FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 14

Hi Abby,

Great post 👏 👏 👏 , thanks for the flashback, atleast it throws light on bani's situation, poor bani 😭 😭 😭 .

Thanks or the pm

Hey Abhilasha,

read both the updates,just beautifully written. you are etching out Bani's character so well, the way you have penned her feelings it just pinches my heart.she has suffered a lot in her small age, I hope one day Jai loves her so much that she forgets all this wounds.will be eagerly waitin for the next part. 👏

preet 😳

abilasha, I read all the parts at one go today and loved it. You write so well with so much cohesiveness and sequence. and best of all you kept the intrigue nicely. At no point did I feel that you were dragging and I only became more and more curious and that was very good. and I especially loved the whole introduction sequence where you depicted Bani's loneliness and her happiness at the same time. It was a very good mix of both and I loved it. Once again another sequence was where Jai breaks his defence mechanism and Bani's innocent responce. Once again a very well penned chapter. There are more but I guess I will save them as I go on with my next set of comments. I have bookmarked this FF and will keep looking out for new updates on this one.

Swathi

Hello Abhi

Nice flashback dear; now it gives u a clear insight about how things progressed and how.

Waiting for the next part.
Please update.

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

1st 😃

thaaaaaaankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Di 😳😳😳 awww... u r welcome 🤗

aww Poor Bani 😭😭😭 I can understand her. thats the start... more to go... whole 11 years... 😉 everything is gonna come in bits and pieces

very well written 👏

umm......a bit short na? 😉 yep... was not planning to start y'day... then thot it was a short... no stretching... so posted 😆 i think the next part will be long... 😳

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
gr88 part

thanks jeena 😛

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Poor Bani! 😭 That's so awful. She never got any attention from both parents. Hun, that was just too short. Please update soon. 😳
thanks... i know its short... but there was nothing more to add in that part... i will try to make the next part long... 😛

Originally posted by: banijai19_life

gr8,continue 👏 when will be jai and bani confrontation 😳

u need to wait for a long time... i doubt... 😳

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
liked it.
poor Bani didn't have a stable childhood and not even the love and affection of her parents...it is sad the way she was treated 😭 😭 😭
plz cont. soon

actually... its the circunstances that their parents were not able to give proper attention to her... thats it... thats y they dint realise it... the question is whether they will realise or not

Originally posted by: suwas

I am starting to hate JAi now for not treating or caring for Bani. As her best friend he should know what he went through as a child & should have made sure she gets all attention at least as his wife. 😕

may be he doesnt know... 😳 may be no one knows...

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

That was so not nice..
aww poor bani..
never got..
what a child needs.. the most..
continue soon please

this is the start... much more to come...

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

😭 I feel so sad for Bani. In her childhood she did not get the love she deserved and it looks like she isnt getting the place she deserves after her marriage.
yep... there is no change in her life then and now...

Great update Abhi, thanks

Lots of love,
Ranjana

Originally posted by: amiee

feel very sad for bani i hope jai will understand her pain pls cont soon.........

he will after some one knocks his sleeping brain 😆

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Poor Bani, really feel for her unhappy childhood. Hope she finds the love she is looking for...

she will get it... but the question is how long...😕

Originally posted by: ejazanita

wow!!!!!!!!!!!! great one............👏

liked the way u hav mentioned the story of Bani's past n all that............. thanks

poor Bani😭😭 she suffered a lot in the childhood n now she is sufferin too after becomin someone's wife...................

plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon n make it long yaar

i am trying but as i post nearly everyday... typing long... consumes a lot of time... 😃 and my brain gets drained... 🤣

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Originally posted by: niruba

poor Bani, had a miserable childhood 😭....so it was Krishna aunty who provided the love that she longed, yep... its true... no wonder she misses her so much....loved the flashback Abhilasha....thanks

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Felt bad for Bani..poor soul didn't get love in her childhood and now her life is in dilemma ....hope her sufferings would be going to end soon....loved the flashback Abhi 👏 👏 👏
thanks khusboo... (c i missed a 'h' 😆)

