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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful update..
bani finds out that she is pregnant..
i wonder from who?

continue soon

nadia 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ANARLA


welcome Anar.... 😊

this story is funny ... wow... this is the first time i am seeing the comment that this ff is funny 😆 tooo bani chasing jai to office😆 thank god jai agreed varna bani must have taken his hand and dragged him and put him in the car and send him to office. 😆 parata and then throw up😆 mood swings.

4th day bani remebr back.i think she has a slow memory recover.that why remerbed late that she has to do something.

ye jig 😡ate hii dara diya bani koo and she started crying.

so jai is hurt when bani says mera baccha" let him get hurt after all he too has hurted her in many ways.for many days .but hope thier realtionship starts once again and reach a new level of course it will...

continue soon

anar



Originally posted by: nema123

Wonderful update Abhi.... 👏
Jai is realy helping her a lot... 👏 I hope the news will help Bani... and JB will start their relationship 👏
thanks nema... this news will be the turning point of the story... they will realise many things througout the course of pregnancy...



Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
gr88 part thanks...
wow bani got the news that she is pregnent but how..? next part,,, 😉
herslef
supebbb



Originally posted by: niruba

awesome update....at last Bani knows it 😉 good that masi and Dadi are taking care of her......and suddenly she disappeared....I think Jai should start bringing his wife everywhere he goes, what do you think 😆 he would be thinking the same... deffo 😆 pleaase continue soon....



Originally posted by: Pooja_fren

Hey abhi
U always leave us hanging in cliff
Oh! I so love ur FF
I am so emotional attached with it. thats a compliment for me... not a good sign for you...
I am very happy that u updated this fast
hope this trend will be continued 😆 deffoo... not... i update soon only when i get time to type... u know.., oh by chance are you replacing Tropa,,,??
Thnakkkkkkkkkkkk uuuuuuuuuuuuu 😊



Originally posted by: culgal86

hey abhilasha...............

lovely part..................... thanks...

bani got teh news that she is pregnant but why did she say mera bacha............... poor jai he must have felt so bad............. yes... he is feeling bad...

jigyasa is such a pain......couldn't she ask the same thing in a much softer tone................ she doesnt know the real bani... if she knows.. then... u cannot say anything about her... 😆

update soon



Originally posted by: tam2

Lovely update Abhi... liking the way Jai taking care of Bani... 😳 ... ow Bani knows she's pregnant ... it must have hurt Jai when Bani said mere bacha instead of hamara... 😕 ... Jai need to mend a lot of damage ... true... wonder how Bani found out ... Is it Rano or may be Pushkar... next part... u will find how... well looking forward to next part do cont soon... 👏 ...


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: phool527

omg jigz needs to get alife.. and yes bani should have said something but shes not in the mental state right now.. awwwnnn so bnai finally realises shes pregnanat.. great paar.. anywayz great part.. contineu sooon..


Thanks phool527.

Originally posted by: banijai19_life

gr8 part 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!


thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: suwas

Bani knows she is pregnant & is happy aboutit. But why does she say mera bachacha & not hamara. Jay neesd to let her know that they are couple & belong togethr. She is not alone. Liked the way Jay talked to her after Jigs insulting hurting words. jai is beginning to understand her...

Will this pregnancy & Jay's love bring in change is Bani?Waiting for next update.
thanks suwas




thanks swati

Originally posted by: rongna

gr88 part
plz continue soon


thanks rongna...

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Abhi last few parts were fabulous....but getting confused with Bani and her behaviour......so she now knows about her pregnancy but wondering why she mentioned "mera bachcha".....hopefully Jai is going to make her understand what her position in his life is......wonderful read dear....update soon 👏
u know what Cherry... u let out your confusions in one single flow that i needed to read your thrice... 😆 thanks cherry



Originally posted by: mujer

Abhilasha,

Huh?????? Bani knows she is pregnant???

I am one confused person after this update. Was she aware of her pregnancy when she left her home. u will get the answers in the next part... Jai is playing really safe .Its good he is taking one step at a time and I am sure he must have realised by now that his marriage and life will be anything but normal with Bani, surely no less than a roller 😆 i like this last statement... 😆 really true... 😆


Nice update thanks



Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Abhi,

another fabalous update,loved how Jai really making an effort to help Bani even though she sends him to the office.very sweet to see Dadi and Massi lookin after her needs.so she finally found out, hopin with Jai's love and Patience she will come around.lookin forward to the next part. 👏
life is all abouts hopes, Preet... Thank you...😳
preet 😳



Originally posted by: pooks

Bani finally got to know that she's pregnant and was so happy but that stupid Jigs had to spoil everything by screaming...the horrid cow 😡 😡 😡 now that Bani has exclaimed that "mera baccha aaraha hai" wonder how will Jai react and wonder how the both will gel intogether and move forward. lets wait and c... thats all i say... i havent thought about it yet..



