FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#831

😭 😭 😭 For Bani

👏 👏 👏 For you, for writing this so beautifully and emotionally.

I am sure Jai had not known what the effect of his runing awa would do to Bani, but by now he knows the consequences. Hope he steps in now and corrects the situation before Bani gets lost forever. 😭

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#832

Hey Abhi,

that update really touched my heart, I cant say that I can feel the pain of what bani went through but you made it soo real that I felt if it was me.the way Jai is slowly realizing what he really means to her, is just heart-wrenching.lookin forward to readin how you take this forward. 👏

preet 😳

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

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Posted: 17 years ago

#833

Hi
Your every part touches my heart
I was so happy when I saw ur next updaate
When will u make me happy again 😆 😆
Poor Bani and Jai as well
Her diary, her sketches all are so beautifully written
thankssssss

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JAN_SA

@JAN_SA

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#834

Hey Abhi,

Thanks for the pm, much appreciated, 😊 . I feel so bad for Jai, hopefully he will find Bani soon and make things alright between them. Please continue. Good updates 👏 👏 👏

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kpatel123

@kpatel123

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#835

hey! that was sooo emotional! uve depicted the mental disturbance in bani in such a beautiful way...keep it up!

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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#836

wow .........kya likhti ho yaar ...aisa lagta hai jaise Hrishikesh mukherji ki film dekh rahi hoon ya fir sharatchandra ka novel pad rahi hoon................ 👏

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 17 years ago

#837

wonderful updates abhilasha, really loved reading all the parts and u have written all the emotions in best way.

please continue soon

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 17 years ago

#838

hey
gr8 part...
hope bani jaldi miljai..
cont.sooon

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#839

Great update,, jai finally knows how important he was to bani pls continue soon

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

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Posted: 17 years ago

#840

Abhi, again u left me speechless and ofcourse crying 😭 😭 😭 Its amazing the way you bring out the emotions..
So finally Jai has realised that his running away has caused an adverese effect on Bani..she has been totally dependent on the Walias through out her life, inperson n otherwise...
I just hope he does something soon before she breaks down completely.
I am hating these weekdays now..have to wait for 5 long days to read the update 😕
👏 👏 👏 till your next update..
Rama

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