FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 15

I'm suprised with Bani's mum's behaviour, she could make her child's life better....can't wait to read about Jai-Bani-Krishna relationship in the coming parts....please continue Abhilasha, I'm enjoying your FF a lot......

Bani is such a cute little adorable girl! And i love the relationship she shares with Krishna! 😃 Thanks for making this part longer hun! 😳 🤗 Really enjoyed it! Kiran is just downright mean. I'm glad that Nishikant at least feels sympathy towards her. Please update soon! 😃

Haila, bani kitne cute hai 😳 😃 , loved the update 👏 👏 👏 and so regular too, you such a darling for not keeping me waiting too long 😆 😆 .

So jai is feeling guilty, why why why???

Take care dear

Awesome update! It's really sad how Bani's mother treated her as if she was some kind of a toy and not a human being. It's kind of nice to see Pia trying to protect Bani, as its usually has been the other way around in the show and other ffs.

Really like the way you're writing the flashback part. Can't wait for you to continue and bring Bani back to her old ways, a happy girl.

continue soon!

Anam

Poor Bani.... hate JW for treating her like this... 😡

Very nice update Abhi... 👏

Hi Abhi,

I have to say is again! That u are a creative writer, I just read the last 3 parts and simply amazed with ur writing. I love the flow of the story and really eager to read the next update. Thanks ;)

Nimmie

Originally posted by: koolgal

great part....
awwwwwwww bani is sooo cute.......
y is her mum behaving like this??? 😕
atleast pia supports her 😊 yes she does
🤔 then wat happened between them........ i am trying to sketch that part... its taking some time😳
u r confusing me 😕
will be waitin for next part not today dear... 2morrow...
cont. soon

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

aww..Bani is so cuty yes... i like her too...
but whats her mom's prob 😕
Pia is goody goody. now she is.. later????
so Bani's visit to Walia house starts not walia house... its not Mumbai. its Aligarh...
waiting for the next part 😃

gr88 update 👏

Originally posted by: niruba

I'm suprised with Bani's mum's behaviour, she could make her child's life better....can't wait to read about Jai-Bani-Krishna relationship in the coming parts....please continue Abhilasha, I'm enjoying your FF a lot......

well... now i seriously think i am making some mistakes in sketching her character... i want to clear that... thanks niruba😳

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
plz cont soon

thanks jeena

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Bani is such a cute little adorable girl! And i love the relationship she shares with Krishna! 😃 Thanks for making this part longer hun! 😳 🤗 Really enjoyed it! Kiran is just downright mean. I'm glad that Nishikant at least feels sympathy towards her. Please update soon! 😃

this part is long.. becoz the part demands it... may be next part is little short... kiran is not mean... but circumstances are unfortunate in Bani's case...

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Haila, bani kitne cute hai 😳 😃 , loved the update 👏 👏 👏 and so regular too, you such a darling for not keeping me waiting too long 😆 😆 . this time no update today... 😃

So jai is feeling guilty, why why why???

Take care dear

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

Awesome update! It's really sad how Bani's mother treated her as if she was some kind of a toy and not a human being. well... i think Bani's mother shows all her frustation on her... may be the life has made her bitter... It's kind of nice to see Pia trying to protect Bani, as its usually has been the other way around in the show and other ffs. yeah.. but the basic character is the same... u will come to know later 😉

Really like the way you're writing the flashback part. thanks...😳 i like experimenting a lot... u ppl are there to correct and criticize naa 😆 Can't wait for you to continue and bring Bani back to her old ways, a happy girl.

continue soon!

Anam

Originally posted by: nema123

Poor Bani.... hate JW for treating her like this... 😡 u will love him later...

Very nice update Abhi... 👏

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hi Abhi,

I have to say is again! That u are a creative writer, I just read the last 3 parts and simply amazed with ur writing. I love the flow of the story and really eager to read the next update. Thanks ;) thanks to u too 😳

Nimmie

Thanks everyone.... Seems everbody have started considering Kiran's character negative... But she isnt...No character in this ff is negative... Only the circumstances are not favorable... Everyone has their own insecurities and differences... Thats human nature... I will try to clear the misunderstanding of Kiran's character in one part...

Thanks once again...

Bani is such a sweet girl. Her relatioship with her parents is just painful to read.

Abhilasha this was a great update, you really got me hooked to this story👏👏
thanks for the PM

Bye
Ranjana

plz continue soon waiting for next update

Poor soul Bani..felt bad for her for having such a painful childhood 😔 ..loved Bani and Krishna's interaction and the relationship they shared....P** was there too 😔 😳 🤔 .....looking forward to reading more.good job Abhi 👏 👏 👏

PS: Don't bother about that "h" you miss every time as I don't care about that at all 😉 😛 😆