Originally posted by: rongna

did bani know that she was pregnant before she left the house???


omg girl... u came back to ask this question 😆 well... you will know in the next part...


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: amu142

wonderful .....luved the way this FF has progressed...i must say EK should hire writers like u from IF-KS forum and incorporate ur stories in her soaps...i can guarantee they will be huge hits................. hey... do u really think so... i just tried to make it realistic... but u know realistic shows and movies... doesnt run that long... 😉 😆

JB relationship is undergoing a huge transition.....both hv to realise their duties towards the other and the baby....hope the baby is born to them when they finally reconsile and talk to each other properly & remove all misunderstandings. it is not exactly misunderstandings... but missing understanding... but it will come soon...

hats off to u 👏 👏 👏 thanks dear



Originally posted by: ragamthalam0

There is really no development in the way bani is ,, and jai is taking care of her but not explaining things using words,, he needs to make her trust him... actions speak louder than words... after all...



Originally posted by: amiee

finally bani knows she is pregnant 😃 me happy for both bani and jai i hope they find happiness now 😳 let c... but those days are not far away...
pls cont soon....



Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

awww so bani finally..

know that she is going to be mom soon.. yep...

it was funny how she said it..

"do u know i am going to have a baby " hehehe it is out of excitement, u know 😳

continue soon plzz



Originally posted by: popeye

Fabulous update Abhilasha... I cant wait for the next part... Bani knows about her pregnancy and is happy about it .. Jai is hurt coz she said Mera Baccha.. I donno who is at fault.. Bani is delutional or childish I cant figure it out... I want them to get closer as a couple and understand each other. They are the only ones who can heal and help sooth each others pains and worries.. exactly the point... Please bring them closer.. Let Bani mature a little and Jai stand by her and help her grow from a child to a woman. she will... hormones will make her 😉 😆
Brilliant update.. please to update soon thanks ra
👏



Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon


thanks janu

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hi Abhi,

Wonderful update, especially Bani realising that she is pregnant, meaning she already knew about it before leaving home earlier, it is so cute... how Bani said it out! Jai has get over this and continue what he is doing now. right...

Can't for your next update! Thanks, thanks Nimmie...

Nimmie



Originally posted by: nadia.s

wonderful update..
bani finds out that she is pregnant..
i wonder from who? the answer is in the next part...

continue soon

nadia 😛


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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi all... I was planning to update tomorrow... So will complete this part tomorrow... i guess...

This one is for you Anarla... 😆

Previous Parts:

Part 1 - Page 1; Part 2 - Page 3; Part 3 - Page 6; Part 4 - Page 9; Part 5 - Page 12;
Flashback 1: (1.1-1.3) - Page 16; 1.4 - Page 23; 1.5 - Page 26; 1.6 - Page 30; 1.7 - Page 33; 1.8 - Page 35; 1.9 - Page 38; 1.10 - Page 41; 1.11 - Page 45;
Part 6 - Page 48; Part 7 - Page 53; Part 8 - Page 58;
Flashback 2 - Page 62;
Part 9 - Page 65; Part 10 - Page 68;
Flashback 3 A - Page 73; 3B - Page 76; 3C - Page 79; 3D - Page 81; 3E - Page 86; 3F - Page 89;
Part 11 - Page 94; Part 12 - Page 97;
Flashback 4 - Page 97
Part 13 - Page 103;
Journey into Bani's thoughts: 1 - Page 107; 2 - Page 111; 3 - Page 114; 4 - Page 118
Part 14 - Page 120; Part 15A - Page 125; Part 15B - Page 129; Part 16 - Page 134; Part 17A - Page 138; Part 17B - Page 140; Part 17C - Page 144;

Here goes the next part...

Part 18A

After three days of sleep, Bani felt so lazy. She felt to be in the bed itself. Jai had been sweet to her, saying nothing, yet doing everything. Whenever she woke up in the evening, she would find him either sitting or lying beside her. It gave her a feel of security. In the morning, she would wake up as usual before Jai and wait for him to get ready, then go down for breakfast. Aditya Jiju, Masi and Dadi kept her occupied.

But today, she wanted to do something… something… but what… All of a sudden, she wanted to sketch something. She immediately called Pushkar. Pushkar was on the way to office.

"Pushkar… kuch kaam do na… bahut bore ho raha hai…" she whined.

"Bani… kaisi ho tum… teen din se phone bhi nahin kiya…" Pushkar teased her.

"Main teek hoon. Lekin I am so bored. Mujhe kuch toh karna hai…" She said.

"Kya?" He asked.

"Kuch bhi… kaam hai kya?" She asked.

Pushkar thought for a while. He did not want to stress her at her condition. Atleast, not now… So he said, "Sirf pending kaam hai… Ab tak koi naya assignment nahin liye hai maine…"

"Oh!" Bani sounded disappointed.

