FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 95

Abhilasha....nice part once again 👏 .....please do the packing quickly and come back here.....can't wait to read the next part......

gr88 part
plz cont soon
wher did this aligarh came into picture again

great part.......
loved it 😛 ......
plzz cont.soon

hey good parts... can't wait for the next update... please update soon. good luck with ur packing and everything. hope everything will go smoothly.

abhi

why do i have a feeling that bani has lost her memory for some odd reason.. or something

continue soon please

Awww, sweet update. Jai and Bani are actually talking. 😆 Hope you continue soon.

Thanks for your reply to my last feedback.. since you are the writer, you may know better but as an avid reader of romance, I never found Bani was obsessed, I think she needed some sorta protection and pampering, which she used to get from Jai and his family.. and to be with Jai always she found get marrying him was the best option…
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I never thought that you will post next part that soon but wasn't it short… (may be this is the length of almost all parts but as I read all parts together it dint make me any difference but this time I found it really really short..) anyways… it was nice part… though missing some actions like Jai-Bani dint interact much in this part but I guess you are giving them some time to get over everything had happened in past… (almost half of the update was gone in Bani's dreaming)

I am wondering is Bani into some amnesia as I told.. seeing her condition I guessed so…otherwise why she asked him to take her to home at Aligarh.. i guess she still living that life in Aligarh..

one request please I wanna read to Jai proposing Bani part..

I feel that Bani has become a little delusional as her thoughts have led her to believe that they live in Aligarh..but after hearing Jai speak about their house in Mumbai, it must have brought back some unpleasant memories of the place. Jai will have to take extra care of Bani since he never used to do so in the past 😡 😡 and will have to try and break the news to her gently of her being pregnant.

hey abhi......wonderful update ...cant wait for the next part...........keep up the good work 👏