Originally posted by: j&b84

bani had very unhappy childhood, did nt get the love from her parents and even nw after her marriage she is nt give the love of her husband hope everything work out everything will eventually work out... many more characters to come... till then... enjoy

love the flashback abhi 😊

Originally posted by: pooks

Poor Bani has had an unhappy childhood where she did not get her parents love and attention 😭 and seems like the same has happened with her now with her marriage to Jai. She has suffered quite a bit and its not fair that she has to undergo so much pain during her marriage as well.
People will get what they deserve.. may be a little late... but definitely they will get...

Originally posted by: koolgal

poor bani 😭
she have suffered sooooooooooo much in her young age and even now she is suffering.....
u made me cry 😭 😭 😭
hope u will soon finish her suffering 😊 arey yaar... 11 years ka flashback i need to narrate... but u will c so many characters... our KS characters in different avtar...😆 i am trying...
great part..........will be waiting for next part...
cont. soon

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Hi Abby,

Great post 👏 👏 👏 , thanks for the flashback, atleast it throws light on bani's situation, poor bani 😭 😭 😭 . here lies the need of flashback... many more incidents to come...

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Abhilasha,

read both the updates,just beautifully written. you are etching out Bani's character so well, the way you have penned her feelings it just pinches my heart.she has suffered a lot in her small age, I hope one day Jai loves her so much that she forgets all this wounds.will be eagerly waitin for the next part. 👏
he will... give her the love more than her whole life... but it will take some time... b4 that... we need to c why jai is behaving like that too...

preet 😳

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey........

lovely part thanks

update soon

Originally posted by: swathi

abilasha, I read all the parts at one go today and loved it. You write so well with so much cohesiveness and sequence. and best of all you kept the intrigue nicely. At no point did I feel that you were dragging and I only became more and more curious and that was very good. and I especially loved the whole introduction sequence where you depicted Bani's loneliness and her happiness at the same time. It was a very good mix of both and I loved it. Once again another sequence was where Jai breaks his defence mechanism and Bani's innocent responce. Once again a very well penned chapter. There are more but I guess I will save them as I go on with my next set of comments. I have bookmarked this FF and will keep looking out for new updates on this one.
oops... i am overwhelmed... thank u so much... but dont take me for granted... plz point put my mistakes...

Swathi

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Hello Abhi

Nice flashback dear; now it gives u a clear insight about how things progressed and how.
now... its very easy to guess the aage ka part... 😆

Waiting for the next part.
Please update.

Thank you for such a 🤔 🤔 🤔 i am not getting the proper word... 🤔 🤔 its okay... try filling urself... Thank you for such a ________ response... 😆

The flashback was very well written. Poor Bani, no wonder she longed to be in the Walia house.

Eager to read more. Please continue soon.

BD

Originally posted by: sanam84

Hi Abhilasha, read the whole thing in one go n am lovin it...Jai n Bani's characters are penned amazingly...is Jai on a guilty trip...but he saw how happy Bani was...so why wud he...yaar they say women r confusing n complecated, i feel men r more...Men = Duffers 😆 thats true... men are really duffers... but i dont think jai is duffer here... 🤔 wait let me c...

feel sorry for Bani...good she found JW's family..where she got the luv n affection that every child needs.

awesome writing 👏 👏 continue soon

Originally posted by: bdev

The flashback was very well written. Poor Bani, no wonder she longed to be in the Walia house.

Eager to read more. Please continue soon. i am posting... 😆

BD

thanks everyone... 😳

great part....
awwwwwwww bani is sooo cute.......
y is her mum behaving like this??? 😕
atleast pia supports her 😊
🤔 then wat happened between them........
u r confusing me 😕
will be waitin for next part
cont. soon

aww..Bani is so cuty
but whats her mom's prob 😕
Pia is goody goody.
so Bani's visit to Walia house starts
waiting for the next part 😃

gr88 update 👏