"Jab aayega, tumhein hi toh inform karoonga…" he cheered her.

Bani made faces, then said, "Teek hai… bye…"

"Bye… Apna khayal rakhna…" Pushkar said.

"Tum bhi…" Bani said and ended the call.

Bani walked across the room more than ten times thinking what to do to pass time… but in her case… she felt what could be done to kill her time… Her feet started to ache. She sat down on the bed.

She recalled what she was doing in the past two days. She was doing nothing, but eating and sleeping. Before day… that day too… she was eating and sleeping… before that day… she was discharged from the hospital… Jai had taken her back to this house… Jai had been paying complete attention to her. He ate with her, spoke with her, snuggled beside her, hugged her, kissed her, listened to her… comforted her… He never once raised his voice over her. She smiled at the thought.

Before day… she was leaving for Aligarh… Aligarh… Aligarh…!!!??? Why? Before day… Jai had said that he had married her only for his mother… she was hurt… The thought hurt her again… but she felt as if it was long time ago… That day was their anniversary… Pia and Pushkar had come to wish them… Jai and her had some conversation… Before that… before that… she had no one around her… no one to care for her… she was alone… the thought brought tears in her eyes… She wiped her tears and turned her head. Her eyes fell on the childhood picture on the nightstand. She never guessed Jai would have it with him. She took it in her hand. She looked at herself. She was smiling in that picture. She smiled seeing herself smiling. It gave a feeling that Jai did not dislike her. It relieved a huge burden from her mind. Bani kept the picture back to the night stand and went back to her memories.

Before that… though she was lonely… she had sketching as her companion. She remembered the incomplete sketch… She wanted to finish it… But she had given the folder to Pushkar!!! She needed to get it back from him. She made a mental note of it.

Then before that… before that… that night… Jai made love to her… She smiled at the thought… Before that… Wait… Her thoughts stopped. She was not having her regular monthly cycle…. Her eyes widened. She counted her days. She had once some one and half months ago, but it was not usual. She hit her head. How could she forget such a thing!

She immediately picked her purse and left the house in hurry.

***

She went to the hospital she used to go when she had health complaints in the hostel. She got an appointment one hour later. When she met the doctor, the doctor asked her about her symptoms. Bani told whatever she remembered. She was sent to the lab for some tests. She went and performed the tests. She was asked to come and collect her results at three in the evening.

Meanwhile, Bani went to the roadside dhaba situated near the beach. She used to be a regular customer at dhaba during her college days and also during the Saturdays when she used to come for purchasing and outing. That 'Bhaiya' was a nice friend of her. She enjoyed watching 'bhaiya' making chat, pani puri, pav bhaji… Of all, pav bhaji was her favorite. Seeing her, bhaiya would automatically bring her a plate of pav bhaji. She even used to pass her time by helping his customers during the peak hours. That day, as she had come at a leisurely time, she had a free chat with bhaiya. She informed that she might be pregnant and that she was waiting for the test results. While she was leaving, bhaiya packed two plates of pav bhaji for her. He asked her to take care of herself and come and see him often. Bani bid him 'bye' and went to the hospital.

She collected the results and went to meet her doctor. The doctor confirmed the news. Ban was elated. She was happy that there was someone inside her… for her… whom she could love and who would love her…?! The doctor prescribed some vital medicines for her. She collected her medicines from the hospital pharmacy.

She caught a taxi and went home. All through the way, she was happy dreaming about her coming baby… Baby… Her baby… She touched her belly to feel something. But she did not feel anything. However, she kept her palm on her belly as if feeling the warmth of her baby.

***

Thanks for reading 😳


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Posted: 17 years ago

me first. 😃

thanks for the part that to for me.

it was picturised good in such a way i mean pov of bani.her side of story.so jai have started showing his affection towards her ... slowly sometihng is starting.

now bani knows she is pregnant.ab kya hoga

tom one more part.this is a great news.

i want it now actually as u stopped there.

isliye conintue soooonnnnnnnnnnn

actually i want an update abhi.

anar

Edited by ANARLA - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part abhilasha
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Abhilasha,

,
😆😆 😆 😆 😆 😆,No No I am not nuts
Seriously kill me but I will say it. I waited for an entire week for update and update shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya, not fair. I know I am being very mean 😊 but try and give a substantial material to read. The updates are more like Candy floss, by the time one feels like chewing on it, it already melts in your mouth.

Still a nice update. 😉

P.S:I am thinking about sending moderators a request to decide the limit of words in an update. 😆

Edited by mujer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😳 awwnnnn bani is pregnant and thats how she finds out... sweet.. lol.. anywayz great part abhilasha.. continue sooon yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh so that's how she found out! ... silly me ... 😆 ... she's pregnant obviously she'll realize the changes in her physical being... 😳 ... wonder how she'll react when Jai will told her he knew about it ... well looking forward to next part ... do cont soon... 👏 ...

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