 pata nahin kya haal honewali hai teenon ki 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
😆 😆 Tropa, uhhh AD and Pia, dumb and dumber hiring another dumb to do the dirty deed. They need some serious help...don't worry because KW is there to teach them some new tricks.... 😃

I could help but laugh at the Pushy last name Wadhwa...he is married who to... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Great update.
liked it.
OMG...AD and Pia the kidnappers...suits them get...it goes wit them...as for Meera...haila what person...so dumbo...puppet in AD's hand...but a dumb one
are yeah kya kiya....she kidnap Krishna.....I am wondering what will JW do to trio when he found out about them but more over what will Krishna will do to them before his daddy dear comes to his resuce. 😉 😆
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
omg krisna kidnapped..

pia and AD are such cows!!!!!

Meera is soo dumb kidnapped the wrong baby and she doesn't know which one is her right hand, what a perfect person for the job

i wonder what krishna will do now.

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