ff Rightfully Mine part16pg 47, end pg 48 - Page 37

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey kamy yaar hum to kaal ki wait karnewale thi lekin tumne tu aaj hi update kardi full and final wah khy baat hai chaal never mind... 😊 😊 😊

It was a fantastic FF babez really loved it especialy sanju and jai little fights.... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Jai touch me not tag....jai khy yaar bani ki tang keech rahi ho... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

After all u did a very wonderfully job with the story line at last jai understood his father true intention to bring JB togeather....
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I hope in the near furture we see u write some more FF will be waiting kamy...πŸ˜‰

Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh this Pia 😑 😑 😑
Anyways, she's out of sight now πŸ˜‰
It was a good end, i really apreciated to read your ff.
Bani and Jai in love to each other, they will become parents in few months.
I guess we can't ask more πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
good ff πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow....a great treat for me....two updates plus an epilogue......it was toooo toooooo good.....I will definately reread this FF again and again....

I really liked sanju's character....very cheerful, hilarious and smart like us (because she was the one who found out bani was in love 😳.....and her fights with bully jai were really funny and cute.....I love your jai in this FF except for one part where he let her go easily....but it's ok, I've forgiven him coz he brought her back, forced her to stay and accompanied her, supported her and cheered her up when she was going though the trauma....overall, another wonderful piece of story from Kamy!

Long vocation?? enjoy your trip but when you return, please remember gifts for us....that is another FF!



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Posted: 17 years ago
nooo.. kamy u cant end there yet.. u just cant.. wow but gret ending hun.. awwnnn so those dumb heads finally realize their love for eachother.. heheh.. great FF hun.. im guessing ur starting another FF.. πŸ˜‰ but im 😭 that ur ending this one..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Kamy, caught upw ith parts 47 and 48. Somehow, I always had a gut feeling that Pia would be the trouble maker 😑 😑 and owuld have hired pushkar to carry out sll the activities asgainst Bani. Jai was a bit slow in finding out but am glad he caught the b**** red-handed 😑 😑 how dare she burn Bani's shop down and then try to kill her. Am glad she got handed over to the police who should thrash her left, right and centre. As for Jai and Sanju, their clashes are always cute πŸ˜† πŸ˜† but in their clashes Bani got to the know the truth of how low Pia went and she finally got the strength to cope up with the loss.

The Epilogue was beautiful 😊 Got see JB settled and leading a happy married life with little arguments and all. And when you portrayed Bani beinf preggers and Jai being the happiest father around, it truely was a beautiful moment. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey kamy... it was an awesome ending.... sanju's character is so sweet... her chemistry with jai is much more nice than that with bani πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

atlast jai's anger with his father vanished away... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow kamy it was a gr8 ff bit sad tt u have ended it but still love this ff was really looking forward for each and every update, sanju and jai where very cute, bani finally found her true love and jai thx his father for bring bani in his life tt so really sweety. no point writing about pia or pusy
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was cute,, pia was really a psycho ,, jai finally told her
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Kamy,

I am so sad that this ff is over 😭 😭 😭 , I realy loved reading it πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ , stunning updates, so sweet, simple and beautiful πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ , well penned emotions πŸ‘πŸΌ .

Please come back with another great ff, look forward to reading 😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hai Kamy

Beautiful updates with a sweet ending πŸ‘

Pia was behind all this 😑 😑 😑 ....poor Bani felt bad for her when she lost her shop 😭 😭 😭

Loved the epilouge....they are going to have a baby 😍 😍 😍 .....that was very sweet 😳 😳

Have a nice vacation and pls start another one soon πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜›
Edited by melonie - 17 years ago

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